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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice chapter stuti 😃
Jalal's interrogation toh acchi thi hi but I still feel that Surya is not behind this😆😆😆
Jo ki shaadi us ...😡
Arghhh stuti I'm gonna kill u for this yaar 😡😡
Us idiot ne serious bhi le liya pura pagal hai idiot😡😡😡
Jo is right he didn't care to support her then how can he expect her to love him😡😡😡
Ufff yeh surya ki toh iski wajah se humesha Akdha me fights hote hai 😭😭😭
Hate him ...hate him...hate him...😡
Ayeee stuti if u are thinking of patching up Jo n that idiot lemme warn u yaar tu aisa kuch nahi karegiii😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update sis 👏 loved that part when jalal bhai shouted on gateman 😆😆 Wow jodha told her mother that dadi didn't say anything about their relation ? Wah bhai aisi dadi hoti bhi hain kya continue soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Flawless update
Jalal has started to investigate about surya from whatever source is available till now!
Gosh! What kind of gatekeeper they have?🤢 stupid!
Jo's father had fixed her marriage with surya!😲 That's why surya was weaving so many dreams of their togetherness.
Umm cold war still on between jodha and jalal
Thanku for pm
Continue soon
Edited by kajal2005 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor Surya🥺 bechara bali ka bakra ban gaya. I miss Watson😛, is Sahani the Watson?
Arre jealousy khatam kar di😡😆😆 thodi der aur rakhni thi. Shivani kisi se saath toh bhagegi😆😆. Lets see who is the culprit


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chapter stuti...
I think Surya is not the culprit one. Surya still loves jodha. 😲
Jalal interrogation was 👏⭐️👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for to know the culprit
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliantly crafted with flashback.. So that was it..Mr. Bharmal has promised that patient sukharu will be his son in low..I smell something fishy in this marriage deal..when jalal was calming down u have triggered another bullet jodha revealing Mr. Bharmal marriage deal with surya ..poor jalal..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update dear
I think surya is not culprit. ...
God surya still love jodha. .
Bharmal promise surya to marry jodha to him
Jalal's investigation is nycc
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

"What?" Jalal was now disgusted. His mood is already spoilt after the fight with Jodha, and now this idiot gateman of the house.

>>😆 Imagine we went and pulled his cheeks!

There is surely a print of the wheel of small trolley-bag going out of the mansion amongst those footprints. Surya has definitely escaped through this way last night.

following his instinct he could fathom that Surya had come out of the house using the backdoor, and then through the muddy path of garden reached near the main gate and escaped.

>>>For being a smart ACP, Jalal is doing what is called as the cardinal blunder of criminal investigation😉... having a 'culprit' in mind and then doing the investigation to incriminate him! Or associating all clues with the criminal... many times, this is the reason real culprits are left scot-free while innocents are apprehended.. happens in the west too...

Of course, Jalal has his reasons for it - both evidence and personal... 😉

Anyway, I'm sure he'll find out the asli mujrim in the end (these are just my thoughts as I'm reading the update!😛)


But who was he who came through the window?

someone with sandals did trespass inside the house and the room of the owner of the house as well, most probably from the back of the mansion, via the wall as suggested by these prints.

Hmmm


completely under those charms of teenage she had considered her most faithful friend, the studious and introvert secret poet Surya as the love of her life. It took no time to break the spell

🥺

Years have passed since they broke up, and those days seem like a funny chapter of her life to Jodha now. She has got her own life, the best man for her, and Surya has become a non-identity quite a long ago. But Surya could not come out of that infatuation... how?

🤔

I somehow liked Jodha's reminiscing her past with Surya... strange, but I did

19TH DECEMBER, NIGHT, NEAR THE BALCONY...


"What do you mean Jodha!" Surya's voice sounded like wailing. "Does love need so many conditions? Steady, serious... so many calculations? What are you saying Jodha! How will I move on! I have loved you with all of my entity... I have given away everything for you... I waited for you... and you are saying there cannot be any serious relationship between us???"

Ok this is confusing... When Surya did not even stop her when her dad was proposing marriage and even encouraged her to say 'yes' to keep the peace... then, after so many years, why is he so enraged?😕

"You hate a coward, dishonest and greedy man! You... you will move on with a perfect man and will hate me... You hate me Jodha!! Jodha you..."

Psycho hai kyaa?

Or have they both done something... some gol maal together and Jodha has moved on? And he thinks she holds him responsible for it?


Jodha stayed quiet for a while, then sighed. "Don't worry Maa. Surya is sensible enough to understand. Papa too has no problem with it. Don't worry!"

After all this, Jodha didn't think of telling Jalal that so much had happened? 😕

If tables were turned - if she was taken to Jalal's house and there his family was discussing about him and another girl... his childhood crush... and that also crush was there... talking to him... and if Jodha came to find out about this, by herself, when she was there, how would she feel?

Notty girl! She deserves to be shouted at😡

But Jalal is hurt and hence furious now... and Jodha is not going to bend in front of him anyway!

>>>😕

"Tell me one thing first!" Jalal held her shoulder and asked in an enthusiastic tone, which shows that he has forgotten about his grievance on her just few minutes back. "Who keeps the keys of the door of backyard?"

>>>😲

"My father had fixed my marriage with Surya before we turned up here." Jodha informed, emphasizing on the fury of her voice. Jalal was stunned for a moment, and then he readily coped up. Both of them gazed at each other for a long time with a trial of starting a conversation,

Hai hai... kis mod pe cut kar diyaa scene ko... stuti...

Akele in backyard garage... if only Jalal would get angry... and... corner her and ...

the options are endless

but alas, the sting of ego did not let them to... Then both of them followed their own path.

😡
Mazaa aa gayaa!


Your chapters are very short Stuti ...
Btw, how many chapters you plan to write this one dear? 😳
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful update stuti
But short one
Plz update long one next time ok
Poor jalal
Everyone is just love to irritated him
Gateman is one of them
His answers irritated jalal so much and me too
God knows what he knows and what he is doing there
Jobless people
So bharmal fixed jodha and surya marriage but for his own benefits i guess
Bharmal was not the someone who did things without his own benefits
He tricks surya for his own benefits
May be surya is heartbroken because bharmal agree for jodha and jalal marriage
So out of his anger he threatened bharmal only
But surya is also wrong somewhere
He didin't supported jodha when she needed him most
He prefers to be a Devdas rather than to voice for his love
That's sad
I know that time he can't fight for jodha but atleast he mentally support her na
Surya is loyal towards bharmal
He can't kill him
And jodha is also wrong because she hide so many things from jalal
So many things happened but she didn't share anything with jalal
So jalal anger towards jodha is right
Jalal felt bad and most important things he is hurt
Both jodha and jalal are so egoistic
If only both sit and talk for sometime then so many things are clear
Let's see when this happen
In this story everyone has their own story and problems so anyone can kill bharmal for their own reason
When will you going to reveal about Sukanya past?
Waiting for next chapter dear
Plz update soon
Thanks for this wonderful update stuti

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