~The Unfathomable Love. ~ part12 updated !(07/01/2018) pg 58

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
congratulation appy for ur new story

wonderful start appy...i wasn't felling like if its ur first attempt appy...will b looking forward for it...and ha plz update soon soon like me.. 😉

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Appy@Ayman

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--
wonderful start appy...i wasn't felling like if its ur first attempt appy...will b looking forward for it...and ha plz update soon soon like me.. 😉

Tnq Vrinda..ohh really.? thnx for Ur comment ..yeah I'll b posting it soon ...yep I hv to still learn from u to update soon.!!Hehehe..

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Srividhya123

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Ur prologue is super buddy

Congrats for the new story

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Congrats for new story...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

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~The Unfathomable Love ~
The story revolves around two people who are
madly in love with each other but got separated
due to some reasons..What was the reason?? Why
did they get separate?? How will they reunite??
The blue lines indicate people from india and green
and other color lines indicated people from
malaysia
The character sketch:-
Jalal Mohammed:- The king of Agra.loves his
people (praja/awaam) very much and can do anything for
them.even loves his family and friends ..but is
right now in depression state as his wife left him..
Abdul:- friend of jalal. fun ,loving & naughty but
cares for jalal alot..n is already married.
Maan:-friend of jalal..cares about him vry much
.he is little arrogant towards strangers and is
always serious..but smtymz jokes to make jalal
laugh.
Surya:-friend of jalal.is a poliet, understanding and
corporating person ..loves his bestie i.e jalal
alot
Abrar:-friend of jalal.is a poetic person .loves
writing poems.has a good mutual understanding
for friends and care about them..
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Raj Malhotra:-Elder member of Malhotra family.he
is a fun loving person..worked hard to gain his
position and respect.. But is always found in
kitchen rather than office to prepare and try new
receipes for his laadli i.e his daughter.
Nilam Malhotra:-second elder member of
family..wife of Raj Malhotra..is a very
understanding wife n mother..always encourage
her kids for good..and is little over concerned
about her daughter
Sanjay Malhotra:-eldest son of Raj n Nilam ..is a
very hardworking person..handles business in
absence of his dad.Loves her sister alot and is
over protective for her..
Sunny Malhotra:-youngest son of Raj and nilam.is
still studying..is carefree person..does lot of
naughty things n is always ready to give empty
threats..
Priya Malhotra:-Daughter of Raj n Nilam. Is a very
smart girl,crazy n also does lot of naughty things
with his bro sunny.bt also manages her dad's
business ,her college and her lil naughty kid..
Ahan Malhotra:- is an apple of d family.loves his
mom alot n is lil possesive abt her.is jst 3yr old
but understands his mom very well n alwys
support her n love her..
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Rahul khurrana:- handsome charming guy n friend
of priya
Atul joshi:- lil crazy n slow understander like
tubelight..friend of priya
Ajay dewaan:- one of d prankster of d clg..friend of
priya
Disha patel:-sweet, lovely n a day dreamer ..friend
of priya.
Kaira singhania:-stylish lady with pure heart n lil
aggressive ..friend of priya
Rohit agarwal:-very arrogant person ..shows off
his richness..enemy of priya n her gang.
Dinesh mehra:-is a dirty prankster..kicks people
jst for fun..member of rohit's gang
Dhruv devi lal:- one of d lazyiest person in d
clg..loves sleeping n member of rohit gang
Babita devi lal:- sister of dhruv.is very rich n
arrogant lady..wears shots to impress rich ppl
around..member of rohit gang
Reshma desai:-is a silent killer..vl always trouble
ppl n blame it on priya..member of rohit gang..
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These are the characters..n priya Malhotra has
exact face like jodha i.e wife of jalal
Is priya really jodha??
If yes then Did she run away from jalal ??
If u want to knw then have to read more..!!
Can give ur views .. There is an editing done for character name..Prithvi change to jalal n so other characters..
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~Appy.

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 8 years ago