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Posted: 9 years ago
I knew it!!! I knew you would shock the hell out of me!!! I definitely did not see it coming!! I figured he was going to be someone important but not the Ustaad himself!!
But, you've made the story more intense. This is going to be fun to read. It's more like watching. I can't wait to read more. Akbar, told Shehazaade that he will lay his life for him! Now, I find it very interesting. Is he really going to do so? Or is he going to continue protecting Harka, like he did with the prince. Was the promise to bring himself back to his former self and senses. He knows his loyalties have changed. Even Bahadur has noticed so.
Now the question, how long before the prince does so. He already suspects. Well sort of anyway.
Looking forward to the next update.
Edited by _Namita_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Thank you for flagging it... one of my favourite lines, too...
My family has a pet back home.. and they send me video clippings .. I tell you.. the amount they can emote and converse is extraordinary! We just have to listen

wow ur family has a pet dats so good...😳 we had many pets of course before i was born right from sparrow till d squirrel and at my cousin's place too dey have a pet but agree wid u dey r truly amazing dey understand u so well even if dey r dumb and cannot speak but understands v well emotionally...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Srividhya thanks dear...🤗I'm glad you liked it so much...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaah a game of chess, I see...😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">But separate? didn't expect that from you... but, I'm generally not a fan of tragedy dear...😲🤔😕</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">How can epic be separate... EPIC for me is 'fighting all odds'</font>



Agreed Lashy!! Epic for me is also beating all odds. This chapter has made me impatient. Now I've got to beat all odds and be calm. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for next teaser pic lashy 😉
I know its a bit too early ...but kya karu ... yeh dil maange more 😎😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Ustad we knew so far...

Shehzade's trusted man, and in the author's own words, this visitor was a man who knew more about weapons and warfare than all of his other generals put together. Serving on the battlefield until 2 years ago, this man's loyalty and expertise had been put to even better use ever since. He was now an appointed mentor, an 'Ustaad' - who recruited fresh trainees and coached them into becoming the fearsome warriors that the Shehzade's powerful army needed. A master of many arts and yet a man of few words, Ustaad reserved his compliments for the absolute best.


The Akbar Mahmoud Khan we knew so far...

A rich horse merchant of Aidabad, with a torn childhood, simple tastes , loyal and just, smart, yet someone who was a recluse and an introvert, who felt the first flutters of softer feelings when he saw Heera, someone with a secret agenda, someone doing something important, perhaps a part of a secret society, working for a noble cause for sure...he is the hero afterall, who respects women and is fair minded.

That both these men are one and the same...is a twist that could challenge any of Alfred Hitchcock's! And the hints were practically non-existent. Wrt, Mahender, there were telltale signs. Little reactions that strengthened my suspicions, but here i didn't suspect at all!🤓 I expected AMK to be entangled with Royalty, in some secret mission, but THIS close to the Shehzade, THE USTAAD himself...Lashy, you are a clever little witch who with one wave of the wand, superimposed these two seemingly different characters and merged them into one! And now every piece of the jigsaw puzzle falls into place and all the incidents we have come across so far appears in a different light!

The forest encounter was a planned co-incidence!

The riverside meeting too. Perhaps AMK saw Heera slipping out all by herself and thought that she was planning to handover the Farmaan to some confidant...hence the secrecy! And followed her. When he saw her drown, he HAD to save her, lest the FFM (Find Farmaan Mission) fails! And in order to give her an excuse for his presence, spoke of broken bridges and bandits! This was no lovey dovey first meeting.

His precision with knives and aiming that surprised Heera, (but not us, as we presumed that being the hero and a secret agent, he had to be skilled, but so skilled that he was the master! )

His apparent anger at Heera's enquiries about him, lest she gets a whiff of his truth...not that he is not capable of covering up, but he couldn't risk at that point when having her under his supervision was a must.

Chapter 8: As a frightful stillness pervaded, Khalil glared at the hand that'd challenged his speed and strength. Here I had a slight suspicion that the Ustad might not be an old man after all, as a man like Khalil submitted to his strength. But never guessed that it was our touch-me-not AMK.

His guilt on seeing her - may be as he had begun to fall for her and couldn't raise himself to her level of purity. Yet, this guilt was perhaps one clue that could have raised an eyebrow. But when romance was in the air, all kinds of warranted and unwarranted feelings and thoughts are common!

His wanting to run away from the charms of Heera - maybe to save himself within the cocoon he has enclosed himself, given his tatteredchildhood, this reaction too was not unexpected! But the real reason as we understand now is that he couldn't be loyal to two people at the same time! One was a person who picked him up from the scraps and moulded him into what he is today, who gave him life. The other was someone with an aura of purity and sunshine who could make life worth living. The all so capable and courageous Khan Sahib who could fight any war with supreme skills feared the prospects of this internal war and chose to escape, atleast temporarily!

