Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 3 uptd chap 20 (pg 88) 2nd april - Page 15

Aww such a cute update really love it indeed avi u killed it with this update

Amazing, superb, mibdblowing. I got so engaged reading the chapter as though everthing is going on in front of my eyes. Especially loved the sweet banter between joja. The canteen scene was superb where jo was finding it difficult to handover her gift for jalal. Her excuses for being in the canteen was hilarious😆. It happens you see when you are attracted to someone you become so uncomfortable and try to avoid that person even though you want to be with him all the time. That restlessness, happiness of jo has been very well depicted by you😳 . I did not want the chapter to end😕

hey avi finally time mil gaya commentbaazi karne ka
thanks for the pm yaar
so so so lovely chapter avika
very well written yaar
waiting for next part
loved it very much
update soon...

avika Di
thank you so much for amazing update
despite of your bad health you update
I really appreciate your dedication Di
love you
plz never stress yourself for update
whenever you feel good than update
we understand Di if only you told us about your health
now update is so beautiful
you really beautifully penned down everything
now both jodha and jalal move one step further in their relationship
love is such a beautiful feeling
those who experience this they know better
jodha started to feel for jalal
jalal is the one who make her forget her pain
this thing make jalal special for jodha
sujamal and moti both best brother and sister in law any one get
poor both worried for jodha without knowing their sister is in another world
moti understand jodha so well so that's why jodha share with her everything
finally jodha told her everything but moti notice something else in her face
she now understand jodha started to like jalal
her face glow telling everything
kheer movement is touching
bonding between jodha family is strong
they can do any thing to make other one smile
moti started her teasing session
but she give her best idea to thank him
poor girl just now she remember she hug him
she don't have any idea what effect her act do to jalal
jalal remember their blissful movement
he know his limit where to proceed or where to stop
I just love this factor in him
and because of this jodha attract towards him
she don't feel bad after hugging him
because she know he don't take as wrong
love the idea of her to thanking him
poor girl she do lot of to make that sweet dish
first she have to make it without informing moti and than poor girl she bunk her important lecture just for him
love canteen scene
like the way she irritated after seeing jalal gang
Abdul is so funny but I like his character
Di the way you describe jodha is just beautiful
jalal checking her out
but he is little bit jealous to see jodha and surya
yeah he know they are both friends but as a lover he is jealous
both jodha and jalal conscious in front of each other
oh so jodha waiting for him in outside canteen
jalal knows that
and jalal teasing session start
he make her situation worst
love the line of jalal is really something in between them to hide
uff jalal na
when he started to became diet conscious
woah she make for him badam halwa
no no she don't make her bhabhi made
hai na avika Di
in love everybody started to like everything
like jalal started to like ghee
how can he don't eat na jodha made for him he know that
he don't want to share also
but he love to tease her
how much he disturb her in class
poor jodha how much she frustrated
God his long list things which he don't like
finally he say that how much he like that halwa in his sweet way
which make blush jodha
both are so adorable
till now I love all things but after this you added rukaiya
why you added about her
now she plan something to separate that
their love story not even started
but I know in the end everything end in good way
once again Di I enjoy reading your story
you describe each thing in detail so that we imagine them
but I miss something here
you always added love quotation na but this time you don't add
waiting for next chapter
thanks for pm

Hello avi diii ...
I missed u sho much 😛 😊

But itne se epi se pet nhi bhara ... 😆 😆
Chlo koi na kam chla lete h
.. 😃

Jo all happy nd blushing ... 😳 😆
Moti sujamal got worried when jo didnt notice them ...
ab kya kare .. Jo is busy in jalal land ... 😆

Moti assured worried bro that she will talk to her nanad ...

Jo told moti about her happy mood except ahem ahem part ...
Apne liye vo bhi ahem ahem hi h ..
Smjha kro dii ... 😆 😉

Moti teased jo ...

Jo suja teased moti for kheer ... Poor girl 😆

There jalal too thinking about jo nd her hug ...
Bete tumhe toh psnd h ayega hi jalu ...
🤣

Jo prepared halwa for jalal ...
To say thanks only ... Or kuch nhi ... 😆

Jo bunked her class nd was going to meet jalal but boom ...
Jalal was with his gang ...

Nd wow wat an excuse ... Jo came to clear her doubts of business ...
Wah wah ... That too from surya 🤣 🤣

Jo gave halwa to jalal ...
But jalal being jalal ... Teased jo that he is on diet 😃 😆

Jalal relished halwas akele akele nd msg jo that halwa was too much sugary etc etc ...
🤣

Agr m hoti jo k place pe ek mukka marke sara halwa bahar nikal deti pet se 🤣 🤣

Jalal again teased jo ..
Jo blushing blushing ... 😳

Ruku ... 🤢
I think ruku called the same person who is coming to live at jalal's place ..
maybe ...

Update soon ..
Dii salima ki progress bhi dikhao na jldi ...

superb ..just superb...i loved the bond moti,jodha and sujamal share..they are wonderful...the way jalal teased jo was awesome and the retrot jodha gave back in the corridor leveled the score...this ruq will never leave us either it is show or ff...

An awesome chapter dear

Diii ..
Mera comment pdha ???

Wow jo celebrated her birthday with her family as well.. loved halwa part...jo so e nervous nd teasing her..ja got to know it's jo who made halwa still played with jo Wonderful update.. continue soon nd do pm

Superb chapter n thnxx for pm