NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 14~CHAPTER 19 - Page 7

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Thank you Harshu..

🤗

Aunty.

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 19.

The story goes ..

The Chapter nineteen is emotion filled

The author has taken care to build

How the two hearts which blended yesterday

Have hopelessly parted when they meet today..

How she has portrayed the scene is so wonderful

That it makes the readers' eyes tearful

The lead pair are puppets in her hands

She manipulates them to act as she commands!

Both the lead pair leave for their destination

Each is different from the other in their direction

But both do have something in common

Their hearts are heavy as if they weigh a ton!

The teaser created a suspense about the expectant chapter

And the suspense was for her when she met him later

She stood before him emoting her feelings

But what she received from him was not any word of healing

He was not the one she saw before

This was some one else who gave her heart the sore

Strange that the man who gave her the pain

Is sorry for what he did and for what he would do again

He decides to go in search of the Farmaan

She goes to Bansi to be with her guardian

Leaving her heart here with all the memories

He, on his errand with the heart heavy with worries

Thus we see the author's flair for presenting

The scenes she has chosen with the style astounding

Maintaining the suspense till the end

With warnings about the arrival of someone she has penned

Let us see who would the new entrant be

We will wait to watch the Katputli

Enjoying the dexterous working of her hands

Unwinding the knots well she has planned!

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: lashy

Zhanna you've had no idea how much we've missed you...

Sandy -awww😆 Chellam making you cry, is she? Join the victim gang!

Stuti...why are you celebrating😆

Harshu yes it was teen teen 😳 I loved all three of them, but I am absolutely gobsmacked by one in particular...the one where he overlooks the lattice screen...how did u find one so perfect... I am over the moon... Dil kartaa hai keep looking

Periyamma aaa aaa🤗 where were u ... We all missed you... Love your beautiful poem so so so much... So touching!

Sorry for the rushed reply... Will reply in detail... Typing from a boat.. So...itnaa hi possible for now

Can see 2 errors in the update but can't correct them😒

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Night!

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

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This is the chapter that I dreaded - the inevitable brush-off. It was necessary for his sanity and her safety. How can we not feel their pain? 😭He understanding everything and she nothing.

Lashy Sahiba , your ability to vividly portray the anguish of the conflicted souls is really supreme. 👏 If it was your intention to drive us to tears with this chapter, congratulations , you succeeded. Bowled over yet again by your impressive storytelling. Thank you.🤗👍🏼