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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 19.

The story goes ..

The Chapter nineteen is emotion filled
The author has taken care to build
How the two hearts which blended yesterday
Have hopelessly parted when they meet today..
How she has portrayed the scene is so wonderful
That it makes the readers' eyes tearful
The lead pair are puppets in her hands
She manipulates them to act as she commands!

Both the lead pair leave for their destination
Each is different from the other in their direction
But both do have something in common
Their hearts are heavy as if they weigh a ton!
The teaser created a suspense about the expectant chapter
And the suspense was for her when she met him later
She stood before him emoting her feelings
But what she received from him was not any word of healing

He was not the one she saw before
This was some one else who gave her heart the sore
Strange that the man who gave her the pain
Is sorry for what he did and for what he would do again
He decides to go in search of the Farmaan
She goes to Bansi to be with her guardian
Leaving her heart here with all the memories
He, on his errand with the heart heavy with worries

Thus we see the author's flair for presenting
The scenes she has chosen with the style astounding
Maintaining the suspense till the end
With warnings about the arrival of someone she has penned
Let us see who would the new entrant be
We will wait to watch the Katputli
Enjoying the dexterous working of her hands
Unwinding the knots well she has planned!

Karkuzhali.

Periamma, we were so waited for this only. and as usual.. you've very beautifully expressed. ⭐️⭐️ Thanks, Periamma!! 🤗

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

When did this happen????😲

Here comes the Jealousy Begum!!

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: harshu27

it looks like lashy is dancing on kals head🤣🤣

Yes she is!! 😒

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Zhanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Dear Lashy!
I'm very glad that I can read you again. It's amazing thin expression feelings of Heera and such sorrowful continuation! Her grief and sadness, her first and rejected love! And this is after all her the terrible loss ... But she still remains in blissful uninformed: she has not yet been forced to choose between duty and loyalty to Parnagarh and her love.

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Here comes the Jealousy Begum!!

Remember, AMK has Jalal's face.😡😔

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: lashy
OMG Harshu's 3 3 musings and comment...
OMG Chellam read sad part 3 times and cried on AMK's sleeve
OMG Sandy said it's like poem
OMG Mitu said it's realistic

Finally... I thotted it would be boring... but it wasn't phew!

i was like wen did i make 33 musings😆dn realised dat u meant teen teen musings...😆😛

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 19.

The story goes ..

The Chapter nineteen is emotion filled
The author has taken care to build
How the two hearts which blended yesterday
Have hopelessly parted when they meet today..
How she has portrayed the scene is so wonderful
That it makes the readers' eyes tearful
The lead pair are puppets in her hands
She manipulates them to act as she commands!

Both the lead pair leave for their destination
Each is different from the other in their direction
But both do have something in common
Their hearts are heavy as if they weigh a ton!
The teaser created a suspense about the expectant chapter
And the suspense was for her when she met him later
She stood before him emoting her feelings
But what she received from him was not any word of healing

He was not the one she saw before
This was some one else who gave her heart the sore
Strange that the man who gave her the pain
Is sorry for what he did and for what he would do again
He decides to go in search of the Farmaan
She goes to Bansi to be with her guardian
Leaving her heart here with all the memories
He, on his errand with the heart heavy with worries

Thus we see the author's flair for presenting
The scenes she has chosen with the style astounding
Maintaining the suspense till the end
With warnings about the arrival of someone she has penned
Let us see who would the new entrant be
We will wait to watch the Katputli
Enjoying the dexterous working of her hands
Unwinding the knots well she has planned!

Karkuzhali.

beautiful aunty...👏sply abt d leads which u mentioned abt der destination was amazing...👏

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yes she is!! 😒

😆

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karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Thank you my dear Kausi, and Bindu..🤗

I had to attend a seniors' meeting this morning, and after that I had to cook dinner. I didn't have time to read Lashy's Chapter 19. Only after dinner, I had time to sit before the computer..

Periyamma/Aunty.