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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

u just took a difrent concept..the feelings of a normal guy/girl who s gonna marry..tats the touch of the os..the way ja wait for a girl and he fails everytime by approaching them..u knw i was laughing while reading..they both fear about the future lyf with their partner..ja changes frm tea to coffee witnes his lyking 2wards her...then the part where they had a convo in phone s nice..they r very eager to speak to each other..u ended the story with a question..tats unique..it wll be a yes na..?i really want to knw what they speak to each otr..u gave a story which s happening in everyday life with ur words..nice and thanks for pm..

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

So what if he said yes to his ammi or she said yes to hers... they can still say yes to the question 'Do you think we should meet again?' 😉

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Beautiful os dear n thnxx for pm

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: lashy

yep😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: dellaakdha
a lovely OS..
>> Thankyou😊

payal was the os written by u..?
>> Yes..😆

really i didnt recognize it..though i m not well in identify author via story..but really ts story s diffrent frm all ur writing style..
>> he he..

i think there was one story where jodha s worried for her future by witnessing her bhabi's marraige life and no jalal in tat story..sorry i forget the title..tat's diffrent in ur writing..this story s other side of the coin
>> That os was- "Can't buy me love"😃

payal..really xpecting more no of os frm u..
>>🤗

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

sory fr d late reply payu...had read wen it was posted but dn did read again so dat its easy to comment...😉it was really a diff concept frm u😉loved it...u were simply saying cant write simple concepts but u have wrttn so beautifully d tghts going in jalal's mind and dn in jo's😛😉if both have said to der resp mothers dn defo it should b yes from jo too afterall handsome guy defo she wont refuse...😆

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

>>>> Yes it's different from my other work.. Not only you but no one recognised my os.. Don't know I should be happy about this or sad because as a writer, I failed because my old readers too couldn't recognise my writing..😆

Actually out of all one shots I read, yours and Lashy di's were the only two whose authors I had recognised. In fact, there is this particular nuance in your writing style, very typical of you... he opened a door and tossed a blazer on chair... kinda like this. No one else i know uses this style and it has a sweet crispness about it 😃

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sharmacatty


Yep.. wrote many stories on love shov.. This time wanted to write something realistic as you said, end me honi to arranged marriage he h😆😆

Yaha yhe haal h🤔

Thanks for reading!😊

But it was so good reading something like this from you, Payal. Nicely written with a cute concept! 🤗