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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
@binduprasad41

Awesome update lashy Di. I really enjoy lot reading it
Thanks so much, darling 🤗
no doubt Khan sahib and heera shine in every situation but
guari I really like this girl
her attitude, bravery, honesty, loyalty impress me lot
she don't give up her self respect in that situation
the way she sand strong in that situation is commendable
she don't want to beg in front of them
because she know that she correct in her situation
Awww Gauri seems to have impressed everyone in this chapter... 😳 thanks dear.. I am glad you liked her...

I really like how you portray each character
each character have their own significant
☺️
poor gauri and bindiya because of their kindness they landed in great trouble
Yes
when I was reading that little boy story I was also feeling bad for him but he taking advantage of their kindness
Yes so many children do this.. even today.. unfortunately
binding was so much scare because of Khan sahib she burst out truth about little boy
OK I don't know Khan sahib is angry over his sahiba ever
but I understand his situation
he is frustrated because of his accident, bahadur injury and chota Faisal death inquiry
Add to the part that he had headache, that Kotwal is annoying him, that Bindiya is nonstop crying... that he wants the people to leave 😆
He wasn't angry with Sahiba... just necessity to wrap up the case soon... his irritation cooled down as soon as he saw her eyes...

may be his accident was not just accident somebody plan to murder him
we yet to know that part also
eagerly waiting for that
lots going in his life
Yes...
but heera she understand him really well
both Khan sahib and heera understand each other
They do!
I like the way heera answer kotwal
she shut their mouth in single sentence
Yes!
that kotwal and all men wanted to check girl cloth that was so disgusting thing to do
aaj bhi chote gaaon main aisi Panchayati hoti hai!
but why fear where Khan sahib is there
the way he bang his hand on the table to grab their attention is superb
our super intelligent Khan sahib
he superbly solve the case
and give lesson to his men to not to trust any one
Of course!😎
I hope now heera friends and khan sahib friends understand themselves now better after this incident
😉
I hope in next update heera got to know that how Khan sahib save guari and bindiya honor so that she invited him for lunch
waiting eagerly for that movement
one more time I really like this chapter
waiting eagerly for next
one more thing Di I really glad that you always like my childless comment not only this thread but also other
so thank you for that
and thank you for pm also
love you
Ohooo kitni baar kahaa hai... it's not childish...
Love that you made an id and have started posting regularly... thank you so much Bindu🤗

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
@shahbhavini

U know Lashy... what is captivating me the most😛... silent bond between Heera and Akbar making so curious. Between them there are only few words convo...but has so much impact😳😃 ... can't explain in word...

That's EXACTLY what I've been trying to achieve... and I am so glad you've picked on it, Bhavu... it's only been 4 encounters.. but it's like they both understand each other a lot!

OMG... Akbar in this chapter looks so hot☺️... his anger...his fury... his perceptiveness and his sharpness... even his irritation... and the most important when he understand Heera's silence😳... I was like me toh gayi kam se hehehhe😉😆...

Awww really?

>>>Poor Bindya😆... always create troubles for herself... heheh... but for a change it's Guari...

'We will do what we've been doing for so long... tackle the situation sensibly. Let's go!'

Yes!

>>>> Heera's main quality in her character is her patience, doesn't matter what problem it is she never shows her inner fear to others.

I know... she has to be (at least have a facade of) brave ...as their leader that's all her people have to go by, na...

No, her conscience didn't allow her to disclose that it was a hungry boy who'd broken into their cabinet - thus letting him be slaughtered by the pack of ruffians. At least, not over 2 meagre silver coins!

I would like to applaud for Gauri here👏... The way she protected that boy while hiding the truth knowing she will be in trouble... Guari is truly a virtuous persona😳.

Yes... also, I don't think she realised it would get blown into something this big... especially since she originally assumed it was only 2 silver coins...

However, now that she'd had a glimpse into the extent of his treachery, she was whelmed by distress. Not only had the boy taken her for a ride, he'd put her in trouble while doing so too 'Ma Bhavani... what a mess...' her throat parched up 'Please help me get out of it!'

Ohhh😲... Any good person would help in this situation, the way boy pleaded for mercy... I would help too.. and again how can anyone guess a little kid could be trickster like this😡.

Wohi tho🤢

'As though his personality that towered over their meeker profiles wasn't intimidating enough, the sides of his teeth grit down upon one another, revealing a very vindictive side to this man.

Awww😛... Dominating daunting persona... SOOO Hottt☺️...

Hee hee... I can read your fan-gurling forever!

Akbar turned his attention towards the window from which this 'boy' had supposedly leapt down as the ladies insisted.

