Untold Secrets!!! ~Thread 2~ Chap 20 UPTD PG 126 27th Jan!!! - Page 67

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

Lovely update... Loved the bonding between jalal and maharana..jodha in royal attire but feeling uncomfortable.. So cute..she is like a naughty river, a free bird... Will take time to adjust.. Thanks for pm to this amazing story..

thnx amita...😃ya jo is uncomfortable as she is nt used to dis kind of dress code...😛@bold dat was aptly u described abt her...😉my pleasure dear...glad u like dis stry...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

wonderful update Harshu...👏👏

>>thnx dikshu...😳

so Jalal knows abt Mirza's real face...good...

>>yeah he does...😉

does emperor to knows real Mirza?? frankly dear, I never once believed all theses chapters, that the emperor trusts Mirza blindly... i always felt that he is keeping few things to himself, and just acting with the flow , rather using Mirza the way he wants...and if he really loves Jalal the way u have wrote, then I m sure once he feels Jalal has enough strength to overpower Mirza, and the time is right, the emperor himself will capture Mirza...m i right??😉

>>emperor is kind of aware of mirza he isnt totally blind towrds mirza's act😆i dint actually mention it in my chaps since i really wanted to gv a twist at d end...😉nywys ur xpert in going in depth😆😉so nywys will reveal it in upcoming chaps...and emperor capturing mirza lets c wat he does...?😉

anyway, loving the way the untold secrets r now unfolding😛..

>>thnx dear...😳

waiting for next chapter..

>>will updte soon...😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. Would like to see joja together more😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

wonderful update harshu
interesting also

>>thnx dear...😳

Gopal singh is such a great personality
I really like his attitude
he don't differentiate between Hindu and Muslim friends
he is very fond of jalal
his action shows that

>>yesh he is an intersting personality and is liberal too...😛

OK he is very impressed with jodha beauty and attitude
he is amaze to see her

>>nyone would get impressed wid her 😉

guru charan Left without informing them
seems like they all plan before this
if both jodha and jalal landed in safe hands they left them

>>ya its all part and parcel of a plan...😛

jodha is quite confident guru charan is safe
nobody can harm him
so all rajput supporting jalal

>>yesh all supprt jalal...😃

emperor also know that jalal is only capable for throne but his old principles don't let him to support jalal

>>ya emperor loves him bt dn he has to go by d customs na...so he had to declare jalal as d successor...😃

now jalal also promise to follow rajput
as a son jalal is right
he can't harm his father

>>😃

jodha is feeling quite uncomfortable with new status
she is quite a simple girl
she don't dream about high status
but she can't say no to jalal so she following everything like a jalal begum
so sweet of her

>>ya kya kare she is a simpleton girl na toh its difficult fr her but dn she will get adjusted soon...😳

but she feel scare because she not able to spent time with jalal
both can't live without each other

>>ya both luv each other...😳

love jalal and gopal Singh conversion
gopal Singh is quite curious to know everything
especially about jodha
jalal answering him smartly

>>jalal answered him smartly bt dn gopal is smarter dn him as he sensed dt he was hiding sumthing...😛

so everything is planned before itself
how smartly asma taken jalal ring so that it help them in future
ganga letter is so emotional

>>asma is also smart 😉all belong to intelligent party😆😎ganga is mother na toh emotional hona banta hai...😆

everything they did so far only for jodha and jalal
now both are in save hand so they all left
they thrust jalal so much
I really like their idea about jodha background
of course she is jalal begum so everybody ask about her

>>ya ppl will ask abt jo since she will b future empress so all will have dis curiosity in der minds abt her...😕

but gopal Singh
I guess he don't believe jalal properly

>>ya gopal still feels jalal is hiding sumthing frm him...😆

jalal is right they don't have to worry about Mir Khan and jodha family
Mirza never won over them
now he must understand that
poor my jodha
she is really don't feet good as a Queen
lets hope jalal make her understand

>>of course jalal will convicne her as he knws her well inside out...😉

once again harshu very interesting chapter
very well penned down everything
waiting eagerly for next update

>>thnx dear m glad u find it intersting...😳will updte soon...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Unres Akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Kya politics hai
Update soon Akka
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


Unres Akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Kya politics hai
Update soon Akka


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry for the late reply Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice Update Harshu
But I Dont Understand Politics Much 😆😆 Poor Me
Still Loved Your Update
Loved The Bonding Of Jalal And Maharana
So Today One More Untold Secret Revealed That Emperor Love Jalal More 😊
Hope Emperor Knows His Brother Mirza's Bad Intentions😡
Aww My Poor Jo, Feels Uncomfortable To Live A Life Of Royals But She Adjusting Herself For Jalal
No Akdha Scene Harshu 😡 Not Even One 😭
Thanks For Pm , And Update Soonish



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27

Chap 16


Jalal having taken the turban from jodha he observed, "Maharana, this exchange of turbans only means expressing out our fraternal affection for each other and I shall be gratified in doing so".

