NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 29~CHAPTER 34

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: selvi1275
Lashy...here i came with so much enthus to read about AMK...but here is devil...🤢
Itz ok ...i'll get back to reading...

Patience shalt always be rewarded 😉

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SHIVANGI

@Shivangi28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Akka- Dare you show that face to us 😡

And yaayyy!! 🥳

Congos for new thread and nowww

Good night everyone.

I just got too busy 😛 😆 Readinggg 😃

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lashy

Sandy was missing him 😔

😡

Such a punishment for my no show in the last thread!😭

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SHIVANGI

@Shivangi28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: lashy

Ok let me put my standard emoticon then

>>> 😆 😆

Sandy first 😲

Shivu, Mitu, Lana, Pallu, Payaliya and any other night owls I might've missed🤗

>>> 🤗🤗

Periyamma so so so sowwie for delaying your train express 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hopefully, the update isn't too much of a drag

Ok love you girls...

Me off to cook something now! 🤗

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Congratulations for new thread,lashy!😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Congratulations for new thread,lashy!😃🤗

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: lashy

Sandy was missing him 😔

😆

nor that am complaining...😳

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jayaks02

@jayaks02

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

One of the early readers for this one. Had mixed feelings first. But now warming upto the races.

But I think this is the best that can be written for a marriage that happened the way it happened. Had you kept encounters and dialogues, it would have looked forced as she is not in that frame of mind.

AMK has to grow on her slowly and she needs to find all the good things one by one. I liked it quite.

Was just hoping that he should not get injured during race. Thankfully no. Else lep would have made an early entry. You know how much I hate lep. 😆

Good going. My super villain Mahender is back and you got him married ?!!!! 😆 The equation with his wife is starkly contrasting but interesting. Feel sorry for the lady.

Strong villains make the story so much better so watching out eagerly how they are going to strike together.

Till then , happy racing !!!!! 😃

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Right now I'm in super envy mode. Envious of Heera for having handsome-est, stellar rider as husband. My heart is still dhak-dhaking, like the hooves of Sufi. Shadows merging- another Lashy's signature annotation.

In the opening scene, when Mahendar was flirting with his wife ... I wished, for once, he wasn't the Kameena that he is and he shared that beautiful moment with Durga.

Girl... don't write romantic scenes for khalil. There is every chance your writing tricks us into softening towards the monster too.

Love ya

Edited by hemakeerti - 8 years ago