A wonderful update avika..Sorry for being late..its too late..it s a beautiful update..i m reading the whole chapter again and again..and falling for this jalal and jodha..the way u penned down the feelings of jodha and jalal is nice..her nervousness,his little jealous,her thoughts for jalal while speaking to a star in balcony..all r well written..the bond btwn sis in law and bhabi s nice..moti s always reason behind her hubby and sis in law's happiness..they both r lucky na..?teasing part btwn moti and jo s nice and nv oly jo realisd tat she hugged him and here jalal s all happy and relishing the day spent with her...jo didnt realise her love but jalal..?he like her but the way he s jealous ,doing all teasings,finding way to come closer to her..i hope soon he ll realise his feelings..i lyk u way of writing the dialogues and the finishing of particular scene..the most adorable part s jalal's messages and jo's irritating experesions..is the guy ruk phond the one bhairam mentiond in last chap..?thanks for pm...
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