NEW ONE: thread closed/ new thread is hereee

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Posted: 9 years ago
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NEW ONE
Thread one
NEW ONE
~YOU CAN'T CHANGE A PERSON, BUT YOU CAN BE THE REASON OF HIS CHANGE...THIS HOW IT ALL BEGAN

TEASER

"WHO'S THERE HA????...WHO'S THERE???" a rushing scream came out from a very beautiful young lady in a scary dark big villa or we can say because of the darkness its look like scary for her, she was showered with stress from top to bottom. While repeating the same words she was taking steps backward unknowingly to the stairs till suddenly she screamed "GOD" she felled down from the stairs to someone embrace, she opened her eyes to see her beloved husband carrying her in his arms, she already yelled at him "I HATE YOU JALAL I HATE YOU first you forget a very special event like every time second you scared me and then put my life in danger just imagine that you failed.." he stopped her by putting his hand in her lips and told her "don't worry love I will always save you and BTW I love you too baby" then he smirked at her and wait for her response which was in a very angry tone "seriously Jalal, LEAVE IT, now why you did this HA??? Tell me I want to know".

"Because I think my lovely beautiful wife...today is your birthday and I wanted to surprise you...So easily" he replied back lovingly by putting her down.

"HA really surprising me by scarring me WOW what a surprise, and tell me who reminds you HA????" she start fuming angrily at him.

"BTW Jodha this for sure isn't the surprise you can call it a small punishment for cutting my call before even letting me finish my sentence and BTW why you are so angry with me??? I pretended to forget this day to surprise you jaan...so don't worry Abdel didn't tell me and he hold his promise this time... really I SWEAR, and for the surprise it is waiting you in the trace, come with me" he took her to the trace.


When he opened the door he turned to her to see her shock, happy, love mixed reactions all ones with that teary eyes and her soft creamy hands on her mouth...

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Hi Guys I'm Duha,

I read almost more than 15 stories in Jodha Akbar forums so I said to myself why I don't start my own one so I took that decision finally and here I started I hope you will like the teaser and if I will get 10 likes its not that much but if I will get them, I will update the first chapter of the story also hope to get your nice replies 😉😉

that's all thank you 😳

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chapters:

chapter 1>> page 3

chapter 2>> page 6

chapter 3>> page 8

chapter 4>> page 10

chapter 5>> page 12

chapter 6>> page 14

chapter 7>> page 17

chapter 8>> page 21

chapter 9>> page 23

chapter 10>> page 26

chapter 11>> page 28

chapter 12>> page 33

chapter 13>> page 38

chapter 14>>page 43

chapter 15>>page 51

chapter 16>>page 62

chapter 17>>page 77

chapter 18>>page 95


Thread two link (chapter 19 to 24):https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4786484/new-one-2-thread-closed-thread-three-is-here

Thread three link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4812596/new-one-3-story-completed

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jiya.k thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story duha...
Welcome in Akdha Land i mean JA forum...
Interesting teaser...
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jiya.k

Congrats for new story duha...
Welcome in Akdha Land i mean JA forum...
Interesting teaser...
Plz update soon...


thank you dear you really made my day by being the first one to like and comment thanks alot 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: duhasaad



thank you dear you really made my day by being the first one to like and comment thanks alot😳😳
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U R most welcome dear n plz pm me whenever u gv nxt update...

Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Duha absolutely beautiful start👏👏👏... I just loved how you have created the scene... fear in Jodha perfectly written... her anger towards Jalal for forgetting her birthday ... and the way Jalal save her from falling... Beautiful start... can't wait to read more... Thank U for the pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear
congrats for new story
waiting eagerly for next update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo 4 new story...
aww.. nyc tzr...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nd haan pls, do pm me d next update...
Edited by sony23akdha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome to akdha land duha
congrats for your first ever story, concept is really nice.. continue soon

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