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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

I didn't had rite to fall for the mission
It's not right to choose between loyalty for
Whom, I am faulty but what's my fault when
My heart so stubborn to believe .
I always kept it under high guard in shell
of my hard heart but it's ran to rightful
Owner and betray me for no fault mine
My Heart so stubborn to understand.
How much I tried to stay away even leave the
unique Topaz to lock away to keep away
Memory of Mesmerizing Hazels away but
My heart So stubborn to leave away.
Keeps you in thoughts whole day and
Dreamt about his women in night
My heart so stubborn to fall
Hard for my women...
Each meeting I Pretended Hard With
poised face because I never wants to Hurt
You but my heart so stubborn kept stealing
Glance at stable of your addictive smile.
My lips moved a little and hand curved to Adab
As feel family at feast and speak through eyes
The gesture of thanks but my heart so stubborn
Jumped out at pink hue on your cheek.
I behaved business alike at step of Shrine
And stay unruffled while you wiped tear at
Sleeve but my heart so stubborn fulfilled
His wish at canal to touch your cheek.
When my subconscious mind lost control over
And took you in my arms what I feel all the time
And my heart so stubborn convey silently convey
Everything what I hidden so long from you.
I wanted to marry you to gave a name to our relation
But destiny played so hard, most important was
Your safety but my heart so stubborn
Had trust on you to not move in life.
With no other option left to get through,
Masked my feelings and keep your happiness
At prior I turned you away but my heart so stubborn
Became jealous at reality of you to see as other's.
Moved from all sweet memory to complete
Call of duty with thought to forgot as part of life but
Ah! my heart so stubborn took you along
As companion of my lone journey .

Enjoyed All your presence in parnagrah and relived you
In every nook and corner of Palace but my heart so
Stubborn stopped at vary sight of your painting to
Revived the feel, touch of your velvety skin at canal.
I rode so fast to renew the farmaan and planned to
Fulfils the dream to serve parnagrahis well but
When heard his shahiba's safety at stack my heart
So stubborn became restless to save you.
feel the joy at turn off the proposal my mind make sure of your
safety forever but you know what my shahiba my heart so
stubborn become a traitor in front of Huzoor and announced
You as my family, when I make you my bride with his blessings.
I left with challenge to save you and be practical for next
Moved to stop the brute in playground of mine but no
Sign of you falls so hard to bare and my heart so stubborn
Feel helpless and dying as I lost all.
Angeles guided me at cry of your word and knowledge
of whole life came at rescue in anxious time
After saw you safe I am at peace but my heart
So stubborn wanted to feel life in you.
I cradled you in my arms in front of everyone's shocked
Eyes and slept into our world to care for your health
But my heart so stubborn, be a waiver at your scar and
Wanted to say sorry for turned you away.
Each mark on your body told me what you went through
And felt immense pain at your vulnerable say but to
My surprise my heart so stubborn wanted to pour all his
Love and care when I meet you again.
To answer your query what you asked chocked and dropped
All guard of moral, feel Intense heart bit in your presence
My heart so stubborn, be adamant to confess Shahiba there's
Nothing else that I recall so fondly ever since...
Bag all uncertainty with me to bring you back from
Unknowing world of unconsciousness I left your side
To step into real world but heart so stubborn happily ready to
Answer in person,Still bit with little hope to be with you..
I know how you feel to see your love as a traitor
In front of you with deal for lifetime but what is my fault tell
Me O My love when my heart so stubborn wants to
see you safe in front of my eyes for lifelong.
What is my fault tell my shahiba if my heart
So stubborn become Yours FOREVER...


Excellent mitu di 👏👏👏
Really it is treat to read akbar love journey through your words😳
So beautiful you describe khan sahib feelings
Thank you for this excellent post⭐️⭐️
I like it so much😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
New home, please!! Yey Emoticon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Good afternoon Periyamma, Chellam DA, Bindup, Shruthi, Bindu, Harshu, Payal, Mitu, Manu, Sandy Begum, Adwi,and 6Bs! 🤗

Good morning, Lashy Sahiba! 🤗

What a welcome for our beloved Lashy Sahiba- took me almost an hour to wade through the flood of posts ! 😃 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago

My Remix Rhyme:

The original:

There was a farmer who had a dog
And Bingo was his name- O
B-I-N-G-O,
B-I-N-G-O
B-I-N-G-O
And Bingo was his name-O!

My Version:

We read a novel which is a historical romance
And H B A S is its title - O
H-B-A-S
H-B-A-S
H-B-A-S
And H B A S is its title - O!

In it is a Hero who is very strong and brave
And Akbar is his name - O!
A-K-B-A-R
A-K-B-A-R
A-K-B-A-R
And Akbar is his name - O!

There is an heiress who is pretty and clever
And Heera is her name - O!
H-E-E-R-A
H-E-E-R-A
H-E-E-R-A
And Heera is her name - O!

There is a sidekick who is evil and wicked
And Khalil is his name - O!
K-HA-L-I-L
K-HA-L-I-L
K-HA-L-I-L
And Khalil is his name -O!