'No proof except' he slowly held the silver coins up 'Except for these...'

Clever Man...👏

😎

'Stand up...' the older maid stated, blinking the mist off her eyes 'There is no need to beg... we have done nothing wrong!'

Wow... Guari resemble Heera here, I just love her prideful attitude.😊

Yes... they're both matured na.. 😳

Keep your hands to yourself...' Akbar said - his manner dry, though his fury had probably reached its peak '...or I will crack their bones too!'

OHHH god👏👏👏 I love love the action of Akbar...

He had to put a stop to their disgusting actions

Akbar didn't let her finish - what with her sobs sending his headache into unbearable spasms now 'Get up... enough with the lamen...'

Funny Bindiya🤣... Antic piece... I laughed out loud heheh

Sachi?😆

'Anyway, how much have they stolen, Khan Sahib? I will pay you back... and any fines that you will slap them with!'

Really.😲.. Heera... Oh god... don't you see our Akbar Khan is angry as hell... At a moment I felt... Akbar won't spare her...

But what to do... as soon as she stepped in, what she saw was horrible na.. and she assumed since it was in Akbar's presence... that it was something he didn't object to... she assumed he was being mean to the ladies just cos he thought they stole from him... though of course, she soon understood something else was up...

'What?' Heera couldn't help feeling miffed. After all, she was not used to such directness - that too, from a man! There was plenty she could have said in retort, but decided to act civil and keep mum.

Chalo acchi baat hai... Heera understood his anger👏... Wise👍🏼 decision Heera...

Yes!

'if there is a bloodbath... I will be the lone man left standing... I assume that's not what you want...'

Siti bajao koi...heheh ...😎😳

🤣

Anyhow; since Heera was the last person to want a bloodbath, she told her guards to stand back 'It's not a request... it's an order, Bajrang!' she re-confirmed, when they hesitated 'Stand back!'

'Yes baisa...' they reluctantly pushed the swords back into the sheaths and returned to her side.

At this age, Heera's understanding and maturity is praiseworthy.👏👏👏Her major strength is her poise demeanor in critical condition.

They used to be that way, Bhavu... by this age they would already be the 3rd of 4th wives of some rich noble/ prince whatever and already have children... .. expected to behave like mothers/wives/daughters-in-law...

some even became widows... they all had to mature very early!

What was it about this Sahiba's presence that managed to disarm his steeliness - his armour - time and again?

She began to impact on Akbar so deeply. In flick she defuse his anger😆... hehehe

Always... from the very start... from the canal scene, again in business office, again now... he's never able to be rude to her or angry in her presence... though he can be with anyone else that way

The colour sucked out of her beautiful features, a name subconsciously lingered upon her lips 'Khan Sahib?'

Subconsciously😲... Both are entwined in each other...

Haaan.. woh tho hai

this was just another day, just another incident, in the dangerous life that he led.

Can't wait to reveal what he really does? His business doesn't seem dangerous type...

Business doesn't 'seem' that's the secret!😉

You'll get to know soon!

loved this review so much... but you already know that 🤗 don't you?

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
@avika444
Lashy Bangaram Do i need to say how the chapter is ?? 😉
Yes you dooo😆 btw, thanks for squishing me so hard! 🤗

It was stupendous ...fantabulous ...dhamakedaar update .
Awww😳

Poor gauri is accused for stealing 60 silver coins , she know the concequences ...yet she kept numb ..only to save the little boy , If she knew ...by doing so ...she was digging her own grave , she would have atleast attempted to fight for herself .The best thing about gauri is ,she somewhere resembles her Heera Bhaisa ...she hows how to fight back without loosing her calm ..just like Heera . Poor Bindiya ...she was really terrified by the ongoing events ...Both Bindiya and Gauri thought it was a matter of only 2 silver coins ...But when kotwal Gufhoor alleged for stealing 60 coins ..they were shocked ...Here Bindiya's act seemed melodrama for Akbar and other's but it was natural ,Haina
Yes dear... at first they thought they were helping a homeless boy.. that it was only 2 coins.. kuch badaa nahi hone waala..
but when they saw the true extent of what happened.. they got very worried!

Oh wow ...Akbar ...Akbar ...Akbar...What to say about him He never fails to make us fall for him again and again ...specially today ...the way he handled Kotwal and gufhoor .
☺️

The young Sahib had apparently slammed his fist on the table to seize their attention - and he'd done it with such formidable force that the wooden stand had split apart. Well, since he'd been opposed by the Kotwal earlier, he made sure nobody would dare to ignore him this instance! NOBODY!

