My darlingest Lashy di,
Yet again,you have given me the feel of watching a suspense thriller.Even the second read has such effect and the reason is apparently,your captivating narration and the intense diction.Hats off to you,Writer-e-Khaas!!👏👏
The Farmaan hunt:
1)This was written so brilliantly,di.We knew Akbar would definitely find the farmaan but the finale of this success mission turned out to be more enthralling than I could imagine.I could feel his anxiety,then the slight distrust when he feels he'd read too much into the lines,then the regained confidence and composure followed by a lightening realisation of what Durga's lines meant..and that special moment he holds the Farmaan..everything was just so so beautiful!⭐️⭐️
What an irony this was..it was supposed to be one of the proudest moments for the Ustaad but he felt anything but pride in the achievement.He should have felt huge relief after laying his hands upon the Farmaan but it felt exactly opposite.And what else could convey this better than these lines..
Suddenly, the document did not feel so thin and flimsy anymore. It felt heavy. Uncomfortably heavy, in fact - so much so that he couldn't wait to unburden himself of it.
'A proud moment?' Somehow, he wasn't sure this was an achievement he was going to be proud of.
2)I loved loved loved the 'aadab' that was offered by the Ustaad to the elder heiress❤️He is such a gentleman who respects people for what they are irrespective of the status or age.I couldn't help feeling bad for Durga,once again.The fact that she was a mere 17 year old who had so much of life ahead but her right to live was snatched away in the most barbaric way possible boils my blood and I feel helpless.
Then his attraction towards Heera's painting,the dilemma and struggle with himself to refrain from touching her portrait,those peculiar emotions that only one person is capable of stirring up in him were something beautiful beyond words.Quite intense too.Along with Akbar even I felt nostalgic reminiscing those carefree giggles and smiles which have abandoned her lately!
The moment I read abt those magnificent portraits..this edit posted by Nams long time back flashed in my mind..I love this one very much!
Heera and the swine😡😆
Just as Heera had,even I thought the reminder of his TWO promises by her would leave Mahender with no other option.But its the shameless,over ambitious guy we are talking of.I so hate him,di.Well,it would be foolish of him to let go of a golden opportunity that knocked his door itself in the form Chittaranjan..but I can only have hatred for him!😡
My,my..how many tactics he used to convince her..but Heera's gracious retorts and the repetition of his own words numbed him for a while!😆 You simply rock,my dear!👏
He might be a stellar actor but we are lucky that Heera could recognise that he was only an actor and his only concern was Parnagarh's wealth.When I had felt so angry and agitated knowing his true intentions..then how can Heera not go through all those she is currently going through.No wonder,she felt relieved that Durga was no more to witness the dirty reality!
I feel people like Khalil are less dangerous than backstabbers like Mahender.That monster doesn't pretend to be an angle.But this guy has successfully fooled all the Parnagarhis and their Baisas😡😡
I'm excited to read how would our Heera expose him or cancel the wedding even if his true colors get exposed later!
Pappu😭
What am I supposed to write about Pappu.It was his part that moved me to tears.His convo with his mother was heart wrenching.Poor guy thought his Samarth bhaisaa was annoyed at him.He only wanted to spend few mins with Akbar.Not a wish so great or difficult to be granted.But his last wish remained unfulfilled..😭😭
Even on his death bed,he ensured other children have their share of joy with the repaired toys.How considerate the kid is!
I didn't expect you would end this character so soon.I couldn't believe what I read.Such a shock it was to know of Pappu's demise!When I pondered over the reason why you introduced him..I understood it was to reveal the past of AMK and bring a lil change in his priorities.Had Akbar fulfilled Pappu's wish,there wouldn't have been this conscious change of mind whose impact was not a momentary one..it's not restricted to fulfilling Azzez's small wish.But it's related to a bigger and the most important decision.A decision that influences lives of so many people.So,its not going to be an easy one for Akbar.
Must say,Pappu was one such shortest lived character who brought/would bring a drastic change in the plot.
The last point is abt Azeez..he understands his master cum friend very well.He could sense the moral dilemma Akbar was going through.I like this guy(Hope Shruti doesn't mind..I only like him,nothing else😆)
Lashy di,I haven't quoted much lines as it was really difficult to choose the best.I'm sorry if it sounds monotonous..but trust me,every line had a great impact on me and its impossible to choose few!
Thanks for this update and pls update soon!😃
Edited by Bindu. - 9 years ago
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