We have our author who is loved by all
And Lashy is her name -O!
L-A-S-H-Y
L-A-S-H-Y
L-A-S-H-Y
And Lashy is her name-O!

Karkuzhali.


[/QUOTE

What a charming remix rhyme to welcome back our Lashy Baisa, Periyamma! 👏 👏 👏

We can always count on our darling Periyamma to deliver the goods! 🤗



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

I didn't had rite to fall for the mission
It's not right to choose between loyalty for
Whom, I am faulty but what's my fault when
My heart so stubborn to believe .
I always kept it under high guard in shell
of my hard heart but it's ran to rightful
Owner and betray me for no fault mine
My Heart so stubborn to understand.
How much I tried to stay away even leave the
unique Topaz to lock away to keep away
Memory of Mesmerizing Hazels away but
My heart So stubborn to leave away.
Keeps you in thoughts whole day and
Dreamt about his women in night
My heart so stubborn fallen
Hard for my women...
Each meeting I Pretended Hard With
poised face because I never wants to Hurt
You but my heart so stubborn kept stealing
Glance at stable of your addictive smile.
My lips moved a little and hand curved to Adab
As feel family at feast and speak through eyes
The gesture of thanks but my heart so stubborn
Jumped out at pink hue on your cheek.
I behaved business alike at step of Shrine
And stay unruffled while you wiped tear at
Sleeve but my heart so stubborn fulfilled
His wish at canal to touch your cheek.
When my subconscious mind lost control over
And took you in my arms what I feel all the time
And my heart so stubborn convey silently convey
Everything what I hidden so long from you.
I wanted to marry you to gave a name to our relation
But destiny played so hard, most important was
Your safety but my heart so stubborn
Had trust on you to not move in life.
With no other option left to get through,
Masked my feelings and keep your happiness
At prior I turned you away but my heart so stubborn
Became jealous at reality of you to see as other's.
Moved from all sweet memory to complete
Call of duty with thought to forgot as part of life but
Ah! my heart so stubborn took you along
As companion of my lone journey .

Enjoyed All your presence in parnagrah and relived you
In every nook and corner of Palace but my heart so
Stubborn stopped at vary sight of your painting to
Revived the feel, touch of your velvety skin at canal.
I rode so fast to renew the farmaan and planned to
Fulfils the dream to serve parnagrahis well but
When heard his shahiba's safety at stack my heart
So stubborn became restless to save you.
feel the joy at turn off the proposal my mind make sure of your
safety forever but you know what my shahiba my heart so
stubborn become a traitor in front of Huzoor and announced
You as my family, when I make you my bride with his blessings.
I left with challenge to save you and be practical for next
Move to stopped the brute in playground of mine but no
Sign of you falls so hard to bare and my heart so stubborn
Felt helpless and dying as I lost all.
Angeles guided me at cry of your word and knowledge
of whole life came at rescue in anxious time
After saw you safe I am at peace but my heart
So stubborn wanted to feel life in you.
I cradled you in my arms in front of everyone's shocked
Eyes and slept into our world to care for your health
But my heart so stubborn, be a waiver at your scar and
Wanted to say sorry for turned you away.
Each mark on your body told me what you went through
And felt immense pain at your vulnerable say but to
My surprise my heart so stubborn wanted to pour all his
Love and care when I meet you again.
To answer your query what you asked chocked and dropped
All guard of moral, feel Intense heart bit in your presence
My heart so stubborn, be adamant to confess Shahiba there's
Nothing else that I recall so fondly ever since...
Bag all uncertainty with me to brings you back from
Unknowing world of unconsciousness I left your side
To step into real world but heart so stubborn happily ready to
Answer in person,Still bit with little hope to be with you..
I know how you feel to see your love as a traitor
In front of you with deal for lifetime but what is my fault tell
Me O My love when my heart so stubborn wants to
see you safe in front of my eyes for lifelong.
What is my fault tell my shahiba if my heart
So stubborn become Yours FOREVER...


Mitu dear, that was simply mind-blowing ! 👏

Every emotion of Akbar's wayward heart expressed so beautifully ,affecting us profoundly. 😃

Thank you, dearie for showing us his oh-so stubborn heart!🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago

You are not allowed to help your friend with her homework, Chellam! 😡

( BTW, where are the page numbers, dear? ) 😆



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

You are not allowed to help your friend with her homework, Chellam! 😡

( BTW, where are the page numbers, dear? ) 😆



Such a typical teacher's attitude.
But don't you know that we always help our friends with homework, sometimes do even the whole thing for them.😃 Sneaking notes, hissing answers, doing assignments in the other's handwritings are all our student siddha adhikaar.

Wow Kal! Would have loved to have you sitting next to me in school.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rose, click on the links, they take you to the respective page numbers.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

You are not allowed to help your friend with her homework, Chellam! 😡

( BTW, where are the page numbers, dear? ) 😆



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Rose, click on the links, they take you to the respective page numbers.


And don't we teachers know all the tricks that pupils have up their sleeves when it comes to homework and assignments! Each trying to outwit the other! 😆

Thanks, Sandy - didn't realise that. 🤗

Chellam - that was awesome work ! Have to give credit where credit is due ! 😆 😉


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