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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

As we head to the end of this trilogy... that's to say all the things happening within a single day... I admit how you expert skills, combined with sheer with and planning so seamlessly blended together so many events... not for once it needs telling that the day was so eventful all along!!

Kudos to you my dear, Author! šŸ‘


Hard times... the times were hard for Heera, quite so much..
-what with her messages hanging in an air of uncertainty, she herself is unsure about the fate of her messages, messengers and the much awaited reciprocation.

-what with her treatment ending in unanticipated failure... her most trusted chieftain in his death agony... and the only way to abate the agony appears... is to maim him physically for ever.

-what with her identity having being revealed and an escapade mission becoming an absolute necessity!
Thus quite understandably so her young heart seeks respite.. reassurance... and a brief spell of distraction to unburden her worries... and it's there because...


The Eyes Have It...all of it , rather, from the soothing conscience like company of a motherly maid, who heart thinks and lives for her services... what an incredible lady is your Gauri! This enchanting soul... not just acts in favour of her mistress, even before she unburdens her thoughts, she thinks twice... I'm sure and Heera would also agree with me, that Gauri is her lost mother in the guise of a maid! 😳

The Eyes have a tongue of their own accord, I say, otherwise how a pair of partially sighted mellifluous orbs so subtly communicates with a pair of deep dark ones, as dark as His reality, as guarded as His persona... surely the Eyes have a language of their own likeness, else how do the veils and curtains fail in their duties... how do they speak away, the Gratified and the Grateful... the Flickering Flame, so respectable and sacred and the Keeper of the Flame!

Most certainly the Eyes have it, else how could you write down something so sensational... so pure... so eloquent and yet so subtle!!


The Dip in the Pool... deep, deep and deeper still he plunged headlong, the icecold water whipping him out of fantasy if any... the musk washing away leftovers of a mesmerising encounter if any... hard voice of conscience resurrecting walls of resistance all over again... he plunged headlong into the swirling waves of the Pool of Agony!! Worse, He took us readers along with Him... still we are assured that at least He ATE before all thatšŸ˜‰

I patientlying wait for mysteries to unfold... and those segments of Raja Chittaranjan being to mere to write anything now, the bustling maids have been spoken about... and any ill effects of their evil eyes curbed with Saraswathi Aunty's remedies... so I will end my review, please bear with it! I think it's too long šŸ˜†

OMG.. This is totally out of world! šŸ‘ You know what? It's very rare I say for a review but to be true, I loved each and every word written here. ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Binduprasad...
Here di, take two Aiyooo wala hugs from me...
-šŸ¤—one for liking my review!

-šŸ¤—another for supporting me!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aiyooo...what did I do?šŸ˜†šŸ˜†</font>



God aiyooo is so famous these days
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41



what to do Di you both are so so cute so we all drooling over your both cuteness




Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Aiyooo...what did I do? šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">@Binduprasad...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Here di, take twoAiyooo wala hugs from me...</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">-šŸ¤—one for liking my review!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">-šŸ¤—another for supporting me!</font>

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

OMG.. This is totally out of world! šŸ‘ You know what? It's very rare I say for a review but to be true, I loved each and every word written here. ā¤ļø

This makes me truly elated... thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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I am happy we made you laugh
but why you are laughing
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Posted: 9 years ago
How funny!! Isn't it? 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

My dear Adwi,
Please accept my congrats for your post!šŸ‘šŸ‘
Till now, I have not commented on anyone else's review other than Shyamala aunty's, and today I feel the urge to do it for yours.
My comments are in bold red.

Yours
Saraswathi Aunty.



Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

As we head to the end of this trilogy... that's to say all the things happening within a single day... I admit how your expert skills, combined with sheer wit and planning, so seamlessly blended together so many events... not for once it needs telling that the day was so eventful all along!! That too so logically and convincingly!

Kudos to you my dear, Author! šŸ‘


Hard times... the times were hard for Heera, quite so much..
-what with her messages hanging in an air of uncertainty, she herself is unsure about the fate of her messages, messengers and the much awaited reciprocation.

-what with her treatment ending in unanticipated failure... her most trusted chieftain in his death agony... and the only way to abate the agony appears... is to maim him physically for ever.

-what with her identity having being revealed and an escapade mission becoming an absolute necessity!
Thus quite understandably so her young heart seeks respite.. reassurance... and a brief spell of distraction to unburden her worries... and it's there because...

Perfect analysis of the situation.
The Eyes Have It...all of it , rather, from the soothing conscience like company of a motherly maid, who heart thinks and lives for her services... what an incredible lady is your Gauri! This enchanting soul... not just acts in favour of her mistress, even before she unburdens her thoughts, she thinks twice... I'm sure and Heera would also agree with me, that Gauri is her lost mother in the guise of a maid! 😳

šŸ‘

The Eyes have a tongue of their own accord, I say, otherwise how a pair of partially sighted mellifluous orbs so subtly communicates with a pair of deep dark ones, as dark as His reality, as guarded as His persona... surely the Eyes have a language of their own likeness, else how do the veils and curtains fail in their duties... how do they speak away, the Gratified and the Grateful... the Flickering Flame, so respectable and sacred and the Keeper of the Flame!

Most certainly the Eyes have it, else how could you write down something so sensational... so pure... so eloquent and yet so subtle!!
šŸ‘A beautiful figurative description of an artist! Marvellous!


The Dip in the Pool... deep, deep and deeper still he plunged headlong, the icecold water whipping him out of fantasy if any... the musk washing away leftovers of a mesmerising encounter if any... hard voice of conscience resurrecting walls of resistance all over again... he plunged headlong into the swirling waves of the Pool of Agony!! Worse, He took us readers along with Him... still we are assured that at least He ATE before all thatšŸ˜‰
That's what all of us were waiting for!

I patiently wait for mysteries to unfold... and those segments of Raja Chittaranjan being to mere to write anything now, the bustling maids have been spoken about... and any ill effects of their evil eyes curbed with Saraswathi Aunty's remedies... so I will end my review, please bear with it! I think it's too long šŸ˜†

Yes .Lashy,.send him to me .. I will do the chilli, salt and mustard treatment for warding off the ill effects of the evil eye!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aunty, your congratulations has been accepted with all the due respect and pleasure... and the very fact that you came... read... and commented on my review is enough to send me into throes of elation!!!
Thank you so much šŸ¤—

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


My dear Adwi,
Please accept my congrats for your post!šŸ‘šŸ‘
Till now, I have not commented on anyone else's review other than Shyamala aunty's, and today I feel the urge to do it for yours.
My comments are in bold red.

Yours
Saraswathi Aunty.



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