Chachajaan Ibrahim all of them knew that AMK was the Ustaad and were working for him under the cover of companions! Chachajaan's closeness with Maharaj Kakasa was all just a pretext to needle out information!

OMG! One revelation and the whole shade of the story has changed! This is indeed the work of a wand and not a pen! Take a bow Lashy Granger!


Lashy, have you heard of the novel 'Parthiban Kanavu'? The Pallavas defeat the Cholas in a bloody war. The Pallava king is so impressed by the Chola king's bravery that he visits the dying enemy king as a sadhu and promises to raise his young son. But the readers are not told the real identity of the sadhu, till the last chapter of the novel. The king keeps up his promise and raises the son guiding him in the guise of the sadhu. The revelation in the last chapter actually pulls the rugs from under the reader's feet! This revelation of UAMK was no less a twist, though revealed as early as chapter 15. The book was a superb read, but it didn't play out that well in the movie, where even the best disguise couldn't hide the fact that the Emperor and the sadhu were one and the same! This is the distinct advantage of the print over the screen! ⭐️ When HBAS is filmed, the suspense would be lost!

Edited by Sandhya.A - 9 years ago
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The Changed Equations!
Shehzade:
He is as smart and capable as our AMK! He values Ustaad as much for his skills as for his lifestyle that assures him loyalty. AMK cannot be tempted by any of the 3Ws! He doesn't yield to temptation and is extremely loyal! Shehzaade knows AMK right from his childhood and has contributed a great deal to make him what he is. And he doesn't forget to remind him that whenever he finds it essential! AMK is precious to him, but not indispensable! The moment he learns of AMK's zest to protect Heera, he wouldn't hesitate to do what Voldemort did to Snape! To him NOTHING matters more than power!

Khalil:
A man who learnt only warfare from Ustad without one moral bone in his body! He is like Adham Khan who gloats on his war-skills and stoops to any level to achieve what he wants! Now that his ego has suffered a triple blow, first by Durga who fooled him with a fake farmaan, and then by Shehzaade who asked him to step down from an assignment, and lastly by UAMK who was always the better soldier, more trusted, and who was given the chance to win where he lost. He would make finding the farmaan his first priority and raising himself in the eyes of Shehzaade. What I fears is what he would do when he finds that AMK is protecting Heera and withholding information from Shehzaade. - Perhaps everything in his powers to excpose him, to grab his coveted closeness with the prince, and achieve what he has always wanted to do - defeat AMK. AMK is in as much danger form Khalil as Heera!😔

Mahender:
So this scum did go cahoots with Khalil and reveal the palace passages, to help Khalil gain entry and find the farmaan! But I wonder how that would help HIM! Wasn't marrying Durga and producing the farmaan himself and getting a bargain a better option!

Heera:
My poor princess in distress! She is in for a double shock too! First when she realises that her would-have been Jijasa, the perfect Mahender Kunwarsa, was a rascal of the first order, the one actually responsible for her jiji's death! He was the Peter Pettigrew!😡 And then, her first love, (surely she would have fallen in love with AMK before she realise that he was UAMK) was the person assigned the task of retrieving the farmaan and that he has been hanging around her for that sole purpose! What a blow it would be for the girl! Would she believe if AMK revealed his changing intentions! Mahender would surely turn her against AMK! He might even misguide her that Khalil attacked Parnagarh and murdered Durga on AMK's orders! 😡 What emotional turbulence she is going to go through! 😭And Gauri is going to say 'I told you so' even if not in as many words!😕

And then the final farmaan hunt from the urn! With everyone hovering around her! Lashy I'm waiting in all eagerness for the next 45 chapters for the action, drama and heartburns to unfold and the triumph of goodness and love amongst it all.👍🏼

AMK:
Finally to the trumpcard of the chapter - UAMK.

He is as adept at playing mental games, as Ganjifa! And with such high stakes! He is walking on tight rope across the mountains! One slip, he falls to death! The conversation between UAMK and the Shehzade was a humdinger of a scene where every word was measured, by BOTH the parties. No tussle is interesting until it is between equals. And both of them were masters of the game. The first breach of loyalty - hiding of information about the scrolls...that seem unimportant to the FFM as of now, the protectiveness, that is bound to grow...

