NOVEL*Hiding behind a Stranger*Chapt 26(27th JAN)-MONGOL WARFARE PG 1

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
As usual the chapter ended. Oh! how i wanted to read more.wanted our ustaad coming to rescue sahiba and breaking the head of that idiot khalil.😡. Will have to wait 10 more days to see that😭

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Hayooo 😆

Don't worry Divya... 10 days not too long 🤗

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: lashy

No no don't set yourself for anything 😆 I was just saying when HBAS was born in my mind it was a 21st c story

Ok because you asked, I'll let you in on this secret!

You girls made me nostalgic.. ☺️

After NJAPA which was on eve teasing/stalking I wanted to write on another issue plaguing our society today - land grabbing! And that's how HBAS was born...

Two sisters whose father had passed away... had left them a large bungalow and a plot of land in a prime area in Chennai (yes after Hyderbad, I wanted to write a story in Chennai 😆)...
But the land grabbing mafia was trying all they could to get the sisters to give it up

The older worked in a company engaged to an influential businessman (who was supposed to be in love with her)

The younger was partially blind... a social worker... sisters loved each other... watched out for each other... but they were battling threats from the mafia..

She returns home from work one day to find the crime scene... her sister murdered etc.. she hears the last mobile message from her sister asking her to run... that the men were returning soon...

So, with some money/clothes/ land papers she leaves with the driver...

The men start chasing her...

The car chase ends up in a crash... with her stranded in the other side of Chennai... at this point, the driver ditches her saying he doesn't want to be involved in this any more...

Partially blind... midnight in some seedy Chennai road.. she doesn't know where to go...

Rowdies in midnight tea-side shops... beginning to behave not-too-nice... you picture it..

Then, there's one man standing in one corner... quietly watching it all... a Don.. Basha Bhai kinda guy 😆 he stops the bullies... but, doesn't say much after that... leaves...

She follows him since he seems like that seems the safer bet for then... and since she doesn't know what to do..

He turns out to be owner of a small guest house..

Of course, she lives there... hiding from the mafia for a while...

Turns out the Don was actually working for the land mafia... and the businessman fiancee was the one who orchestrated the murder... you get the picture 😉😆

>>But di,is it necessary to find historical evidence for everything? it's a fiction and you always write logical stuff..why can't we go for Lashy Rupantar?

There is some amount of Lashy Rupantar... be it, the knife throwing skills of an extremely handsome & intelligent AMK or the unbreakable spirit and wisdom of a partially blind angelic 16 year old
Worry not... 😉
Why I stick to logic/facts is because I am able to relate to the characters in such a story more...

my my you just won my heart , yet again... Image result for love you animated emoticon

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
won my heart , yet again...

Because I made HBAS historical and didn't stick with this story? 😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: lashy

No no don't set yourself for anything 😆 I was just saying when HBAS was born in my mind it was a 21st c story

you really think i would let it go after hearing this basha bhai version...😉

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: lashy

Because I made HBAS historical and didn't stick with this story? 😆

JI NAHIN...😈

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#606

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good morning sachu patti and all my sweet friends

Have Sunday 🤗🤗

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#608

Lashy di

Fabulous update di

In one chapter you convey so many emotions

And what to say about our leads

No proper words i have to describe their will power

Both are superb

I am amaze with them and i admire them because of their never give up attitude

Both never give up in any situation

Both can to anything to protect their love ones

Starting was super di

The way you describe each and every single things in detail was amazing

We can imagine each scene through your beautiful writing skill

Khan sahib strategy to reach Khalil is mind blowing

He knows he don't have time to breath also so he act fast

He utilise even a single things to reach his destination

And my my i must admit he had mentored some really good men

No doubt in that

He clear everything to his men and he didn't give them false hope also and he clear that they might lose their life also but the way khan sahib men response was just commendable

Khan sahib feel proud of himself to gain such loyal men and cherished that small sense of pride forever

Azeez this men always won our heart

He act according to the situation when situation demand he act like leader and he lighten the atmosphere with his cheerfulness

He never leave single chance to tease khan sahib

In that tough situation he was only person who lighten the atmosphere

Groom , marriage , bhabhijan sounds so good

But khan sahib gentle reminder of reality vanished the cheerfulness

But like khan sahib friends we all hope at the end of it all khan sahib gain what he truly deserve happiness

God forest scene was so emotional

My god my heera

I love her strategy also

She knows she might not come back so she prepared everything for her people

She wanted to utilise even a little hope also in Parnagarh favour

She is best in diplomacy so she wanted to use that at last because she don't have any other options

She is trying to save at least something in Parnagarh to risk her own life

Gauri

I can understand how she was feeling to see heera in that condition

Poor heera sometimes ago she was so blessed and she was surrounded by her love ones but now all of a sudden everything change

