SPL OS FOR NAAZ FOR TURNING GOLDIE - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Awesome chappy

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Where is Jodha

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Jodhu

Glad u loved it Vrindu. First of all sorry for no Akdha in this chappy.

About the names, well I was tired with the same surnames like Mohammed, Khan, Rajput, etc. Hence, did the naming like this. But I didnt compromise on the the period of the events in the story.

Thanks Vrindu dear. And you once again commnted b4 I send u pm. Sry for delay in pm.

congratulations for your new os sissy which is for me haha aww Sissy I can't believe in my eyes that this os is for me my god sissy believe me here my eyes gone wide with the happiness you gave me now ..my sissy my love grow for you 100 times more thank you sooo much sissy thank you very very very very much muaaah muaaah muaaah..you know sissy how badly i wanted to jump on you now uff but you are far from me this is not fair my most loveable sissy is far from me ... now coming to story wooow diii the way you described all the scenes fights enemies from two different states i loved your creativity sooo much and your superb imagination is just muaaah where you get all the stunning ideas sissy hmm their is no akdha but fir bhi its damn intresting to read a new concept wow its sooo beautifully written sissy all thanks to you my sissy muaaah muaaah muaaah love you love you love uou alot and once again THANK YOU SOOO MUCH MY SISSY ... continue soon .. and thank you sooo much for pm me muaaah ab ye wali kissi kaha diii maine socho socho..hahahaa..

Awesome..it was just lyk watching a short flim..the historical name,places,wars,revenge,injustice..all are well explaind..its totally gud..the best part was manveer,injustice to him and the revolution against emperor..twist..but this happens with emperors na..?they didnt had a trustworthy..next twist s vaishya king's death..will u continue story.?how jalal acceptd the proposal..?

Congrats for ur new OS..and a wonderful gift for goldie alina..

Wow- a historical romance, Jodhu. Interesting history behind the feud between the Dheeras and the Vaishyas. The unusual names given to the characters add an interesting flavour to the OS.

The feud spanning five generations , though not affecting the populace, has taken a toll on the royal ladies. So Queen Hamida is seeking to appeal to Jalal's sense of wisdom to end it amicably by forging a marital alliance between the two empires. Waiting eagerly to see how she manages to persuade Jalal to agree to her proposal. A very entertaining chapter. Thank you. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Jodhu

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