~The Unfathomable Love. ~ part12 updated !(07/01/2018) pg 58

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
AWESOME START APPY...
LIKE THIS KING IN MODERN TIME CONCEPT...
MAKE JO AND JA MEET SOON APPY SO THAT JALAL SIT ON HIS THROWN AND HA ALSO INTRODUCE JO TO FAST...😃

THANKS FOR PM APPY...AND UPDATE SOON

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eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Congratulations for new story dear
Awesome story dear
Really loved it
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Thxc 4r pm

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Appy@Ayman

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

THANKS FOR PM APPY...AND UPDATE SOON

Tnq dear..Hehehe Vrinda dear sabr Ka phal mitha Hota h.n I didn't mention DT Jo is alive..!! so let's c d upcoming twist..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: eshalli
Congratulations for new story dear
Awesome story dear
Really loved it
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Thxc 4r pm

tnx buddy..yep..vl surely do..

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divya joshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Nice chptr..
waiting fr jo's entry...
tnccxxx fr pm..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Note:-
In this story India is a ruling kingdom. And Malaysia is independent country with developed technology.. So don't get confuse ..

Part -2:-
~The Malhotra Mansion ~
An elderly man is impatiently walking from left to right and right to left. Then left to right and again right to left and it goes on..
Nilam:- Raj Ab bas Bhi karo,tum itna Kyu fikar Kar rahe ho! Woh log theek thaak Singapore pahuch gye Honge.!
Raj:- Acha!? Yeh Nilam tum Mujhe keh rahi ho? Jo khud kabse phone lekar baithi hue Hain.
Sanjay:- Mom -Dad Ab aap Dono pareshan hona bandh kroge?? Priya ne Kaha Na Ki Woh Singapore pahuchte hi call kregi.!
Nilam:- wahi toh Sanjay ..usne Kaha tha Ki Woh waha pahuchte hi call karegi,par usse gye hue pura din Hogaya h .! Aur abhi tak call Nhi aaya?!
Sanjay:- Haan mom iss Baat se toh Mujhe Bhi chinta ho rahi h.pata Nhi Kaha hogyi?Kaisi hogyi? Theek thak pahuch gyi Bhi hogyi ya Nhi?!
Raj:- tum Dono Yaha bekaar ka time Kyu waste Kar rahe ho? Sedha usse call kro Na.!!
Nilam:- Haan Yeh theek h.main hi use call karti hun..
Suddenly a loud ring of telephone is heard which grabs everyone's attention.. Tring tring ..And then the marathon started between Raj,Nilam and Sanjay to receive the call and finally Raj picks it up.(phone is on speaker)
Raj:- Priya Kaha ho tumlog ? Waha theek se pahuch gaye? Sab theek toh Hain Na??
Nilam:- Kuch khaya ya nahi tum Dono Ne?? Tum Kuch bol Kyu Nhi rahi ho??
Sanjay:- Haan Priya tum aur Ahan theek toh ho Na?? Kuch gadbad toh nahi? Main abhi waha aane Ke Liye nikal jata hun!!
Person on other side of phone:- EK MINUTE!!!!!!! SAB CHUP HOJAO! KOI MUJHE BOLNE DEGA TOH MAIN BOLUNGI NA! DAD HUMLOG THEEK HAI AUR YAHA THEEK SE PAHUCH GAYE.MOM HUMNE KHANA KHA LIYA HAI AUR AHAN ABHI SOO CHUKA HAI..AUR BHAYYA YAHA SAB THEEK HAI ! AAP KO YAHA AANE KI KOI ZARURAT NHI HAI!! PHEWWW..!!! Aaplog bhi Na! Maine thodi Derr kya kardi call karne mein aapne toh Sara ghar sarr par Utha Liye..
Raj:- thank god tumlog theek ho.
Nilam:- Haan! Par kya kare beta Pehli Baar tum Dono Ku Itni durr bheja Hain Na toh thodi chinta hogyi thi..
Priya:- mom main samjh sakti hun.par aaplog chinta mat kro main Aur Ahan bilkul theek Hain.
Sanjay:- Waise tumlog ruke Kaha ho? Wahi hotel Na Jo humne book Ki thi?
Priya:- Haan bhai wahi hotel - Hotel Vinson main hi ruke..Waise Sunny Kaha h??
Raj:- Woh toh tumhre phone Ka intezaar karte karte soochuka Hain.!
Priya:- Oohh
Nilam:- Haan Aur Subha Uth Ke royega Ki didi Ne mujhse Baat Nhi Ki bolke
Priya:- Haan.Koi Baat Nhi, main Subha phir call karungi Na tab sunny se Baat karlungi Aur aaplog Ahan se .. Chalo phir main phone rakhti hun ..Good night.
Everyone together:- good night...!!
And the phone gets disconnected..

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~India ~
Abdul,Surya, Maan & abrar are waiting for there dear friend who called them for an immediate meeting in secrecy..
Surya:- Aisi kya Baat Hai Jo jalal ne hume Itni rajat Ku bulaya h.?!
Maan:- Pata Nhi.!
Abrar:- tumhe toh pata hoga Na Abdul??
Abdul:- Mujhe Bhi Kuch pata Nhi.
Jalal:- Main batata hun
All of them turn towards jalal who is at door.
Abdul:- toh batao Ki aisi kya pareshani aagyi Ki tumne Humsab ko Itni raat Ku bhulaya.!
Jalal:- humlog abhi Patna Ke Liye nikal rahe hai..!!
All of them together:- KYA??????
Jalal:- Haan.
Surya:- par Kyu?
Maan:- tumne toh Kaha toh Ki hum Kal Subha jaeinge.
Abrar:- phir achanak abhi Kyu?
Abdul:- Kyu Ki jalal apne dushmano ko behkana chahta tha .agar him abhi niklenge toh humare dushmano tak humare waha pahuchne Ka paigam Derr se milega.Aur jab tak hum waha pahuch Ke sach Ka pata Laga chuke honge.Kyu jalal. Maine sahi Kaha Na??
Jalal:- Haan Abdul tumne theek samjha.Toh phir hum nikle??
All of them together:- Haan!
With this jalal, Abdul & Abrar proceeds towards their destination i.e Patna which is 11hrs 51 min away..

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~Patna ~
Men1 to Other men's:- jaldi karo.Yeh Sab fasal iss surang mein chupa do!!
Around 30-40 men's started hiding the sacks in their secretive place.
Men2 to M1:- Ab Maharaja yudhistiv ko kabhi pata Nhi chalega Ki Jalal Uddin Mohammed ne fasal bheji thi.aur iss bar maharaja yudhistiv jalal se dugna paisa wasool karenge..
Men1:Haan Aur Ab jalal Ka naam mitti mein mill jaye Gae..
Hahaha Hahaha... And the atmosphere gets filled with evil laughter..!!

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And sry for blunders ,spelling mistake..

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 8 years ago