She don't have place to go to live peaceful for sometime

Its very hard for heera people's to witness all this

Everybody silently support her

Ratan kaka, Gauri , mohan bana, bindiya each and everyone support heera decision

I salute heera as a women

If only we can learn something from her in real

She feel no shame to admit her mistake in front of everyone

She is true leader

The way she remind everyone to not depend on her for everything was superb

They have to learn fight without her support also

But its very hard for Parnagarhis soldiers to stand back and watch their baisa fight all alone

What a sweet movement between khan sahib and bahadur

Lovely gesture between master and his dearest pet

But bahadur injured

Both understand each other so well

I hope bahadur get well soon

Poor khan sahib

He is really trying hard to catch up Khalil without proper resting and eating

But I am so happy he is in same route which Khalil took

He knows he catch Khalil soon but he is worried for heera safety

I love his silent prayer for heera safety

And here heera praying for her people safety at a same time

And we all pray that both khan sahib and heera pray fulfil soon

And now most sacry part of the update

Poor my heera

She can't even sleep peacefully

She is now afraid to close her eyes also

Why destiny always play dirty game with her

Already she suffered enough

I like heera presence of mind

With her poor vision also she could spot what bajrang and gokul couldn't spot

In that critical state of mind she is so alert

When Gokul didin't return i am so tense and scare

I am praying for him but

Out of all people Khalil reach heera first

Out of all routes why Khalil had to take heera route only

My god Gokul

Why you killed him lashy di

Frist durga then pappu now gokul

Uff i can't take this

God the way Khalil men drag dani is terrible

But but my heera stand strong in that situation also

My my i am impressed with her and i must say Khalil also

Heera attitude annoyed Khalil so much

He was amaze with her attitude

He never see any women carry this new found attitude

Neither she fear nor she mocking at him but she greet him like we greet someone whom we meet generally

She reply Khalil confidently without any hesitation

Khalil blow away by her attitude

But Khalil humiliated her in front of her people

He dare to touch her

He must pay for this

Let khan sahib know about this Khalil then god knows what happen to you

Heera yet again prove her mind is sharper then knife

Both heera and khan sahib good in quick thinking

Whatever the situation both never lose their mind

My heera is best in that

She challenge Khalil and let him only guessing what is going on her mind

Durga after death also she fulfil her promise

She is looking and helping her dear sister from the above

Marwari racer

Heera last hope and durga last gift also

This horse help durga in her terrible situation now this time also same horse help heera we hope

We all pray and hope khan sahib reach this horse and save heera soon

Yes Mr Khalil heera is something else altogether

And perfect for khan sahib

Wait and watch when you know you dare to lay your dirty hand on ustaad girl then you realise what grave mistake you did

Now nobody save you from khan sahib

I am eagerly waiting for that movement

Lashy di once again wonderful update

I really don't have any words to describe your talent

You always make me speechless

I really really appreciate your effort you put in each chapter

You really research lot for this novel

Mongol warfare , leather pouches etc etc very interesting post di

And di one request please now on don't kill anyone na

I don't know why I feel something bad happen to khan sahib mens in future

Both heera and khan sahib suffered lot and still suffering

Now both deserve happiness only

Plz always remind me you believe in happy ending formula

Love you loads for this beautiful novel

Thanks a lot for everything di

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Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#609

Wonderful post my dear Bindu..

I liked these lines..

"...If only we can learn something from her in real

She feel no shame to admit her mistake in front of everyone

She is true leader .."

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"..I love his silent prayer for heera safety

And here heera praying for her people safety at a same time

And we all pray that both khan sahib and heera pray fulfil soon..."

"...He dare to touch her

He must pay for this

Let khan sahib know about this Khalil then god knows what happen to you .."😆😆

Image result for caricature of a little girl warning with her finger

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"..Wait and watch when you know you dare to lay your dirty hand on ustaad girl then you realise what grave mistake you did

Now nobody save you from khan sahib

I am eagerly waiting for that movement ..."

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: karkuzhali
Wonderful post my dear Bindu..
I liked these lines..

"...If only we can learn something from her in real
She feel no shame to admit her mistake in front of everyone
She is true leader .."
* * * *
"..I love his silent prayer for heera safety
And here heera praying for her people safety at a same time
And we all pray that both khan sahib and heera pray fulfil soon..."

"...He dare to touch her
He must pay for this
Let khan sahib know about this Khalil then god knows what happen to you .."😆😆

* * *

"..Wait and watch when you know you dare to lay your dirty hand on ustaad girl then you realise what grave mistake you did
Now nobody save you from khan sahib
I am eagerly waiting for that movement ..."