Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 72

Superb update
loved it
cont soon... curious to know about ja plan
loved jajo hugging moments


thnks for pm

awesome... left wanting more..i think maham is playing something more dirty that is hidden from us..canteen scene was adorable and what to speak about chance pe romance,it was so soothing,i loved it.. and this aadham kabhi nahi sudharega a filthy jerk..awaiting for next update...

a wonderful update avika..sry fr late..i thought something else regarding phone cal..but u gave a unexpectd one,(tats avika..i knw)..tat maham blackmiled the family with emotions..but ts adham cheap..the phone cal of jo and ja was nice jo surprised by ja cal..jo have a faith in ja so she left the process of deciding authority to him..at the same time ja have a faith tat jo wl help him in solving the pblm..wow wat a trust btwn them..ja justifies both his jiju and his sister..he has planned for a mission..nice..canteen part was nice..same jo who even dnt lyk his presence nv dnt want to hurt him unknwoingly..what a change jo.!and tat hitler part s icing on the cake..i too luv her cute angry face like jalal..

As usual fearless jo s determind she ll do what she want..afterall how can she get away frm trouble..?tat too when she has jalal around..luv the part of argument btwn ja and jo..and the mission part was nice..a sardarji,mr and mrs iyer..wow..u r adding some actions in ts love story..i just love it..our jo comes as uninvited participant..and the most awesome part comes here..Romance behind the pillar..oh ja s having hard time to control his emotions..jo dnt knw what she has done with this man and the same with jalal..wow just loue their touching romance..xcellent part..and who ll come now..?is jalal accompany her in his plan..at canteen convo i thought he s just joking..but a girl s coming..waiting to knw tat..just wonderful and thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: harshu27

wonderful update avi...😳

Thanks a lot harshu 😳

btw i wonder how come i missed ur previous chaps😕😆

I exactly know the reason why 😉 i guess u were busy with ur ff right 😆

Anywys read both d chaps..

Thanks for not skipping and continue reading next chap 😆

.and it was totally thrilling...😃

Happy to hear this 😳

so adham's fnrds had heard abt jalal's grp planning against him but d best part was d way jalal ne uski dhulayi ki😉

Kaam aise karega .. toh dhulayi toh hogi hi na 😆😆

and v sweet of jalal that he took her to his home and treated her 😛 caring indeed...😳

Ohk ...thank god u didnt think mistook his gesture 😆 matlab chance pe dance 😆

I loved noor and jo's bonding 😳its really cute and innocent...😳

Everyone's liking noor and Jodha's bonding and im pleased to know u too liked 😳

so anjaane me hi sahi jo ne hamida aur jalal ko pass laya...dat breakfast scene was touchy 😛

Acchi bahu ke saare gun hai 😆

and of course hamida and jo ka bonding bhi badh raha hai...😉

Yes 😳

sply wen she gifted her d chain...😳 update soon eager to read next...😛

Originally posted by: Annie15

wow awesome update diii..

loved it i love your noor dii ..she is really an angel...

curious for next part who saw them together...?

plz update asap...

and thanks for pm...😊

Originally posted by: Naazrt

wow Avika diii aweasome and sooo sweet update thankyou sooo much for pm me diii plzzz continue soon and don't forget to pm me ...
and sorry for late diii...

Originally posted by: Hm1608

ch10 first of all sorry for late rply wow amazing chappy jo determine to reveal adham ty for pm

Originally posted by: Hm1608

chapy 10
part 2

hmmm jo in trouble

but our jallu is always there to save jo

nice chapy

ty for pm

Originally posted by: Hm1608

chappy 11

awww

sweet and caring noor ... jallu also

like noor jo and ja trio

ty for pm