The first thing that came in my mind after reading this part was...Did he get hurt ?? well i dont mind if he does...for ...he would get a lucky chance to be treated by his Sahiba herself 😉 sounds Romantic na
WE girls always want our heroes to get hurt so they can be nursed... hee hee.. but no Avvu no he's not all that hurt... he has an iron fist 😉

Heera ... The way she stood up for Gauri and Bindiya was highly commebable ...this shows how much she love her near ones ..and will go to any extent to save them ..
Of course... that's why they love her so much too!

Quite a few? Is that why they had to be cross-questioned by 50 men?' Heera quipped
Anyway, how much have they stolen, Khan Sahib? I will pay you back... and any fines that you will slap them with!'

Of course ...her comments infuriated our khan sahib ...to an extent ..that he bursted oh heera ..which didnt go well with Heera's men.
Yup!😉 but she was angry because she thought akbar was letting them be mistreated...
he was angry because (of many reasons) and he wanted ppl to stay a bit silent so he can wrap up the case 😆

Sahib, this is our baisa you're talking to ...' they roared in her defence, pointing their swords at his chest

'Address her with respect!'

'Apologise to her...'


Akbar's reaction


Please order your guards to put their swords down...' he conveyed as plainly as possible, his pitch an angry murmur 'if there is a bloodbath... I will be the lone man left standing... I assume that's not what you want...'

Hee hee.. this part seems to be a favourite, I think...😳 thanks da...

Thereon...he tactfully solved the case ...im really really really impressed Banda sach mein cha gaya 🤪

So glad you liked him 😳

The last part ...CRRR...RACKKK!

He did the justice then and there ...mashaallah

Justice delayed is justice denied! 😉 So our Khan Sahib finished it once and for all!

Well...' Akbar straightened the sleeves of his tunic that'd been disturbed in the tussle 'I did warn you to keep your hands to yourself! Be glad you're still alive...'🥳

Hee hee... 😉

I throughly enjoyed reading the update lashy ...thank god u settled everything in this chap itself ...warna main pagal ho jati 😆

🤗 thank you thank you sooo much Avvu..love you loads


Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kuki715

LAshy di😊.Brilliant update⭐️.This time it was Gauri who caused trouble...and here I thought it was Bindiya😛.
Nah... twas Gauri 😉
Loved Khan sahib.The way he solved the case was👏.Is he a part time detective😆??
😆
But he snapped at Heera😕,but she understood that he wasn't angry just because of the coins.One furious look and she knew..same with him,one look and he calmed down.Awww do they even realise what they are doing to each other..yes they realise but when they will admit😡😆.
Admit karenge... anth mein! Warna, aur kahaan jaayenge?

Though I was a little annoyed when Gauri kept mum about the boy but now I am very proud of her👏.Even after knowing what could happen to her she realved nothing and was trying to remain calm unlike hyper Bindiya😆.
Like I said above... at first they thought they were helping a homeless boy.. that it was only 2 coins.. kuch badaa nahi hone waala..
but when they saw the true extent of what happened.. they got very worried!
Felt bad when townsmen were misbehaving with the maids...searching clothes not cool🤢.Like the maids even I was waiting for Heera to come sooner.
Awww😳

But I did not understand few things.Khan sahib did not call the kotwal then who did??And just when the boy ran away everyone came in the room.Was it pre planned??
Akbar's stable boys/managers raised alarm
kotwal and townsmen arrived
Akbar and his friends arrived
Voila - confusion galore!😆
And boy ran after he heard scuffle of footsteps.. not other way around...

And most important of all what does Khan sahib do exactly...
😉
I know dheere dheere we will everything..but after reading every update I get very restless and want to everything at once.Such is so your magic😃.
Thanks da... 🤗

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27


Another beautiful chapter...lashy sahiba...❤️ this chapter made me fall for heera and khan sahib head over heels all over again...❤️
Oooh thank you so much dearie.. 🤗

so d suspense was over i mean d truth was out while reading teaser we all were wondering why on earth would gauri steal but then d doubts got cleared for me that it was that lil boy who had stolen and to save him from khan sahib's volcanic eruption she had those coins but more shocking was all this was pre planned 😲 that too by that stable boy and teamed up with his younger bro...😕
Yes... the boy tricked them all.. but anth mein Khan Sahib found out 😉

i really felt bad for d maids after alll they had to bear all d assault but thank god akbar turned out to b their last min savior when they were about to frisked by those men...😡
Yes 😡

what to say about khan sahib intelligence at its best with excellent way of dealing and handling his men 😳 he knew d real culprit but i couldnt understand y did he get angry on gauri and accused her of stealing😕 m too confused with this😕
He accused Bindiya at first when they'd agreed to finding the coins..
But once they mentioned about the boy, things started getting clearer to him... the puzzle started falling in place...
till then they hadn't mentioned about anyone else being in the room/house na... but once Gauri explained, he understood calmly...