Did you research this elsewhere Harshu? How coincidental.. because I was reading up about Mughalian riding shoes (for chapter 24) then I read about the Turban and how it was the most important part of a man's get up... and never took it off... so this came as an interesting tid bit here.. !

"Cheers to the Maharana Gopal Singh".

Nice man... Jalal owes him a lot!

Gopal Singh reluctantly said, "I had no idea about her as I do not have any carriage or palanquin sort of for her to go in".

So cute!


Jodha assured, "There is no need to be concerned about guru dada, as he might have been out only for the things that relate to us, so let us leave without wasting anymore time".

But why wouldn't he say something before going? Esp when situation is so tense! 🤔 He wanted to handover the royal jodi and scoot off...but he could have said something na... silly dada... anyway, Jodha wasn't worried... she's used to him disappearing in the fields!

one fact which only a fewest of the lot knew and that was the emperor within his heart always loved his son jalal, whom he considered the fittest and the only worthy successor for the throne who would continue this legacy of the glorious Mughal Empire.

Then, why didn't he take any measures to protect Jalal's life? Always favouring his other sons? So much so that Jalal was forced to life in exile fearing for his life 😲

Shehzaada Nazim was no more, but that dint hamper their promise since out of their own will they were ready to extend their full support to Shehzaada Jalal if necessary.

😕

As for Maqsood Mirza, then they were not at all seemed to be pleased with him who had all the grand plans of placing his son in law Shehzaada Nadir on the throne.

😈

jalal too had vowed not to raise his voice directly or indirectly against his father

Phew! Wise...

jalal changed his ordinary looking attire into his original one that befitted his position

jodha too donned into a new garb that was perfectly fitting in for the status she was complied too. She had been dressed in a royal begum's attire whilst bedecked with the royal jewelries, everything worked so charmingly wonders on the slender figure of hers and it highlighted the flawless complexion she had.

Again you described Jodha's beauty ... but ignored Jalal... how am I supposed to imagine how he looked 😭

Katti!

What if one day I am deprived of meeting my Lord even for a day?"

😲

She felt her heart twitched at the mere pain of being separated from her grandpa dearest and guru charan along with shailaja with whom she was associated since her infancy.

I do not yearn for this, as my soul longs for the happiness and solitude that I had been living for all my life in that secluded place of Surajgarh".



Gopal Singh's face lit up with a warm smile that did create a few of those wrinkles beneath his eyes and a bit groves in those cheeks as he said, "I think this letter shall answer all your queries".

Awww

Jalal now had realized the reason behind Asma's act and was moved by her presence of mind due to which he was saved from being taken as captive otherwise, by now he would have been a prisoner in Delhi.

Double awww

Jalal by now looked dull as blood drained from his face, it assumed to be pale with anxiety. With avid eagerness in him, he opened the letter that grabbed his eyeballs.

Why was Jalal so tensed even before reading the letter? Personally, I didn't find anything wrong with the message -Jodha anyway was half-Hindu half-Muslim na... brought up with both customs... 😕

But why did her grandpa send such a message? Does that mean he is cutting himself from her life forever?

Persia? 😲 Wait... by any chance she would know AMK then? 🤣

Such a noble, such a graceful and beautified persona she is, with etiquettes and code of conduct of knowhow could only belong to a dignified family, but I am only curious so as to know from which country she belongs too".

I have one koschun... 😆

Is this Gopal going to end up having a secret crush on Jodha?

Jodha had been given all the comfort that the begum of an emperor would live in. A number of maids were in waiting for her who at the drop of hat were eager to obey her commands by all means as they felt it to be honored to do so.

Two of her maids with gold embedded fans were fanning her whilst a few others were keen to wipe out the beads of sweat that formed on her brow. She had been bedecked with all the grandeur from tip to toe with lavish jewelries and heavy finery which she utterly disliked.

Jodha wasn't happy at all, as the otherwise vivacious girl had now looked lifeless and bland.

why no one's wiping the beads of sweat that formed on Jalal's brow 😭 Paavam... he also travelled long na..


I'm waiting to know what interesting is about to come up in next chapter
I didn't think this chapter was transitional at all! 😳
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27



>>jalal answered him smartly bt dn gopal is smarter dn him as he sensed dt he was hiding sumthing...😛


Sabko Jalal se smart banaa do 😡 Hmph!

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