Every word of anguish and self reproach in the last chapter is justified. How each line appears valid:

'What have you been doing?' it seemed to ask 'Don't you realise that the ground you're treading on, is extremely risky? One step more, and you'll fall... worse, you'll pull her down with you. The Sahiba doesn't know the truth... that's why she's breaking out into fits of innocent giggles... and inviting you to a luncheon... but YOU are aware of the truth, aren't you? Then, why are you indulging her smiles...'

... so, what are you trying to prove, Akbar Khan? And, to WHOM?'

'Ridiculous!' his conscience jolted him out of the lull 'It IS your fault... you shouldn't have allowed it get to this... because it's YOUR decision to adopt a lifestyle so dangerous, that it has no place for women in it... and, why are you bridging gaps now... that too, with THIS Sahiba, out of all ladies! What would you gain by knocking on this door now? Is it to find out if she holds the cure for this never-ending pain of yours? Even if she has the secret remedy, you'll never live to enjoy it... you'll die and get her killed too! So muster that adamant determination of yours... don't let your wall of resistance show cracks... you need to show discipline... fight temptation, now more than ever!'


PERFECT👏👏👏

What appeared as a rant of frustrated love till the day before yesterday, now has assumed such a different hue! UAMK, Chief intelligence Officer of the Shehzaade, will now face the biggest battle, not just of his mind and heart, but of his loyalties! The man who picked him up from the dust and hoisted him to such heights, versus, a woman who made him feel human for the first time! Duty versus humanism. Loyalty versus love. The poor man is stuck! And I feel more pity for him now than the hungry boy fed by chachajaan!




Edited by Sandhya.A - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lashy diii... Wat a chappy... Ur brain really runs at d horse power speed😆😆...
Nd d way u descript each every scenario is soo commendable...
God knows how u r able to pen down everything soo perfctly...
Politics, mystery, naughtiness... Nd wat more to say...
My wrds wbt be able to do justice to ur grt wrk...
Thnku soo much fr d chappy... Nd thnku fr pm nd update asap... 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago


Dear Bindu, Adwi, Harshu, Kausi and Manasi
Thanks a lot for your comments on my post.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Interesting Fact -


Ganjifa cards would not be like the cards we see today... they were made of out of thin slices of wood and painted on the back
The Rajput kings had their own version of this game... with Hindu symbolic paintings on back... and in the Mughal court their own 'Baadshah' style paintings 😊


Ahadi - as far as I read, they are truly specialist warriors - personal bodyguards to the prince/king... who were trained in the sort of weapons and warfare that no one else was given the privilege to learn... they were the creme-de-la-creme of the soldiers (though not highest in position)
their only job was to act as personal bodyguards to the rulers... 😊
so the manner in which AMK aimed those knives, could very much have been possible in that era.. some of the stories of the Mongol warriors and the art with which they'd perfected their aims I read were just 👏

I was inspired from that to etch the character of AMK

The best, or at least the highest paid and most elaborately equipped, were the lite ahadi 'gentleman troopers'. Many of these had yet to receive a mansab rank. Akbar's ahadis were under the authority of a senior nobleman, and had their own bakhshi paymaster. Their main duty was to serve as aides to the Emperor, carrying important messages and guarding the palace. The pay (and status) of ahadis was lower than that of the lowest mansabdar officer but higher than that of the ordinary tabinan trooper."
The central cavalry were called the ahadis (single fighters) and frequently had administrative positions in the palace in addition to their military obligations. Paid directly from the imperial treasury, they were loyal only to the sovereign but had no servile status. The ahadis normally accompanied the imperial court and took the field only for major campaigns and unusual situations."

this was what one of the descriptions said

Dressed in the finest uniforms, their saddles encrusted in precious gems, their weapons and equipment likewise, their horses perfectly turned out and decorated with tassels, the Ahadis would look entirely at home guarding a magnificently-appointed palace. They are capable of that, but they are also capable of so much more. These are practical warriors for a working battle, with a good grasp of tactics and the skills needed to cut almost any enemy to ribbons. As they charge home the tassels make each horse appear winged!

Each man is hand picked, trained to ride without thinking about it, and given the very best horse and equipment Mughal money can buy.

"Ahadi" literally means "royal messenger", and the message they delivered on the battlefield was a devastating one of terror and violence!


Thank you for this tidbits, Writer-e-khaas, after reading this, part of me went...👏👏👏... both at the extensive research work you've undergone, and at the glorious picture of the Mughal Royalties... both of these never cease to amaze me!!!⭐️

Another part of me is very sure that if at all I ever become an author... if at all, that is... I would never ever write anything, which has something to do with HISTORY😆... going back to studying that subject again, nope, not done... I am happy reading historic novels only😳


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