d way he revealed all d kartoot of d boy showed his excellency in alertness and to keep track of his men about their whereabouts and their activities even if he wasnt in town...😳
Yes 😉

heera again proved her diplomacy how royally and elegantly she managed d situation but her presence did have effects on him...and he too dint know about it...😉 her aura is defo creating spells on him and vice a versa we can say...😛
Of course! they're like magnets... can't help but be attracted to one another.. it's the nature of it😳

but whats with bahadur's injuries😕 i mean d accident and alll how and when was he injured i think we all have this kosthen dancing in our minds...😕😆
Hee hee.. thou shall know soon😉

anyways now m eager to read d story further specially d happenings in akheera's life their friendship likings and then love affairs and then etc etc etc etc...😆😉❤️
Loool... alright da...

thank u for this wonderfully expressed and penned down update...❤️🤗
Thanks for your beautiful review da... love you loads... and your presence here, is

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@luvuyuvi

There's theory which says "survival of the fittest" which is why it is not always right to forgive the culprit and which is why its impossible to always practice 'ahinsa'. History has proved this truth time and again.
Yes dear... I agree!
Traditional feast in the honour of durga baisa...
Panarhgarh troop in trouble again, but for a change not because of bindiya, but because of ever-sensible gauri.
Acchai ka jamana hi nahi raha! Poor gauri.
Yes
I loved one thing here... how bindiya thinks that gauri could not withstand disgrace, though she herself was in trouble as well. Strong bonds as usual..
That's what I'd said elsewhere too... I loved Bindiya's concern for Gauri
Akbar has so many problems at the same time to deal with.

Bechara still did not get the magical potion, I guess. BTW, we loved the 'snapping the fingers' wala akbar...
Akbar bursting out on heera... is it because she is the one who could evoke his real emotions on surface . Again ,
the reason why Akbar was 'charged-up' was because Heera mocked his intentions... he was really annoyed already... and Heera's comment 'Did you need 50 people to interrogate 2 ladies.. and how much fine are you going to slap us with..'' snapped his patience...

Of course, Heera had no idea that the people had not come there because he'd called them.. nor did she know that he stood up for her ladies earlier... or even that in his mind, he'd nearly solved the crime too!

With there being so many interruptions one after another (Kotwal, his crazy men, Gafhoor yelling, Bindiya crying - like a parliament session) he finally silenced the townsmen with force... and then silenced Heera by saying 'Let me handle this my way, I know what I am doing!'

Anyway, Heera is a clever girl... got the message😉.. realised that she might have jumped to conclusions too soon and kept quiet after that ... and without knowing what's going on in his life, already knows he's been troubled by other worries...

"if there is a bloodbath, I'll be the lone man standing here." Wah wah wah. This is amazing. We believed him instantly like heera did...

☺️
Heera understands when is the right time to be sarcastic and when is the right time to step back... she is protective of her people.
Yes... that she is!😉
Akbar is smart as usual. Kya ajib kotwal tha... he is drawing conclusion , but did not get single fact correct.
Gafhoor... real culprit!!!!! Tabhi sabse jyada chilla raha tha.
And there he committed the biggest mistake. Tu to gaya..
😆
Kuch log kabhi nahi sudharate. Akbar might seem unforgiving but its important to be so for survival. So akbar has proved that he is truly above ALL.
You know dear... even if Gafhoor hadn't accused Gauri etc... I would still not consider Akbar cruel for having broken his arm.. I mean the guy was out to slit Akbar's throat... even today in many places hurting the other for self defence is considered jaayaz... and this is 17th c na...
The man's a warrior.. if he doesn't defend himself, he would have been dead long back, for the kind of enemies he has... 😉

Loved entire chapter. But especially AKBAR.
Though I am feeling bad for him as well. Because there must be some strong reasons which made him akbar what he is today.
He seems to be the lone soul who is trying to fight all the odds which are in his way to survive in this cruel world.

You know, you are 100% right in that he carries so much of pain in his soul... I loved this part of your review... and yes, that's why he is like this... only a person like Heera can get him to stop seeing life as a matter-of-fact existence, and see it as a more positive adventure instead! 😳 the only one who can 'calm' this storm...



Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

And fini...



Yayyy

😆

Congo lashy 🤗and all dear Banjaras🥳
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Congrats Lashy di 🤗

Why did you reserve for 2 chapters?I'm sure CH 14 will be in thread 9 😆

Jhanu di had reserved 4 posts and disappeared 😆

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Congrats for new thread ..
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congo for new thread di😊

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