Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 73

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

lovely update...

Thanks a lot amita

why noor is always so scared of maham?

For this u need to wait a little long dear

breakfast part is written with much care and affection..

Aww im so happy u liked that part yaar , yup after a lot of thinking i wrote that part 😳

unintentionally jodha played a cupid between duo melting the ice which is frozen for years...

Yes jodha unintentionally hit the cold frozen ice ..which will lead to melting in a slow process

today a mother has found his lost son...there is no bigger pleasure than it.

Exactly 😳 its was a big day fir a mother 😊

u are building akdha chemistry on a concrete ground which would led to be a true soulmate..

@ bold...u know Amita ..u made my day dear ...yes im plotting their love story with utmost care which needs patience ...ofcourse ...but eventually when they will fell in love they wont be any looking back 😳

U are an amazing writer,

Hehehe..thanks for the compliment dear ...but u know ..i never consider myself as a writer forgot the word AMAZING ...but yes im trying to improve myself 😳

U also know it then why disappointed if some people do not comment..

Actually the responce was very low dear ..thats why for a moment i really felt bad ...i know i should not care about the responce and all ..but for a second yes ot pricked my heart ...but later after reading all ur commets ...i thought ...i should continue for people who r regularly reading and commmebting 😛

If writing give u pleasure then do not stop...count those who appreciate,like and comment

I will keep this in mind always 😃

...thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Thanks for the update.

Rose 🤗

After the painful previous chapter where Jo was in trouble with Adham, this chapter has brought the calm back to their lives although I am certain danger still lurks around them.

Hahaha... just enjoy the updates dearie...dont fear about the future ... im there to handle all 😉

But for now, they are on good footing, so happiness all round.

Exactly 😃

Noor, the poor child, was so traumatised by the bed-wetting incident. Thankfully Jodha was around this time to pacify the girl ; Noor ,too, came to Jodha's rescue during the uncomfortable "interrogation" sessions with Maham Anga and Hamida- talk about the innocence of children.

Yes ...both covered up very well for each other ..and that shows their bonding 😳

All in all, an enjoyable update.

Glad u enjoyed the update dear...

Originally posted by: eshalli

Wonderful chapter dear
Loved it
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awesome update
totally love it
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09

Di u r asking us whether we liked it or not but I just loved the chappy👏

So happy to know this saachi 😊

Jo indirectly trying to bring Ja n Hamida close

Yup ...what an co incidence ...right 😉

That's soo sweet😳

Di pls update as soon as possible😊😭

Will update soon

N do pm me😊😃

Originally posted by: shyana3

Lovely chappy jodha become noor's friend thnks for pm

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Mimd blowing update dii

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

awesome update

Thanks a lot bindu
I just love this chapter

Pleased to know this dear
in the starting I thought that girl is jodha but no girl is noor

Hehehe i know ..people might have got confused at the beginning ...
poor girl

Indeed a poor girl
I am really feeling bad for her

Hmm
how much she scare from maham anger

Maham is a bit strict na ...so yes noor is hell scared of her
poor soul missing her mother so much

Motherless child she is...atleast she and everyone around her thinks so

everybody was there for her but no body understand her situation

Hmm such a bad condition she is in
I just wanted to ask this why nobody care to know how maham treat to that little soul

Maham is a great actor bindu...she ...in front of everyone acts very goody goody and in alone she treats her harshly ...and why noor is not telling anyone about maham ...u will come to know in coming updates 😳
why she suddenly change in front of maham
jodha is shock to see noor pale face

Hmm
she console her and explain her that was natural thing
but I guess jodha know soon about maham behavior

Yup she will come to know about Maham' strue face dear
noor is so happy in jodha company
hamida recognize jodha
love hamida caring nature

Yes hamida is a very nice person
wow now noor help jodha from hamida questions

Hehehe nice covering right 😉
how timely she answer all questions and save jodha from trouble
jalal so eager to see jodha
now without reason he smile

Jalal is totally fida on Jodha 😆
how disappointed he became when he don't see her in room
just love the scene of dining table

Im glad u liked that scene dear
how beautifully describe that scene
jalal observe jodha
how beautifully she apply make up to cover up her scratches

She dont want further interogations na ...so carefully applied make up and all
jodha also waiting for jalal
both are excited to meet each other

Hehehe
jodha unknowingly help hamida and noor
jodha is so excite to served jalal

Yeah she got a little carried away here ... becoz the paratha was so yummy that she wanted jalal to taste it too unknown to the fact that he was purposely avoiding that dish and thus the blunder
after so long jalal taste her mother hand made food
hamida can't able to control her emotion

Every mother wishes to feed her kids themselves but due to the bitterness between the mother and son duo ...she didnt get the oppurtunity .
she herself served one more but fearing if jalal reject
but jalal happily nod

Now since he already started eating it ...having another wont make a big difference na ...so he ate 😆
jalal also became emotional
jodha observe both mother and son

Finding something fishy made her observe the duo
jodha don't want to leave the chance to tease jalal

Lol ...how can hitler miss the chance of teasing Jallad ??
out of happiness hamida gift her gold chain

She couldnt control her happiness 😳
jalal was so happy to see that scene
in the car suddenly jodha feeling uncomfortable with jalal
love the close encounter between them

Hope u liked this scene 😉
jalal admire her
once again I just love this chapter so much

Once again i so much loved ur commment
and the lines you added in first is so beautiful

Thanks re
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: CindyTruong

Amazing update..

Thanks a lot cindy 😊
Poor Noor...she miss her mother..

Yup she misses her a lot
Ja did not eat food which was made by his mother..

Hmm...he hated his mother na ...so all the things related to her ...he avoided all of them 😳
Jo severed Ja paratha...which made by Hamida..

Yup she unknowingly fulfilled a mother's wish 😳
Hope Jo will patch up Ja and Hamida's relationship..

Hope so 😉
Who did catch JoJa together in the last part with 😲...?

U will get the answer in next chap 😉
Update next soon ..
Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: Monucute

Avi didu🤗

Monu 🤗
Again that was amazing and splendid update...
Simply wow...

Thanks a lot dear 😳
Just loved it...
Awiiee poor noor... so scared of that maham... but Intelligent child, giving answers on behalf of her appi😉
Hahaha all smart people under one roof 😆
I'm loving the way their relationship is taking shape... Feeling pity for Hamida and Jalal... Poor souls...
Really ...im glad to know u liked the way the story is progressing ...i dont want to rush in hurry 😉
And Jalal is drown in his jodhaland... smiling smiling..😃
I'm waiting for them to be together...
They will be together for sure ...😉
Who saw them? Jo's brother, ruqs?
Socho socho
waiting for next...
Please update soon didu...