NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 28~CHAPTER 33 - UPD 3rd May

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Morning sachu patti, kal di and all my lovely sweet friends

Happy Monday 🤗

Hi lana di 🤗

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Good Morning sachu patti, kal di and all my lovely sweet friends
Happy Monday 🤗

Hi lana di 🤗

Good Morning Periamma, Bindu and all my Baisas!! 🤗

Lana!! 🤗

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: al_pal
see I am back with my hunar of typo 😆

I can see it very well!! 😡 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

Chelmsford? I had no idea what you meant... at first! 😆
You meant Chellam?

It's Chellam only and no doubt her first sacrifice is me for her typo 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

How are they going Kal?😊
How handsome is your teacher?😉

Don't ask that. He's anything but handsome. 😭

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lghosh

The forests of Parnagarh I have to habituate myself with the ways to keep up with certain someone! 😉😆

Kausi you specially should know the ways inside the wood since you will be the one following him in his nightly escapades. I don't want to hear, 'sorry I got lost in the woods and couldn't follow him' at the time of sharing notes! 😆

Lashy Sahiba this Parnagarh looks like a green Paradise! Is this in India or Parnagarh of lush green England? 😃 Fabulous!
And Ramaaachandra has given up on me, literally! 😆 He was very noble and great character, so he has no blessings to give me! Haan if it was Krishnaji, woh alag baat hai! 😆

Yes yes your wish is my command when it comes to AMK!! 😉 😆 I've started exploring all secret ways even before AMK arrival at Parnagarh. 😎

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

>> yes di , everything is fine...got thoda busy first with assignment & presentations then with my choking throat...😡

What? 😲 You can't take sick leaves just like that when you yourself agreed to give the wedding feast..😡 Here wedding finished 4 days ago we're still waiting for the feast. 😭

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maheshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#517

Ur both stories should not be only for India form ..it must be published and the whole world should know the real meaning of love..lots of people who always say -I love u..will know that love is not a mere word it is far beyond of our understanding.the dimension u have set if happen in real life that experience will be certainly heavenly.. One question is arising in my mind from when I read the chapter... I mean to ask in whose room they spent their first night..was it heera room or khan shahib's..Lasy sahiba any word to praise u will feel honoured that it is used to the writer like ur genre.. Sometimes I do not comment due to shortage of words..it is very very hard to comments this masterpiece of urs.ur mind is like a power house that generate such brilliant thoughts which we never imagine..the main reason for our desperation for next update is what new thought our lovely writer will bring..

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapter 33

Emotional start

Durga was the only family of heera

She was her world, after her mother death durga become heera mother after her father death she became her father also and the most important things she was her best sister, friend, guide everything.

She was her little world

Only in front of durga , heera open up her heart and can share anything with her without any hesitation.

So i think heera decision to spend some time in durga room was best decision

She is hurt , terrible hurt with khan sahib betrayal but more than that she is guilty to trust ustaad who trained Khalil.

I am so glad she open up and expressed everything whatever in her heart.

From so many days her heart is heavy so when she poured out everything she feels light

I like heera little confession that she don't feel disgust to marry khan sahib and she is not petrified for her future also

Because her heart knows khan sahib too well

Only in khan sahib presence she feels secure since the beginning

And most beautiful thing whenever heera ask durga help she find khan sahib in front of her almost every time after durga death

Such a beautiful coincidence

Heera what a great girl she is

I just admire her most she is not that type of girl who ignore 99 goods things in front of 1 bad thing

And in the morning all her physical pain vanished in the air

After so many days she slept well

All this ways durga told her answer but it take time for heera understand all this.

It always treat to read Khan sahib mens teasing remarks

Very well said by Ibrahim

How can they leave chance to tease khan sahib after all khan sahib marrying girl of his choice

They know this marriage is forced but they also knows khan sahib is best for sahiba

Atleast from all this khan sahib gain some little distraction from his own pain and little happiness

Most important he is first time experienced embarrassment

That was very very good thing

Khan sahib little little things touch hearts like the way he cares for his pet also

How much he is busy but he never forgot how to treat his love ones

Just imagine how beautifully he cares for bahadur than how he care for his lady love

Chachajaan most happiest person

Like the way he come forward to help heera in Nikah

And become father for her

Of course he loves heera like his own daughter but now he is guilty for his action

Finally khan sahib relief

They both married

Now she is safe, now her security matters to Shehzaade also

After Nikah khan sahib little smile and his thanking to Allah prove how much he feels relief .

He is happy and we readers are super happy

Woah heera description through khan sahib is something else altogether

Indeed every girl looks best in her wedding day

Heera feels emotional in front of holy fire after all she knows the significance of hindu rituals

Vaid kakasa and Ratan kakasa both did best for their little baisa

Because of them only she is little sure that atleast some peoples are still there for her .

Her every feeling is so natural

So beautifully describe that part

We can feel for her

Poor girl no one from her family is there for her in her most important day of her life

But khan sahib always there for her

How beautifully he secured her hand in his grip like he promised her he is always there for her.

Not only Ibrahim but his wife and her friends also don't leave chance to tease khan sahib

But thanks to them khan sahib express himself in front of everyone and especially in front of his sahiba

In his short poem he express lot and little bit heera understand that

Lovely poem

Perfect for khan sahib true feeling for heera.

Khan Sahib is the men every girl want in her life

He is more than perfect and true gentleman who respect girl feelings

He is best thing happen in heera life

In form of him heera blessed with every relation

He protect her like a brother, he cares for her little little happiness like he held grand wedding only for heera because whenever she looks back she never regret , he is like mother who think what best for her ,and he is like her sister with whom she can share her every little secret.

Both heera and khan sahib read each other eyes

Like khan sahib read mistrust and fear in heera eyes and heera also knows that he is the man of words , if he promised something he stick with that.

I hope one day heera realise everything that how much god blessed her with khan sahib.

Last part

Heera now become khan sahib Begum

Begum Sahiba how beautifully it sounds na

She became now married women

Toe rings symbol of married women in my culture also

Personally i also like it so much

Lashy di

Every objectives fail to appreciate your work

The attachment we feel for your characters through your magical writing skill is something else altogether