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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
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Amazing chappy

Hope her MIL have no problem with akdha wedding

Abhi did great by saying that

Jo also revealed her sudden disappearance

Update soon

Hope they r one soon

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Amazing chappy
Hope her MIL have no problem with akdha wedding
Abhi did great by saying that
Jo also revealed her sudden disappearance
Update soon
Hope they r one soon

Thanks for pm

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Thanks for pm

Sorry for the late reply

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Beautiful update dr

Ab to Akdha ko milwa do plzzz

Thnks fr d pm

Update asap

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Chapters 6 to 8 had me tearing for three different people as per the story line. In Chapter 6 , my tears were for Jalal; in Chapter 7 for Jodha and in Chapter 8 , for the little tyke, Abhi. The poor child is caught in the middle of this tussle of the hearts between the adults. My heart bleeds the most for him. Adults are able to suppress their feelings and desires and move on but can children do that? He has been let down by Jodha's empty promises once too often that he couldn't take it anymore and hence his outburst.

But the one good thing that has happened is that now Jodha's MIL is aware of the real situation. Will she be the game changer in this complex relationship ? That Jodhu is entirely in your hands, dear. Thank you for an engrossing update. 👍🏼 🤗

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misty

@misty22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

U manage to tk me into another wrld each time sweety . . Nd now ds enotional breakdown. . . Has forced my tears down. . . It is supposed to be dm. . . Bt fate is makin dm endure ds pain of seperation. . . Both were wounded together nd now time will heal dm bt at dere own deep shells. . Dere promises to life are breaking dere promises to dmselves nd dere lvd ones. . . . How long has she waited nd fr how long he has been hoping. . . Nd d lil soul who is unknown of ds messy situation . . Counts upon every word said to him. . Nd ds relevation left him dumb or regretting her haste. . . But m happy sge unclasped her heart. . . I cd hear dere silebt screams. . . God show mercy on dm nd d lil abhi. . . Else ge won't be able to trust anyone again. . Nd hp now sharda bcms d key to d lock nd unites dm. . . Cnt wait to see dm together . . . . Lvd d update dear. . . It was sooo mesmerising . . . I m jst soo glad . . . To be a part of ds. . . Thanku. . . Really . . Thnku sooo much . . . Lvly . .

Waiting fr next part nd d climax. . . . Muahhh. . Lv u. . . ⭐️

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

amazing
now jo's mil knows the truth
let's see what happens
update asap buddy

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SAACHIGUPTA09

@SAACHIGUPTA09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Awesome chappy

Pls make them unite ASAP😕

Thank God Jo revealed thar y had she called him at the Beach Station😃😳

N now Sharda knows the truth n is totally shocked

Thanks to Abhi for which she knows the truth

I am eagerly waiting for Sharda's reaction

Pls update soon

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SAACHIGUPTA09

@SAACHIGUPTA09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Thanks for the PM😃

Once again please update soon😊😃

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

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Posted: 8 years ago

#150

wow wow wow sissy excellent excellent excellent update muaaah your imagination is just magical sissy haaye its sooo beautiful update I loved it and enjoyed it to the core and the length of your update is just .. sissy its damn wonderful wonderful wonderful thank you thank you thank you sooo much for pm me sissy muaaah muaaah muaaah.. and kaan pakad ke sorry my sissy for late actually my Internet connection is very bad because here is little bit cloudy climate na plzzz forgive me meri kaanch ki gudiya hehe ..