Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 4 uptd chap 27 pg 67 (6 mar '18)

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priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

supurb awesome 😛👏

thanku dear

bal bal bachgai jodha 😃 jajal said right tooo😊

update soon

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Lovely update

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

avi...
Brilliant chapter...
the whole part was so beautifully explained
but i like last scene soo much yaar
jo ki har ek saans ko explain kiya hai har dhadkan sunai de rahi thi bas padhne se sachhi me yaar mujhe ye wala sabse best laga
i enjoyed very well...
i really loved reading this and jo aur ja were blended in a magical way
but peeche se kisi ne satyanaash kar diya hehe
ab next part jaldi se update karo

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NONIE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Awesome chapter Avika😃

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Anonymous

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Res

Pehle toh sorry di itna laste unres karne ke liye 😭

But di I was busy sooo😭😭

Accha I start wid my comment😆

Fabulous chap diii 👏👏👏

Ufff mazaaa aa gaya padhke

Start se leke end tak everything was just perfect 😳😳😳

Pehle toh basketball match was awesome 😳😳

Awww that sweet moment when Jalal gets a glance of his lady love n all his worries vanish ]

That was soo adorable diii

Yipieee Jalal ki team jeet gayi

Yeh toh hona hi tha 🥳😆

Ufff Jalal's gesture left Jo flabbergasted 😆

Well done Jalal 😆😆

Jo ab uski adat daal lo 😉

Jalal hai aisi harkate toh karega hi 🤣

Poor Jalal he felt Jo wants to feed him that too infront of everybody 🤣

Jo is way too smart 🤣

Itne jaldi pacify nahi hogi

Cake Jalal ki taraf karke khud kha liya 🤣

My gosh last part was like a dream for me ☺️

They were so close ufff 😳

Yeh moti beech me kyu aaayi😡😡

Khud yoh suja ke saath romance karegi ghar jaakar aur yaha humare love birds ki kissi tak nahi hone di 😆😆😆

Chalo chado maaf kiya use😆😆😆

Ufff agar ho jaata toh OMG gazab hota us din

Akdha ka exp priceless hota 😳

Ufff I can just imagine it 😳😳😳

Kya didu next time kiss likh hi do 😉😆

Bahut time ho gaya hai ab toh 😆😆

Once again sorry for the late comment

Jalsi se update karo diii aur haa sabke comments ka reply bhi do di 😡😡😡

Itne bade comments likhti hu kuhc toh feedback do uska 😭😭😭

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani
Pehle toh sorry di itna laste unres karne ke liye😭
But di I was busy sooo😭😭
Accha I start wid my comment😆
Fabulous chap diii👏👏👏
Ufff mazaaa aa gaya padhke
Start se leke end tak everything was just perfect😳😳😳
Pehle toh basketball match was awesome😳😳
Awww that sweet moment when Jalal gets a glance of his lady love n all his worries vanish ]
That was soo adorable diii
Yipieee Jalal ki team jeet gayi
Yeh toh hona hi tha🥳😆
Ufff Jalal's gesture left Jo flabbergasted😆
Well done Jalal😆😆
Jo ab uski adat daal lo😉
Jalal hai aisi harkate toh karega hi🤣
Poor Jalal he felt Jo wants to feed him that too infront of everybody🤣
Jo is way too smart🤣
Itne jaldi pacify nahi hogi
Cake Jalal ki taraf karke khud kha liya🤣
My gosh last part was like a dream for me☺️
They were so close ufff😳
Yeh moti beech me kyu aaayi😡😡
Khud yoh suja ke saath romance karegi ghar jaakar aur yaha humare love birds ki kissi tak nahi hone di😆😆😆
Chalo chado maaf kiya use😆😆😆
Ufff agar ho jaata toh OMG gazab hota us din
Akdha ka exp priceless hota😳
Ufff I can just imagine it😳😳😳
Kya didu next time kiss likh hi do😉😆
Bahut time ho gaya hai ab toh😆😆
Once again sorry for the late comment
Jalsi se update karo diii aur haa sabke comments ka reply bhi do di😡😡😡
Itne bade comments likhti hu kuhc toh feedback do uska😭😭😭

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