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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 34.

Haikus:

1.
Mahinder married
A pretty Rajput princess
"Sigh!" My sympathy..

2.
He with his own work
She with her Parngarh account
Everything settled.

3.
She, at the races...
Lo! acknowledged his adaab
A nod with "Thank you!"

4.
He looks handsome
In his rider's attire
Akbar Mahmoud Khan!

5.
" I bet on Bahadur"
"I've won Begum Sahiba"
The locked eyes converse!

6.
"You both stop staring!"
Carried away by his charm
Jealousy crops up!

7.
The desparate prince
Plans alliance with Khalil
The plot at Manswar..

8.

The story proceeds
With the villain in the scene
Where? How? No one knows..

Karkuzhali.

[Note: Exception to the rule! The no. of syllables in the first line of Haiku no, 5 is six (instead of five)]

So beautiful and lovely, Periamma.. ❤️ 👏 But I loved that first very much... "Sigh!" My sympathy.. ... 👏

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 34.

'That snowy white... and that chestnut brown...' she murmured, leaning over the boundary for a better glimpse 'those two are Arabian racehorses... aren't they?'
'I... I... am not sure, baisa...'
'I... I think so...'

'Yes baisa...'
Two ladies approached her from a crowd standing close by
'They both are purebred Arabian racehorses...'

OMG!! Thanks for visual Periamma.. Yes both are very very beautiful!! ❤️

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Chellam... 😡

Why you are so partial to give all the goods for Villains.. 😡 You're such a devil. . To my horror you gave Durga alike wife to that swine... as if that's not enough... to my horror-est horror she's not arrogant who torture her husband every minute but she is kind lady of who worship husband as god. Huh?? 😡 😡 And there that swine enjoying his new married life here my hero and heroine barely even met once. 😡 😡 Why Chellam Why? 😡 And now that swine is going to renew his friendship with Khalil where here Akbar the chief of intelligence doesn't even know that one kind of swine is still sneakily behind him. 😡 😡

Okay enough that swine... 😈 Let's move to Parnagarh... The race.. The race of minds... The race of hearts... The race of game!! ❤️ My darling Bahadur.. ❤️ You're anything but Pet... ❤️ My heart goes to you.. Hope you're okay.. 😭 Take care my darling.. ❤️ You're the star of the show. ⭐️

Come to Sufi.. OMG! how beautiful you 're.. And the way you're more moving... SO POETIC. No wonder Baisa and Khan Sahib got attracted towards you. ❤️ Thanks for the sneak peek of Khan Sahib's handsome feature as mounter.. 😳 So loving you.. but still I'm partial towards Bahadur... He's my darling.. 😳

And most important thing is who are those MAIDS?? 😡 Newly appointed.. how come they got appointed in Khan Sahib's stable.. that too females?? 😡😡 I doubt their intention from the start.. They Mahendar or Khalil spies? 😡😡 How dare.. eyeing Khan Sahib that too in front of Heera?? 😡 😡 Wait.. Wait... Hey are they Lana and Anindita?? OMG!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

And I'm happy I'm in successful in bringing Sahiba out of her champers to the race.. I know you're wondering what? 😲 If you forgot I kindly reminding that I'm in Bindiya disguise spying Heera and Khan Sahib. Well though I do all sort of dramas but the truth is I would like to loose any number of bet just for them..

Uffo... Heera and Khan Sahib.. ❤️ If their eye games only making me fly up and up.. so high I wonder what will happen to me when they mutually in love so close.. their passion.. their romance... OMG.. I'll be dead. 🤢 😆

Well I spare you for that swine partiality just because of this heart beat racing game.. 😡 😆

Omg

Kal di are you ok na 😲

You sounds so angry

So much anger is not good for your health 😭

Plz cool down 😳

But yes Mahendra deserve this much anger

Disgusting people

Love your suda suda review

Yup bahadur is the star ⭐️

Yes yes we know you are bindiya

And yes thank you for bringing heera out of her chamber 😳

New maids , Khalil spies 😲

Good point kal di

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 34.

'That snowy white... and that chestnut brown...' she murmured, leaning over the boundary for a better glimpse 'those two are Arabian racehorses... aren't they?'
'I... I... am not sure, baisa...'
'I... I think so...'

'Yes baisa...'
Two ladies approached her from a crowd standing close by
'They both are purebred Arabian racehorses...'

Beautiful picture sachu patti 😳

Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
Omg
Kal di are you ok na 😲
You sounds so angry
So much anger is not good for your health 😭
Plz cool down 😳

But yes Mahendra deserve this much anger
Disgusting people

Love your suda suda review
Yup bahadur is the star ⭐️
Yes yes we know you are bindiya
And yes thank you for bringing heera out of her chamber 😳
New maids , Khalil spies 😲
Good point kal di

How come I remain angry when you're around??!! Nah... It's not possible.. 😳 That's just suda suda comment... Or Is it too hot? 😆

Thank you, darling!! Yes Periamma's Haiku is so so apt for you!! ❤️

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
How come I remain angry when you're around??!! Nah... It's not possible.. 😳 That's just suda suda comment... Or Is it too hot? 😆

