Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016)

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: manu_ak
Payal now that u have started writing again can i expect a chapter of journy from u in near future ??? Its a request plz do try n update journey ... i really miss reading it

yesh.. You can expect

I will for journey, very soon😛

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

So I got it right! 😎 😆 You should make it the official punch line of the OS...🤣
>>> Yes.. it suits more than those lines, which i wrote on banner of this OS😆

I know yaar...even I think so...sab kahaan se kahaan pohunch gye...aur main wahin ki wahin...😛😆
>>>> was just kidding re..😛

Accha I wanted to tell you ki m using IF from phone and images aren't visible to...Hence no comments on youe edit thread and banner. That'll come later...😃
>>>> Ohk dear.. 🤗will be waiting for your comments, specially on the banner of this os😉😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

nice one payal...bt I would say... 😃 I actually don't like the concept of one night stand when at the end the lovers depart 😭 or yaha tumne wohi kar dia yaar...rula dia yaar...bechara...socha tha woh wapas ayi h...n tumne isle dilke 1130 pieces Kar die... 😆 bt your writing as usual too good thi...very got n sensous 😳

They were Ex-lovers dear and yes everyone has their own opinion, so it's completely fine if you don't like this thing/concept😃

he he 1130 pieces.. 🤣 I don't think so.. because he was not hurt, rather I would say he was embarassed and felt used.😊

Thankyou so much. I am glad you like my writing🤗

Thanks for reading and dropping in,chandrima😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: shyana3
sorry for late reply
amazing and sexy update
want to read more stories
thanks for pm

Thankyou so much,shyana😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: dellaakdha
Hot hot os..sensous..1st happy to read ur os aftr long time..u can be able to continue ur stories also..pls update ur FF's..many of us are waiting..in ts OS i had lot of questions while reading..but at the end i came to conclusion tat they were lovers,jo left ja,on her birthday she's frustratd and needs some relif,oly he can give so she came to his house..but our hero is a gud boy he thought tat she came back and when she said i have to go..he was lyk oh my god we just did tat..why..?ha ha..jo s very cool and casual..when she was going she s happy but she dnt want to hurt him or herself by being with him.?ts s what i got..am i right payal..?sry if i interpretd wrong..but ts s super hot..thanks for pm..

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Awesome OS Payal🤗
One single night ☺️ title,banner and ur narration☺️☺️☺️
Oh my poor Jalal he was confused...nerrvous... and hurt at the end😕
Jo used him as an outlet of her frustration
She said good bye to him..he was embarrassed .. feeling bad for Jallu 😒
I thought she was a selfish girl . but she was a strong girl😉...its not easy to leave after tasting😉a delicious handsome manlike jallu😳😆 perhaps her decision was right she was too frank with him
Keep writing payal👏
Thanks for pm 😊😊

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

oooh payal diii its sooo hot omg iam sooo happy that finally my payal diii is back on writing iam loving it diii its superb fabulous amazing I have no words diii really no one can beat you on writing its my bet love you sooo much and sooo sorry for late diii ...and that pics was aweasome sooo hot pic.thanks for pm diii..

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Enjoyed reading it, Payal...

very different... 👏

I don't agree with what she's done... because were the tables turned and the guy was using the girl after dumping her, we know what we'd call him...

Nothing to be proud about what she's done... there is bold and there is reckless... this is not bold, this is the latter... as long as HE is not responsible for her problems, why keep him in the lurch?

But it still does make for an interesting read... 😉

Now when are you updating GOD? 😛

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago