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misty

@misty22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Awsmmm.. Darling.. I mean.. Really ur jst gettin perfect wd each chapter... Perfct execution... Soo naughty.. Joja are really meant to be together... Nd dat ruku.. Sge s damn cheap.. Arghh!! Hell irritating... Ds time she s gonna ht a good lesson fr sure... Sooo amazing... Lvd it!!..

Thnku fr pm nd update asap.. 👏👏

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eshalli

@eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Awesome chapter dear...
Love joja cute scene
Rukku is really cheap girl
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Wonderful chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Superb story
read all chptrs ... all chptrs r awesome
slowly past was unfolds ... loved it
curious to read about jajo past
cont soon

thnks for pm

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

wonderful chapter dear
rukaiya is so disgusting
she is using everyone for her own benefit
she is playing with everyone emotions
jalal and jodha part is so cute
jalal always tease her
but jodha really express her feeling so beautifully
my dear you write that part so perfectly
jalal also express his love
awe everybody clapping for them
jodha is so embarrassed
jalal continue his teasing session
salima and Sharif both loves each other
but they just can't able to express
bakshi scare Abdul
poor Abdul
uff Mirza and shivani both are just like tom and Jerry
both loves each other but they tease each other lot
waiting eagerly for next chapter
thanks for pm

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Jajo's outpouring of love in the restaurant - really beautifully written. 👏👏👏 A lot more of what happened in their lives will unravel in due course but for now we are enjoying their loving relationship.

Ruks is as mean as they come - she may have her reasons for her actions but whether they are justified remains to be seen. Salima and Sharif appear to a couple of star-crossed lovers and will they get a happy ending? That is the million-dollar question. Mirza and Shivani - may their cute spats never end 😆😆😆

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Nice chapter buddy
What a wonderful dialogue written by you that Jalal says to Jo in the hotel...Loved it
O God Bakshi is so naughty😆 poor Abdul ran to get it instead to retorting to her mischief

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

amazing dear its superb loving it sooo much really jodha jalal convo was heart touching and disgusting ruks..sorry for late and thanks for pm me plzzz continue soon...