Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 17

Originally posted by: AkankshaENRIQUE

Hi Di... 🤗

Originally posted by: avika444

Hahaha

...thanks for the note payu ...

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Don't say bye yaar Payal ... now i'm afraid of it .. u say bye n then u are gayab for months ... i sure had a doubt abt the ending thanks for clearing it ... and plz update journey yaar plz plz ...

Originally posted by: avika444

Wow ...so good to see payalia in form ...

So when r u updating ur stories ?? And which one r u posting first ??

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

oh tat's a gud note..and thank u for it...it was just needed for many as the author's and readers thought/view sometimes differ based on the situations..it ll clear the doubts regarding the end..atfirst i thought u ll give a sequel reg jo's decision but u gave it as a note and i lyk tat...waiting for ur updates payal..

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Well finally I read it...

>> Good!😆

As usual its hottt update...

>> Thankyou😛

Jo left out her frustration on jalal... 😲

Well I don't want talk about jodha but I don't like jalal leaving her after all this..

He should definitely teach her a lesson..

Its just my opinion..

>> 😲

So he should make her lie for round 2 for revenge, this time??😆

If u really want to give second update for this I would love to see cunning jalal hmmm Payal's jalal hopefully...

>> Payal's jalal

but I am happy with this ending na.. I can't write next part for this..😛😆

Leaving the last part I loved it..

Very hot.. ummm... 😳

My payu always rocks.. 👏

>> Thankyou so much,sweetheart🤗

What a reentry darling...🤪

Will wait for ur other stories tooo..

>> My darling❤️

Thanks for writing again..

Love u catty di...🤗

Muahhh...

>> Love ya❤️🤗

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

I am happy to see u again Payu..
Waiting eagerly for your all updated...
I don't know when u will give update??
>>> Thankyou Anji!😊

Updated Beyond Innocence yesterday but didn't see my readers except one or two

Os is dizziling hot...
Each n every line describes nicely...
Good job Payu..

>> Thankyou so much!😛

Last para is emotional..
Poor Ja..
Why jo left him aftet making love..

>> Why she left-Please read a note on page 18 for clarification..😆

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice explanation Payal😃