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Hello Guys I am dearly sorry for the late update. It's just that school has been going really hard, anyway tons of people pmed me and asked for it to turn into a FF, so here it is but if it was still and SS this would have been it's last update. Like I said this was supposed to be and OS but turned into more I need some suggestions on what to do next in the story. And one more thing this update contains THE LOVE CONFESSION, might be suprised about it but please it has a huge romantic update at the end. Most of it is Jodha's thoughts tho!


Jalal couldn't wait any longer. It had been months since he had this feeling called love for Jodha. Before he even met her he had the tingling sense that connected him deeply with her. This was the time he thought, he had to confess to her no matter what even if she didn't feel for him he had to get this karz off his mind. All these thoughts ran in his mind when the Hakima went telling him she would be awake any minute now. And like she said Jodha's eyes started to flutter open.


Jodha looked out at her surroundings and the first sight that caught her eye was Jalal peering at her with a worried look in his eyes. Jodha was about to get up and question him on the current happenings. But Jalal stopped her and told her to lay still.


Jalal started breathing heavily, no women had made him feel like this before. He finally mustered all his courage and started speaking to Jodha.


" Jodha begum." Jalal began but Jodha opened her mouth to speak Jalal raised his hand.


" Nahi Jodha Begum, today I will talk and you will listen. I called myself a heartless man, but you made me realize that every human has an heart. You taught me that no human is bigger then then another we are all equal. All our strolls in the gardens and outings made me realize on how cruel I was and my love for you. You made me realize that my heart was with me the whole time, right here in my chest. But you told me one thing wrong Jodha Begum." he held her decorated hand to his chest.


" My heart doesn't go dukh, dukh it says jodha,jodha. Hum aapse behintha mohobbat karte hain Jodha Begum." Jalal poured his heart out to a shocked Jodha.


A million thoughts triggered down Jodha's mind. Her heart beat raced. Was he just joking, no she thought the sincerity in his eyes was way to real for him to joke around with. Her heartbeat started to race. She was pretty sure she liked him to. But she needed time, to think time to know what was happening.


" Shenshah, humme waqt chaiye." Jodha hesitantly replied.


" I can wait my whole life Jodha Begum, adab." Jalal replied leaving the room.


When Jalal left the room his presence still lingered, I love him for sure thought Jodha. Her deep thoughts were interrupted by a maid's entering.


" Kunwari sahiba, Maharani Mainavati is awaiting you by her palki, everyone's khema is packed since Rajkumari Savitri and her groom have done their prayers. In other words we need to unpack your khema." the bahndi told her eyes lowered. Jodha set her maroon dupaata and set off to meet her mother.


When Jodha reached Mainavati and Hamida's palki. They tried to console her but jodha told them she didn't want to talk about it and sat in her palki lost in the thoughts on Jalaludian Muhammad.



The night went by fast. Jodha collapsed on the bed as soon as they reached by nightfall. Jalal however was with Bharmal in the supreme court and when he came to their chamber he saw Jodha's note laying on the pillow.


You can sleep on the bed.


He smirked and gazed at Jodha's peaceful face on the bed. Jalal layed on the bed thinking, I know you love me Jodha Begum.

*The Next Day*


Jodha felt like decking herself up today, she always does. The moment she woke up she saw herself tangled in Jalal's hands, anyone who saw them could say they had a wild night. She quietly and gently removed herself from Jalal's hands and hurried towards the hamam, calling out to her bhandis, for some reason she felt comfortable with Jalal's hands wrapped around her.


When Jodha's bhandi came out of the hamam, Jalal opened his eyes and asked the bhandi to get a matching levas for him that matched Jodha's. He didn't bribe her today he was way to lost in the thought of Jodha, and the fear on what if she said no. Jodha quickly asked the dasi to put her hair in loose curls and a puff and asked moti to get the heater, her hair turned out wonderfully. She quickly got dressed ( her stomach shows) and did her make-up quickly for the mehndhi function. She zoomed on and wore her set and placed her tikka into place and ran off to the function. Not aware of Jalal watching her the whole time wearing his new green and gold kings coat smirking.


Jodha was walking down the hallway after dancing and getting her hands filled with mehndi. She was just minding her way walking down the hall going to her mothers room to see the painting her mother had gotten painted of her and walking back to the function again. But little did she know that Jalal would be waiting for her. Somebody put a hand on Jodha's mouth and pulled her with themselves into a non-visited corridor, Jodha couldn't do anything because her hands were decked with mehndi. When she saw who the face was she calmed down and the person removed their hand. Both of their bodies squeezed in the corridor.


" Shenshah, aap yahan, what do you want." Jodha questioned him with her eyes wide open.


" Jawab chaiyhe ( I want the answer)." he told her smirking.


" I have an condition." Jodha replied teasingly.


" Hukam sar aako par." Jalal replied impatiently.


" Find your name on my hands, then I will tell." Jodha told him smiling and forwarded her hands out towards him. Jalal impaitenty started searching for her name all across her hands. But then a plan came to his mind.


" What is this Jodha Begum, you have written someone else's name on this." Jalal told her with fake anger. Jodha widened her eyes and and nodded her head no vigorously.


" Jhoot, you are plain out lieing to me Jodha begum." Jalal said turning his face away into the curtain. Jodha quickly protested and turned his face to her hands with her elbow showing him his name in the centre of her palm, him name deeply designed, Jalaludian. Jalal then took his hand off her waist and caught hold of her hand.


" Found my name Jodha Begum, now humme humare jawab." he smirked at her.


" That so not fair Shenshah." his begum flared to him.


" Keep your words Jodha Begum." he told her smirking once again. Jodha looked down. And then in a fain voice she murmured.


" Hum be aapse prem karte hain Shenshah." She shyly told him. Those words were like music to Jalals ears.


He put a hand on her chin making her look up and crashed his lips into hers, lips that were made for each other.



Hope you Guys Enjoyed! Give ideas please and thank you!








Edited by jazzxxqueen - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! What a beautiful confession of jo ja. Waiting eagerly for next update😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Unres
Amazing chappy
Confession is superb
Love it
Update soon buddy
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P


Unres
Amazing chappy
Confession is superb
Love it
Update soon buddy


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Posted: 8 years ago
Not liked but simply luved it... awesome dear... continue soon & plz pm me when u update next
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing
Jo admitted her love
Jalal is so cute
update asap buddy
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow,finally the much awaited confession is here! Loved it,dear!😃
Being a creatively challenged person,can't give you any updates,but would love to read more!😳

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