Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016)

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
Good morning payal
look
50 likes and may you get many more
now happy
I told you
plz never lose hope
be patient always
love you

and I hope I don't annoying you because of my continues nagging

I love you too, darling🤗 and no.. you are not annoying re.. You are a sweetheart🤗

yes.. I checked after reading your comment😆 Thankyou dear😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: melovesja

Welcome back in full swing😃🤗
🤗🤗

Haye your bold jo and lovely jalal.
he he.. bold jo and lovely jalal.. i hope you like them😛

Without specified we can understand her pain which she wants to share with jalal in that way.👏
thankyou so much, mitali 😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Awesome OS Payal🤗
One single night ☺️ title,banner and ur narration☺️☺️☺️
Oh my poor Jalal he was confused...nerrvous... and hurt at the end😕
Jo used him as an outlet of her frustration
She said good bye to him..he was embarrassed .. feeling bad for Jallu 😒
I thought she was a selfish girl . but she was a strong girl😉...its not easy to leave after tasting😉a delicious handsome manlike jallu😳😆 perhaps her decision was right she was too frank with him
Keep writing payal👏
Thanks for pm 😊😊

Res for reply😆

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: sharmacatty


Thanks Shagun🤗

Okay, I read the second half of the OS since the ending was much discussed. 😆

Only one line for the entire thing, "Why should boys have all the fun?" 🤣

PS : I know it wasn't allowed to read this...😛

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Okay, I read the second half of the OS since the ending was much discussed. 😆

>>> You can read the first half too.. starting I mean😆

Only one line for the entire thing, "Why should boys have all the fun?" 🤣
>>> Yes.. Yes.. Yes.. That's what I wanted to show🤣

PS : I know it wasn't allowed to read this...😛
>>> Oh koi ni.. tumhari age k bache kaha se kaha pahunch gae aur tum abhi bhi india forums pe he atki ho😉😆

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Manali

@manu_ak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Payal now that u have started writing again can i expect a chapter of journy from u in near future ??? Its a request plz do try n update journey ... i really miss reading it

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

So I got it right! 😎 😆 You should make it the official punch line of the OS...🤣

I know yaar...even I think so...sab kahaan se kahaan pohunch gye...aur main wahin ki wahin...😛😆

Accha I wanted to tell you ki m using IF from phone and images aren't visible to...Hence no comments on youe edit thread and banner. That'll come later...😃

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
Res payal 😉

nice one payal...bt I would say... 😃 I actually don't like the concept of one night stand when at the end the lovers depart 😭 or yaha tumne wohi kar dia yaar...rula dia yaar...bechara...socha tha woh wapas ayi h...n tumne isle dilke 1130 pieces Kar die... 😆 bt your writing as usual too good thi...very got n sensous 😳

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shyana

@shyana3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

sorry for late reply
amazing and sexy update
want to read more stories
thanks for pm

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Hot hot os..sensous..1st happy to read ur os aftr long time..u can be able to continue ur stories also..pls update ur FF's..many of us are waiting..in ts OS i had lot of questions while reading..but at the end i came to conclusion tat they were lovers,jo left ja,on her birthday she's frustratd and needs some relif,oly he can give so she came to his house..but our hero is a gud boy he thought tat she came back and when she said i have to go..he was lyk oh my god we just did tat..why..?ha ha..jo s very cool and casual..when she was going she s happy but she dnt want to hurt him or herself by being with him.?ts s what i got..am i right payal..?sry if i interpretd wrong..but ts s super hot..thanks for pm..