AkDha OS : Warmth & Wine! Updated. - Page 12

Originally posted by: Monucute

Heya Shagu🤗
Ok, I'm late. So sorry darling.
>>> OMG Neetu... you here! 😲 That was a sweet surprise, buddy! 🤗
Coming to OS.
This was awesome sweetheart. I so wanna see this happen in the show. But nevertheless, if not in show, here we got it.😃
>>> So many wishes left unfulfilled! 😔
I loved the OS. The understanding, the feelings, the love and most importantly the warmth, all are written too beautifully. 😳
>>>Thank you so much dearie... I'm so so happy to know you liked it! 🤗
Title was so fantastic and suited well.😊

>>>Really? Thanks again! 😃

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Shagun! Shagun! Shagun! What an amazing bundle of surprise you are. When I clicked on the pm link, and read the title, I was expecting a sweet but witty chronicle of Jodha Akbar... but what came my way was something more sublime, more surreal...

>>> And you're an even amazinger bundle of surprise, Adwi Sahiba! ⭐️ I was a expecting an outstanding review, but what came my way was something that blew my mind off!

The title to begin with... you know it made me curious! I was almost guessing a hundred different drunk Jalal scenes from the show, then the first puzzling para... and then pat! I had my answer. Warmth and Wine, here both were in their eyes...

>>> In the eyes, that's absolutely right dear! 😳 And I guess you're the only one who caught that bit... since most others thought that title was lame! 😉

Btw, I have spotted few more points, but those are for another time, maybe when you post another os as this... What say?!😉

>>> You've just made sure that I'll write another one, if only to go through something like this again! 😆

Love you loads! 🤗

>>> Love you more, buddy! ❤️ Thank you thank you thank you sooo much. 🤗

Originally posted by: jasminegrewal98

Amazing OS dear, I loved it👏

You are an amazing writer, the details, dialogues, emotions everything was just written so beautifully I wonder why you dont write more OS or even an SS because this was so good!!!

Btw I love the title of the OS it fits perfectly with the story😃

Thanks for the pm hope to see more writing from you love all your posts❤️

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Beautiful OS shagun..While reading the story the scenario is reeling in frnt..U written in a lovely manner..For a moment i thought jo will take tat drink and confess her love..But u just gave a diffrnt end which is so cute...I love tat..The words abt Silence and love are nice..Lyk jo I also love jalal's golden locks..Thanks for the dialogues in English..Thanks for pm Shagun..Sorry for very late..A nice and blissful OS..Waiting for more..

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Such a lovely Os dear

I can feel each and every part of the words spoken by Akdha

You have described their feelings in a wonderful👏👏👏

I know I'm late sorry for it as I was busy with my exams

Originally posted by: -Felicity-

Thank you so much dear! 😳 So happy to know you enjoyed it. 😃


BTW, What should I call you?

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Shelly.Ur name?