The riddle of death... (end) - Page 37

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

Aapne bulaya aur hum chale aaye! 😳

The questioning of the family members continues. Maan was unnecessarily rude to Jalal who was just doing his job. Quite surprising that he did not hear anything considering his room was just across his father's. And why does he detest his father that much,rejoicing at his death?

Of all the ladies Jalal spoke to, Nirmala may have a reason to want Bharmal dead. After all, he had fixed an alliance with a criminal who would have ruined Sukanya's life.

The flashback of Jalal's and Bharmal's convo was quite interesting. It is very understandable why Bharmal was hated so much - for him no one is more important than his reputation and his business. That he was willing to convince Jalal to go against his principles and oath of duty - just hours after being introduced to him as his future SIL- smacks of his utter regard for personal relationships

The case is getting more gripping and I am enjoying it so much. Thank you Stuti for the update.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Waiting eagerly!!!⭐️

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

HEY STUTI DI...🤗...I HAVENT READ ANY OF UR OTHER AKDHA STORY YET 😒 BUT I M FOLLOWING THIS STORY OF URS FROM VERY FIRST DAY...BUT STOP MY SELF FROM COMMENTING SEEING UR LONG COMMENT BOARD 😆🤣 BUT SINCE I M FREE NOW..I WILL TRY TO GIVE A LAMBA WALA COMMENT 😃

Hello Vrindra! I am so lucky that at last you decided to appear in this thread and gift me with this awesome dwesome review!! Dare you ever stop yourself from commenting here. 😡 😆

Thank you so much for reading this dear...

I M A BIG WALI MYSTERY FAN SO THANKU FOR WRITING DOWN MYSTERY STORY WHICH IS NEARLY UNCRACKABLE...THE THING I LIKE ABOUT MYSTERIES A LOT 👍🏼

Your words are very important for me! 😃 Thanks a lot! 😳

LIKE THE INTRODUCTION PART WHICH MAKE EVERY CHARACTER VERY CLEAR AND MAKE IT EASY FOR JASUS PERSON LIKE ME TO TRY TO CRACK THE MYSTERY...OTHERWISE IT WAS GOING TO BE VERY DIFFICULT FOR ME TO REMEMBER AND UNDERSTAND THE CHARACTER...AND I M REALLY LOVING JALAL'S CHARACTER THE WAY HE TALK WALK

I put that part only to make it easy for readers... Glad that it helped you! 😊 And Jalal... Yeah.. I love him too. 😆

BECHARI INSPECTOR SAHANI 🤣 LIKE HOW JALAL SHOW HIM HIS ID AND SAHNI KI NIND HI UDA DALI 🤣

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MAAN GYE JALAL KI OBSERVATION KYA OBSERVATION HAI HALF CASE SOLVE BUT I THINK MANY CLUE ARE JUST TO DISTRACT HIM 🤔 MOREOVER HE IS FOCUSING ON SURYA ONLY JUST COZ HE IS JEALOUS 😒 I THINK SURYA HAS LEFT COZ HE WAS IN THE HOUSE WAITING FOR JODHA AND WHEN HE NO JODHA CAN BE HIS NO MORE SO HE LEFT THE HOUSE 🤔

Half-case is not even revealed yet; dheeraj rakho beta! 😆 He will focus on everyone. Wait and watch... 😉

JALAL IS REAL OFFICER APNI HI GIRL PE SHAK HOW CAN B JEALOUS 😡 HOW CAN HE EVEN THINK KI JODHA SURYA JAISE BOY SE LOVE...HE HAS SEEN HIM HOW SURYA WORK ON FINGER'S OF BHARMAL WITH NO BACKBONE AND HE KNOW HIS JODHA STILL HE DOUBT HER 😡 WHICH IS MAKING HIM DOUBT SURYA AND SURYA ONLY TILL THEN REAL CRIMINAL CAN EVEN RUN AWAY 😡

Pyaar me aisa hota raheta hay! 😉 Don't worry, Jalal will no spare the criminal so easily.

