Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 71

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

wow..di
I love the update...

Thanks a lot mavi ...im pleased to know this dear 😊

such a beautiful n emotional one

>>>> 😳😳
di I love your noor she is such a angel [:*] I adore her innocency

Noor is truly an angel dear ...she is not only innocent but a strong girl too
HAMIDA JALAL and JODHA scene was awesome, unknowingly Jo makes JALAL to eat food cooked by his mother n HAMIDA all gone emotional

Hmmm ... Jodha unknowingly fulfilled mothers wish 😳
again her heart started racing when she is around her hero
now I want them to confess their love soon...

Confession ...lol...u know my writing very well mavi...i believe in slow and steady love pace . They will confess no doubt but soon...cant guarntee 😉

may two pairs of eyes were staring at them might be rukku, moti, or suja...still confused

Not bad ..u too became expert in guessing 😉
thanks for pm
update soon

Originally posted by: piya58

Woow Supurb dr
Update sooon
Thanku

oh di ...sorry for late comment
I love the chapter... jo was hell worried for JALAL ...she was thinking bout noor hamida's n jalal's well being so caring girl she is
JALAL answered her call n seemed for help, this maham is really disgusting n JALAL did what his jiju told him to do...
Now second part
so moti Reva Abdul surya JALAL are the parts of the plan but JODHA wasno where to be seen
they disguised themselves so that they can make adham pay for his deeds...I adore their friendship
moti is very concerned for her SIL
Jo also came to see their plan BTW poor gurl unaware by the fact that tgey disguised themselves...n thanking to god tgat Abdul saw her on time finally ...otherwise don't know what might their plan turn off
ahh..adham so filthy he aghh...so creepy guy
romance of sardar ji n the lady 😳
jalal was bowled away by this muvh closeness whereas JO's innocent questions... JALAL was all gone by her effect n same with jo
thanks for pm di
update soon

very awesome chapter avi
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm

Awesome updates..
Jo so worry for Ja...
Ja asked Jo's opinion about .Adham case.but he don't want Jo join in his plan...
waiting for how Adham fall into Ja's trap..
update fast..
Thanks for pm..Avika.

Avika what a beautifu & lovelyl chapter. Na guess wrong ayindi. Bk pilichindi Salina gurinchi anukunnanu. Kani adam gurinchi. Jo ja movement's enta lovely ga unnayi.Chivarilo malli guess? Esari as sahasam cheyavaddani anukunnanu. But...😉 I guess she is Rukku?????😲

Res ...
Will comment tomorrow di ...

Thanks for the update, Avika. Thoroughly enjoyed it. 😊 Jodha dying to know what crisis made him dash off from the mall. And the telephone call - what telepathy😃! Jalal not wanting to involve Jodha in his scheme to nab Adham in the act - so sweet of him. Jodha - the stubborn girl that she is - wanting to be in the thick of things. All lead to an oh-so-romantic cuddle behind the pillars 😉 And the "SHE 'will actually be a "HE" ( I think it was revealed to be Sujamal in one of the posts). Plot turning out to be quite exciting. Great going!👏

chappy mindblowing 😳 i m in love wid dis story ❤️
Update next chappy soon soon soon 😉
nd thanks for pm dear..

Fantabulous update