NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 14~CHAPTER 19 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Then fix a different face for AMK and have him. Lashy, fix up one soon. 😈

Who wants a brooding touch-me-not anyway? 😡

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Wait, wait...he is not a touch-me-not any more.🤔 He was so touchy touchy in the canal. But then he is a big liar. He said that he didn't remember anything, while he was remembering only 'the thing' all night in the forest.🤣

>>> 😆The thing? What thing?

He's a man... he has a pulse... lots of testosterone... immensely attracted... add it all... and you know what happens!

Okay.okay. go and cry on his sleeve. He will then tell you that he doesn't even remember who you are.😈🤣

"Kausi??? Kausi whom?? Sorry Sahiba. I'm unfamiliar with the name. I have pressing matters to attend to. Having come this far and having grabbed my sleeves to weep most unexpectedly, you are welcome to a lunch - my chachajaan's pilaaf after which you can leave immediately. "

Originally posted by: harshu27

😆actually 1 of d new character has already been introduced in my previous updte bt her name wasnt mentioned i think 1s u will read d updte u will knw which character m talking abt her name is mentioned and wid details in dis chap...😆

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 19.

The story goes ..

The Chapter nineteen is emotion filled

The author has taken care to build

How the two hearts which blended yesterday

Have hopelessly parted when they meet today..

😭

How she has portrayed the scene is so wonderful

That it makes the readers' eyes tearful

The lead pair are puppets in her hands

She manipulates them to act as she commands!

I don't the story does!😭

Both the lead pair leave for their destination

Each is different from the other in their direction

But both do have something in common

Their hearts are heavy as if they weigh a ton!

Like everyone else... I loved these 4 lines!

The teaser created a suspense about the expectant chapter

And the suspense was for her when she met him later

She stood before him emoting her feelings

But what she received from him was not any word of healing

She must have felt so humiliated... after being made to feel so 'special'

He was not the one she saw before

This was some one else who gave her heart the sore

Strange that the man who gave her the pain

Is sorry for what he did and for what he would do again

yes

He decides to go in search of the Farmaan

She goes to Bansi to be with her guardian

Leaving her heart here with all the memories

He, on his errand with the heart heavy with worries

Beautiful

Thus we see the author's flair for presenting

The scenes she has chosen with the style astounding

Maintaining the suspense till the end

With warnings about the arrival of someone she has penned

👏

Let us see who would the new entrant be

We will wait to watch the Katputli

Enjoying the dexterous working of her hands

Unwinding the knots well she has planned!

🤗 beautiful stuff, periyamma

Karkuzhali.

Originally posted by: lashy

your history-mein-mystery is making kichdi of my memory... ok I shall go read it and decode it!

Originally posted by: lashy

You sound just like 5 year old Periyamma's Sandy Begum whose grapes are sour because she can't reach them 😆

It is fun, right. To be able to speak like one without concern for peripheral niceties. 😃

Originally posted by: lashy

Searching for Adwi

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Lashy di...heartbreaking update💔 .Till end I thought Heera won't leave but .And when while leaving Heera thought Akbar Khan Sahib would stop her ,I actually thought he is stopping her .I was like then realized and was😭 .

I really don't have anything to say for what Khan Sahib was best for her ,according to him.He thinks she would be safe without him.But may be if Akbar knew about Mahendra then he would have stopped her or planned something else😕.Today I am really missing chota Faizan,he was the only one who knew about Mahendra na...good thing Sayyid is trailing her,given that unexpected visitor...who is he?Most probably Mahendra 🤔 . At least he would know her whereabouts till she reaches Bansi.

Their parting scene was heart wrenching😭.The pain, helplessness,sadness,can't-tell- you-the-truth it all took me to NJAPA where Jo did something like this with Jalal... to keep him safe.Here Heera came with so much hope and he just shattered it with his indifference.Was feeling suffocated seeing her.Worst thing can't even blame him.

Best thing how beautifully you have written that scene⭐️ felt like I was standing somewhere in that room watching them...feeling dejected with her and helpless with him.When she left,part of me wanted to go after her to see how she is dealing with it and other wanted to stay with him.There I realized I love both equally😲...for this update though😆.

And the opening scene was .Khan Sahib's practice session...you said he was good with bow and arrow but this good hitting targets in moonlight😲...loved that part.❤️

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Goodness!!! 🤣

Be it emoticons or emotionally draining tales - this lady never seizes to mesmerise me

Originally posted by: lashy

Arre he is a very normal red-blooded male (Chapter 7/8 describes his feelings I think)... he knows if he lets himself get involved with a woman, he'd get close😉, which is why he's kept himself at a distance... mainly, he doesn't want to bring children/family into the life he's leading... that's why...

All other woman he could fight the attraction off, Heera he couldn't!