IN WHOLE A FASCINATING MYSTERY...👍🏼

Thank you again 😳

SO THIS MY REVIEW FOR 3 CHAPTER HOPE THEY WERE UPTO UR EXPECTATION...

Each and every review is important for an author gurl! 😡 😆

ON THE WAY TO CHAPTER 4😆

Waiting for that review too

Originally posted by: Naazrt

mind blowing sis ..it's awesome update all chappies are amazing loved it SOOO MUCH ..can't wait to read more all scenes are superb .. thank you sooo much for pm me sis.. continue soon..love you..

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

Another interesting and wonderful update stuti

Thank you for that

It's interesting and so intriguing chapter dear

>>Thank you so much. 😳

Starting is quite interesting with interesting character

>>Yes he is interesting. 😉

God everyone here has their own sets of stories

>>Nehi to maza kaise ayega? 😆

But yes maan is straight forward person

Na na more than straight forward

His father is death but he don't even effect little bit of it

Strange person and practical also

>>He is rude and peculiar too... 😆

But he is so right in his place

His answers are so right

>>Yes...

See i said before in bharmal family everyone has their own motive to kill bharmal

No body likes him

So anyone kill him

God such a terrible person was bharmal

>> Yes🤢

But yes maan also comes under who irritated jalal so much in first meeting

>>Don't worry. 😆 He is quiet a patient officer and will dig out the actual thing without getting irritated. 😛

Conversation with meenakshi and dadi looks simple but ..

Meenakshi recognised surya or she assume him like surya

If only she cross checked by herself

>>She literally was terrified of her husband!

I don't know why i think both meenakshi and dadi hiding something in this matter

Let's see

>>Let's see. 😆

Ok thanks for clearing Sukanya matter

Both Sukanya and nirmala has valid reason to kill bharmal na

Especially nirmala

She has motive to kill bharmal for her daughter

She heard conversation between jalal and bharmal

Or May be she heard everything about someswar

So she has valid reason to kill bharmal

>>Yes she maybe had the strongest motive... Let's see!

Bharmal was so mean personality

He looks everything for his own benefits

How can he do something like this with his own niece

He didin't think about Sukanya future

Only for his own benefits ,he fixed her marriage with someswar

After knowing about his crimes also

Such a bad father figure

>>He is a totally mean character. I made him like that only. 😆

Waise keep on reading, there's a lot more to know. 😉

I hope Rishav is fine

>>I hope too. 😆

Plz stuti Unite both loves birds in the end

>>You still don't know who's the murderer. 😉

And best part was conversation between bharmal and jalal

Bharmal can manipulate anyone with his words

He knows how to convince someone for his benefits but our jalal is just so different from other

I like his attitude

>>I too enjoyed writing this part very much. 😊

Once again thank you for big update

I enjoyed reading it and i am so curious to know further

So please update soon

>>I will try to update soon... Thank you so much for loving this one. 😃

But no scene between jodha and jalal

>>It's really tough to inject their scene in each chapter in a detective story. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

The questioning of the family members continues. Maan was unnecessarily rude to Jalal who was just doing his job. Quite surprising that he did not hear anything considering his room was just across his father's. And why does he detest his father that much,rejoicing at his death?

Of all the ladies Jalal spoke to, Nirmala may have a reason to want Bharmal dead. After all, he had fixed an alliance with a criminal who would have ruined Sukanya's life.

The flashback of Jalal's and Bharmal's convo was quite interesting. It is very understandable why Bharmal was hated so much - for him no one is more important than his reputation and his business. That he was willing to convince Jalal to go against his principles and oath of duty - just hours after being introduced to him as his future SIL- smacks of his utter regard for personal relationships

The case is getting more gripping and I am enjoying it so much. Thank you Stuti for the update.