Thank you, darling!! Yes Periamma's Haiku is so so apt for you!! ❤️

🤗❤️🤗

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Chellam... 😡

Why you are so partial to give all the goods for Villains.. 😡 You're such a devil. . To my horror you gave Durga alike wife to that swine... as if that's not enough... to my horror-est horror she's not arrogant who torture her husband every minute but she is kind of lady who worship husband as god. Huh?? 😡 😡 And there that swine enjoying his new married life here my hero and heroine barely even met once. 😡 😡 Why Chellam Why? 😡 And now that swine is going to renew his friendship with Khalil where here Akbar the chief of intelligence doesn't even know that one kind of swine is still sneakily behind him. 😡 😡

Okay enough that swine... 😈 Let's move to Parnagarh... The race.. The race of minds... The race of hearts... The race of game!! ❤️ My darling Bahadur.. ❤️ You're anything but Pet... ❤️ My heart goes to you.. Hope you're okay.. 😭 Take care my darling.. ❤️ You're the star of the show. ⭐️

Come to Sufi.. OMG! how beautiful you 're.. And the way you're moving... yes SO POETIC. No wonder Baisa and Khan Sahib got attracted towards you. ❤️ Thanks for the sneak peek of Khan Sahib's handsome feature as mounter.. 😳 So loving you.. but still I'm partial towards Bahadur... He's my darling.. 😳

And most important thing is who are those MAIDS?? 😡 Newly appointed.. how come they got appointed in Khan Sahib's stable.. that too females?? 😡😡 I doubt their intention from the start.. They Mahendar or Khalil spies? 😡😡 How dare.. eyeing Khan Sahib that too in front of Heera?? 😡 😡 Wait.. Wait... Hey are they Lana and Anindita?? OMG!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Well I spare them because they successful in bringing green monster in Heera.. 😳

And I'm happy I'm in successful in bringing Sahiba out of her champers to the race.. I know you're wondering what? 😲 If you forgot I kindly reminding that I'm in Bindiya disguise spying Heera and Khan Sahib. Well though I do all sort of dramas but the truth is I would like to loose any number of bet just for them..

Uffo... Heera and Khan Sahib.. ❤️ If their eye games only making me fly up and up.. so high I wonder what will happen to me when they mutually in love so close.. their passion.. their romance... OMG.. I'll be dead. 🤢 😆

Well I spare you for that swine partiality just because of this heart beat racing game.. 😡 😆

Who the Hell dropped tomato ketchup on this cute set of comments?! 😕😉

@bold... 🤣

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 34.

Haikus:

1.
Mahinder married
A pretty Rajput princess
"Sigh!" My sympathy..

2.
He with his own work
She with her Parngarh account
Everything settled.

3.
She, at the races...
Lo! acknowledged his adaab
A nod with "Thank you!"

4.
He looks handsome
In his rider's attire
Akbar Mahmoud Khan!

5.
" I bet on Bahadur"
"I've won Begum Sahiba"
The locked eyes converse!

6.
"You both stop staring!"
Carried away by his charm
Jealousy crops up!

7.
The desparate prince
Plans alliance with Khalil
The plot at Manswar..

8.

The story proceeds
With the villain in the scene
Where? How? No one knows..

Karkuzhali.

[Note: Exception to the rule! The no. of syllables in the first line of Haiku no, 5 is six (instead of five)]

What took Lashy di thousands of words, took you only 8 haikus to express, what can be more amazing?! 👏

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Who the Hell dropped tomato ketchup on this cute set of comments?! 😕😉

@bold... 🤣

Tomato ketchup OMG!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Kawsi, roaming in Bindiya's disguise!!! Forgot about your profession? I am giving you the next couple to be in wedlock! 'Drumroll'...Bahadur and Sufi! 😆😆 Imagine their products all in black but on their head they will have a white spot or vice-versa! Hey Bhagwan, I am leaving the master and dreaming about its pet! 😕

Heera called him 'handsome' to herself! She had her fill of glances of 'certain someone' when he was flaunting himself as a rider in the race! Her heart was beating in her throat out of excitement and adrenalin pumping through her veins!

And meri Bindiya, you were still thinking of your sweets lost in dinner! 😲 Tu bhi na! And Madam, nooo, the maids were not Anindita and myself! I am a' bujiness' woman in my own rights! 😉😃 I am providing all the peanuts to Bahadur, Sufi and all the Arabian horses! I am 'rich' in every respect, specially when it comes to directly dealing with certain someone about the peanut supply. He has given me specifics of the peanuts he wants, the shape and size, the color and taste, how he wants pesticide free organic peanuts, how he wants right timely harvested peanuts...we had a long chat! He even offered me Fruit and Rose sherbat out of courtesy but to keep it professional I declined the offer politely! 😳 But I can tell you I had my eye's fill and saw the noticeable stubble, the fingers that shook my hands, that gruff voice in a deep baritone, and the eyes that can shake you to the core, in which you can lose yourself in the dark abyss! Did you notice all this? Or were you only thinking about your sweets? If so come over in the evening to share notes!

And Anindita you have too many tardies and absences, kothai tumi? Taratari esho. 😃