Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 6

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Superb banner payal.

>> Thankyou dear😃

Its not that no one liked the ending.

>>> Everyone felt bad for jalal na..😆

But kya karein. Ja without jo or jo without ja feels so incomplete. This has happened after watching joja movie and serial😆

>>> I know but in this os, I didn't mention about love, neither in banner. If you notice I did write 2 lines about love and lust. and in this case, It was lust.

In starting I wrote that she didn't reply his texts so obviously he wanted/ cared/ feel about her but today suddenly she came and threw herself on him. Afterall he is a man and he gave what she wanted from him WITHOUT knowing the reason.

It's not that jalal was sad in the end. He was embarassed and felt used for sex. That's it.

When a couple broke up, there's always a reason. She thought once that should she take it seriously when she already had so many issues, the answer was "NO" and she left😊

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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payal
what are you thinking my dear?
arre you update os just today so plz wait for somedays
everybody must busy in their life so when they all free they definitely going to read
this month everybody is busy because of festivals
sometimes like button don't work or sometime they forget to hit like button
plz dear don't lose hope
you know how much we are waiting for update of your stories
even lashy Di is also waiting for God update
plz look at positive side at least you get 34 likes
plz payal update your stories
this is my humble request

nice update
I don't understand why Jo leave jalal
why Jo come to when she was frustrated
and again leave jalal
please update second part of os

Welcome back to writing, Payal...🤗

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Lovely emoji's manu😆

Yes.. I know dear😃 but everyone has their own point of view na..😛

Manasi, I explained in divya's reply.have a look if interested😊

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thankyou so much,Cindy🤗

That day you were also asking me to write so here I posted😃

Thanks for reading dear. I am glad you liked it.😊

Thanks again Payal 🤗

First of all...let me tell u how happy im to see u back that too with a bang ...and i really mean when i say this

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

RES DI😉