AkDha OS : Warmth & Wine! Updated. - Page 6

Originally posted by: wanita

Just OS?,...can i ask for more shagun?

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

nice os buddy...

like their sweet confession...

thanks for pm...😃

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Unres

Awesome os

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: duhasaad

Amazing apo. Loved it
Rahim is so cute
Jodha did what she told him and she said the truth interesting
Jalal doubted her so bad
Continue soon buddy

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

That was beautifully written sweety pie 😊

Thanku for pm

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

lil shagun wrote such a beautiful os

>>> Bindu di wrote such a beautiful review to it!
amazing part you chose from the show dear
very very well penned down everything

>>> Thank you so much 😳
of course after all our most intelligent shagun write this

>>> Arrey nhi nhi di... nothing like that...I'm far from intelligent. 😆
starting was so beautiful

>>> 😳
jodha thinking about jalal and his words
of course jalal was most unpredictable person
his words speak different and his eyes speak different

>>> I like unpredictable people! 😉
I always like rahim and jodha bonding in the show

both were sweet hearts

>>> Me too me too! ❤️
rahim unknowingly play Cupid here

>>> The cutest cupid everrr! 😳
sometimes small kids teach us lot unknowingly
if only we learn from them

>>> Bacche bhagwaan ka roop hote hain! 😉
I like the way jodha immediately wanted to clear everything soon
she didn't wait for morning

>>> Yeah I liked it too ⭐️😆
jodha looking at the moon to get some peace that small part was beautiful dear

>>> Aww you noticed that tiny part too 😳 Thanks!
jalal description was amazing

>>> He's always amazing, isn't he? 😎 Shukriya btw 😆
jodha always come to jalal for complain only he he

>>> 😆
how much both claim to hate each other but they can't able to see tear in each other eyes
if this is not love then what is love

>>> ❤️
jodha was hurt to know that he doubt her and jalal was hurt to know she didn't share her secret
finally jodha tell him truth
both knows they love each other only they don't confess but it necessary to confess something to our love ones

>>> I loved that part of the show where they knew but didn't say... like post-Benzo and Badal - Kajri tracks... they were so cute there
sometime silence speak more than words
shagun dialogues are very beautifully written

in fact very impact full dialogues

>>> So so happy to know you liked them. Thanks a lot! 🤗
I really appreciate your work dear
I enjoyed reading it

>>> Thanks so so somuch for noticing every detail and commenting on it. 🤗Your comments are always so encouraging, Bindu di. Love you! ❤️
thank you for pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing os buddy
so beautifully u penned it down
a perfect end to all the mu
loved it

Originally posted by: swetiii

update ur ffs asap

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Shagun, my little wonder! What a mesmerizing OS. It's more like a soothing melody. Their thoughts were flowing like a river. 😳 There Jodha looked at moon for some peace but your story gave immense peace to my heart. ❤️ Jalal - Jodha - Rahim.. Their combo never ever failed presenting the admirable cuteness even in the show. Here also no less. Love you Kannah for this fantabulous os.🤗

P.S: That curious big eyes of Rahim reminded me your dp.😳

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

very sweet and lovely OS, Shagun...u should write often...😉