In the Vale of a Myriad Flowers: A FF (On Hold) - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Then both of us are in the same bandwagon! Whether my mood Is bad, good or ordinary, I am always in the kitchen making sweets. If there is nothing at all, I make at least paysam with leftover basmati rice, condensed milk, ghee, elaichi powder and nuts. It is a five minute sweet and doesn't take any effort but tastes awesome.


I resort to biscuits and cakes when I don't find sweets 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome dear
and emotional in the sametime
Jalal is a lucky child with a rich family unlike jodha
their first met is so good
Jodha has something in her mind that make her scared
Jalal was rude somehow but he was cute again by giving her the candy that he saved for himself
'continue soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
A person is not defined good by his looks but by his nature
Jaimal and Ja were just saved from the mishap
Ja was able to bring some sweetness in her life
continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Wow speedy updates!! Another beautiful chapter. 😳 A name "Jalal" hopefully saved both of their life unknown to them. Jaimal and Jalal bonding is very beautifully written.

Finally our charming prince came and awaken the sleeping beauty. 😃 Hope this kind of 10 mins will get longer in the future for her.

Thank you Kalgi. You are perfectly right. Only that name Jalal saved Jaimal. Jodha's Prince Charming came. These ten minutes of the second chapter will only keep getting longer as time passes. I am happy you liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

The candy game- what a novel way to teach a little boy about the realities of the world. Jaimal's hopes for a better future have not dampened despite having lived through the turbulent times in Kashmir. The fact that he is passing on this message of hate begets hate while love begets love to a little boy who is the face of the future is so heartwarming.❤️

What a relief -the advancing menacing mob scene passed without any untoward incident solely due to the utterance of the word "Jalal" ( convincing the marauders that the two of them were their brethren). So Jaimal's life was spared , without his having an inkling of that fact.

At least Jalal made some headway when he managed to get some response form Jodha. Finally some sweet relief for the troubled little girl as she munched on the candy left by Jalal. 😊

Thank you so much for the update. A very good read it was, dear!👏 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

The candy game- what a novel way to teach a little boy about the realities of the world. Jaimal's hopes for a better future have not dampened despite having lived through the turbulent times in Kashmir. The fact that he is passing on this message of hate begets hate while love begets love to a little boy who is the face of the future is so heartwarming.❤️

What a relief -the advancing menacing mob scene passed without any untoward incident solely due to the utterance of the word "Jalal" ( convincing the marauders that the two of them were their brethren). So Jaimal's life was spared , without his having an inkling of that fact.

At least Jalal made some headway when he managed to get some response form Jodha. Finally some sweet relief for the troubled little girl as she munched on the candy left by Jalal. 😊

Thank you so much for the update. A very good read it was, dear!👏 🤗

Some people are such optimists that nothing can diminish it. They never stop at one place. They keep on going. Even if they have lost something due to some very unpleasant occurrences, they pick up the pieces of what they have lost the very next day and move on with life. A very good example of this I can think of are the people of Bombay. They came back and rebounced to life the very next day after 1993. Jalal has had a head start with Jodha. Their friendship will only grow from here.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Beautiful update

Love the strong, pure ,innocent bonding between jaimal and jalal
Very beautifully written that part
Jaimal teach jalal life lesson in simple and innocent manner
Of course what we give to other its return back to us only
Whatever was it.
Being Muslim jalal saved jaimal from unknown enemy
Very sad things
Jalal presence in orphanage brought light in orphanage kids
Jalal pure love won everyone heart
Finally jodha meet Jalal
For the first time jodha talks with someone rather than sister Susan
Not friendly one but not bad one also
Jodha aloofness force jalal to call her anaath
But i am glad jaimal was there to explain what is right and wrong to.
It was painful to read jodha curiosity to know the meaning of anaath
Finally jalal added some sweetness in jodha life
I hope in future he brings lot of change in jodha life
In the end jodha all by herself found out the meaning of anaath
So innocently she figure it out
Waiting for next chapter
Thanks for pm shailaja di




For the first time, Jodha spoke with someone else apart from Sister Susan. It is the beginning of a true friendship where both will be there for each other. Thank you for telling me what you felt about the story.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read both the parts..! Loved them..! ⭐️ 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sony.S

Awesome chappy dear...
"Anaadh kya hota hai" 😭
Aww My poor jo 😭 😭
Update next chappy soon... And thanks for pm..

Thank you Sony. I am glad you liked this one.

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