NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 29~CHAPTER 34 - Page 2

Originally posted by: lashy

Sandy was missing him 😔

Congratulations for new thread,lashy!😃

Congratulations for new thread,lashy!😃🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Sandy was missing him 😔

One of the early readers for this one. Had mixed feelings first. But now warming upto the races.

But I think this is the best that can be written for a marriage that happened the way it happened. Had you kept encounters and dialogues, it would have looked forced as she is not in that frame of mind.

AMK has to grow on her slowly and she needs to find all the good things one by one. I liked it quite.

Was just hoping that he should not get injured during race. Thankfully no. Else lep would have made an early entry. You know how much I hate lep. 😆

Good going. My super villain Mahender is back and you got him married ?!!!! 😆 The equation with his wife is starkly contrasting but interesting. Feel sorry for the lady.

Strong villains make the story so much better so watching out eagerly how they are going to strike together.

Till then , happy racing !!!!! 😃

Right now I'm in super envy mode. Envious of Heera for having handsome-est, stellar rider as husband. My heart is still dhak-dhaking, like the hooves of Sufi. Shadows merging- another Lashy's signature annotation.

In the opening scene, when Mahendar was flirting with his wife ... I wished, for once, he wasn't the Kameena that he is and he shared that beautiful moment with Durga.

Girl... don't write romantic scenes for khalil. There is every chance your writing tricks us into softening towards the monster too.

Love ya