Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 86

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Update dii

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Update 😭 update 😭 update 😭

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Lovely update
Thnks for pm
update soon

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Good night avi di

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sry avika i knw i m late..

Its ok dear ...no need to say sorry 😊

u gave lovely update..

Aww thanks yaar 😳

convo btwn suja and moti s cute..moti's care for jo s really superb..just love their bondingmore as a friend and sister..

Moti and Jodha's bond is unexplainable ...and im glad u love them so much

and our hero he s on his cloud nine whenevr jo s around..like the part when he realisd heartand fistd his chest..lovely..

Hehehe...he is definetly on cloud nine...the tickling sensation and the racing heart beats when Jodha is around is all new to him and very much enthralling too .

wow abdul and reva r in a relation..?a surprise for us too..

I know its a surprise for all ...but since day one reva showed interest in him so yes they finally r a couple now😉

And realy ja has lot of lucky stars..the lift part was nice.

Lift part...hmm 😉😉

.missing noor..cutie..what happend..?did anythng hapend to hamida..?cant decipher..

I too missed noor in this chap ...wish i could make noor lead ..but i cant ..since it is jajo story ...but dont worry .. in future chaps u will see noor ...

Arre dont worry. ..nothing happened to hamida

update buddy..thanks for pm..and ts story s progressing very well with their love..

Ohh god...@ blue ...u cant imagine hiw happy i am after reading this line .

waiting fr nxt part..

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suprb update

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Chapter 10

Plan in action...

Yup 😉

wow whatever they had planed everything took a 180 degree turn...

Hahaha... i know...they didnt expect this at all 😆

adham know about all this i like the way jalal was portative towards jodha and i know he will react same way for other girl i'm jodha place to but he is bit more for jodha ...

Adham has all his ears and eyes around college ... and yes...Jalal would have been so caring for anyother girl too but Jodha is special and thence this overprotectiveness 😆

jodha one line cooled him and he was the only one saw other side of jodha how worried she was...haha

We come across so many people and so many relations in a life ...and between all its mostly our family members who know us in and out ... and we truly will be lucky to have other people apart from our family knowing us so well...and Jodha us one such lucky girl .

akka i like the way jodha was talking to her brother in presence of jalal haha poor souls both where shocked haha... and also this part shows trust they have on each other...

Hahaha...That scene was 😆

adham house part was so bad akka i was also worried what will happen and u ended 1st part at right time good we got 2nd part or else god knows what will happen to us...

Hehehehe...i know rakshu..thats why i gave part too right after part 1 😉

this adham so shameless animal try to take advantage and jodha also put up good fight wow and here comes the hero to save his heroin superb the way jalal hit adham for his deeds'... ooh then jalal anger was in peak and maid jodha guilty for her plan... what jodha is been ordered by jalal to go to his home good for her now she can't go home like this...

Jodha is courageous...no doubt ...but infront of a man like Adham she needed to be strong too...which she is not ...but a sfar as jallu us there ...why fear 😉

cutie pie noor was so cute with her talk maid joja relax a bit... haha girls feel ticklish when boys touch their feet ha right haha... nice nice jalal was shocked with her answer noor had done with her work and other was left for her mamu to treat her appi... this was so cute akka... waiting for morning...😉😉😉

Even i like noor very much yaar ...kids r so innocent ...they can/do whatever they want...no boundaries for them ...no feelings ...just innocent gestures

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Chapter 11

Firstly i like the picture and the lines on it "when a guy like a girl ,he'll look her in her eyes. when a girl like a guy, she'll look away."

Kada ?? I just loved these lines ...and so added 😳

I felt very bad for noor she miss her mumma a lot... and she was so scared of maham... this lady maid a small kid scared so much...

I know noor is going through so much...but im there na...i will settle everything ...😉

good that jodha was there with her today it was proved that jodha and noor are each other savories jodha saved noor for maham and noor saved jodha from hiding the truth from hamida... so cute...

Both r angels 😳

haha jalal cured himself for waking up late as he thought he missed a seeing his ladylove in the morning only...

Such a lasy person he is 😆

Breakfast part was wonderful akka jodha unknowingly solving all the problems related to jalal house bringing back mother and son... saving noor... so jodha is become super savories for jalal house...

Wow ...super saviour ...nice title bangaram 😳

emotions where all over breakfast table mothers care for her son and son feeling about his mother after so long time and jodha making things better for them...

Jodha will definetly get back this mother and son duo for sure...😉

wow akka jodha got green signal from hamida side to become DIL of the house... super right... motherly kiss and chain ha... hamida is totally impressed by jodha...

Yeh toh hona hi tha ...its Jodha afterall ...everyone ought to be impressed by her 😉

car scene was so cute akka it shows what the picture told jalal did not leave any second to see jodha haha other side jodha saw everywhere except jalal this two are totally lost for each other... so said jala traffic did not help him but jodha she want to run away from him... wow pair of eyes saw them who is that ... ???

Glad u liked the car scene ...who saw them ..u will get to know in next chapter

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Chapter 12

Akka I like this picture and quote too akka... and it is so right...

Thanks ra 😊

haha so it was suj and moti who caught joja together good... poor moit was put in to problem to convince her hubby why joja are together poor moti was all worried but suj said he trust hid sister but not his wife so he maid jalal moti bother too... haha that was ok but not jodha brother...cute couple and a caring brother...

So ... did u like the twist 😉 yeah...poor Moti ...she always have to cover up for Jodha ...and beleive me this is just the beginning ...😉

Jodha encounter with moti was wonderful... moti was so worried for jodha and whatever she said had a valid points but what to do jodha was all lost in jalal world... but really i loved this relation care trust and concern moti and jodha shares was jodha got to know about her brother seeing them together to good she was saved from moti...

Hmm both r right in their own way yaar ...they love each other so much

jalal is so caring brother he made shore that nafisa will come for her exam and then he lost in his thoughts related to morning incidents love and care of his mother moments related to jodha and he is understanding his likening towards jodha...

He knows what his heart wants Rakshu ... i will understand his feelings for Jodha too 😉

so shopping turned out lovely... wow abdul and rava are seeing each other ha good... and jodha came to know how caring brother jalal is for his soul sister... haha elevator part was superb akka jodha falling on jalal 2 times great thanks to rava and the power cut... haha both was scared their inner feeling can be found and where happy when they came out of the elevator...

Hahahha... i hope u really liked the lift part 😃

bairam call i think that hamida bought her daughter back home...

Lol...😆

waiting to know it akka so update soon ...

And akka you have written every chapter with lot of love thank you...

Aww...Rakshu...🤗 yes i did write each and every chap with all my heart ...and my hard work pays off when i get to read such lovely lovely comments from u people

and sorry for commenting so late on all four chapters...

Its ok ra ...atleast u commented na

thanks for pms akka...

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