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Posted: 9 years ago

My dear Kausi!
Idhu rombave over!
Don't put me in a high pedestal..I don't deserve it!😳
Flattery is always dangerous..both for the person who does it and to the person who is the object of it.😆
However, the poem is very good, and you have conveyed what you wanted to ..but you could have chosen a better one..😛

Yours

Saraswathi Periamma.



Originally posted by: Kalgi22

For our sweet guardian angel, Periamma 🤗


Periamma, I wonder
where you keep your wings.

Are they hung in your closet
with the rest of your things?

Do you put them away
and just use them at night

or give them to Babyka
to polish up bright.

I know you have wings,
for this must be true,

'cause God always gives
them to Angels just like you.


***Copied****


Good Morning Manu and all my B&Bs 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

For our sweet guardian angel, Periamma 🤗


Periamma, I wonder
where you keep your wings.

Are they hung in your closet
with the rest of your things?

Do you put them away
and just use them at night

or give them to Babyka
to polish up bright.

I know you have wings,
for this must be true,

'cause God always gives
them to Angels just like you.


***Copied****


Good Morning Manu and all my B&Bs 🤗 🤗


very good morning kalgi di...🤗

& what an amazing poem it is...

loved it...❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">For our sweetguardianangel, Periamma🤗</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Periamma, I wonder</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">where you keep your wings.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">
</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Are they hung in your closet</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">with the rest of your things?</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">
</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">Do you put them away</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">and just use them at night</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">
</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">or give them to Babyka</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">to polish up bright.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">
</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">I know you have wings,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">for this must be true,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">
</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">'cause God always gives</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff" size="2">them to Angels just like you.</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">***Copied****</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Good Morning Manu and all my B&Bs</font>🤗🤗


lovely kal Di
I really like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
A very good morning to all banjaras and Baisas 🤗
Saraswathi Aunty,
Loved your yummy food and very good morning to you. 😃

Kalgi di, nice bit of poetry.😳

Manasi di, 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

A very good morning to all banjaras and Baisas 🤗

Saraswathi Aunty,
Loved your yummy food and very good morning to you. 😃

Kalgi di, nice bit of poetry.😳

Manasi di, 🤗


hey adwi...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

My Rhyme:

[The original:]

One two
Buckle my shoe
Three four
Open the door
Five six
Pick up sticks
Seven eight
Lay them straight
Nine ten
A big fat hen
Eleven twelve
Dig and delve

My version:

Chapter One and Two
Intro to who is who
Chapter Three and Four
Tragedy strikes at the siblings' door
Chapter Five and Six
Angels start to play tricks
Chapter Seven and Eight
Her message to the Rajputs direct
Chapter Nine and Ten
A villain appears with no concern
Chapter Eleven and Twelve
His mysterious past she wants to delve..


Karkuzhali.

Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago
Durgeshnandini thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello Manasi di, how are you 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


My Rhyme:

[The original:]

One two
Buckle my shoe
Three four
Open the door
Five six
Pick up sticks
Seven eight lay them straight
Nine ten
A big fat hen
Eleven twelve
Dig and delve

My version:

Chapter One and Two
Intro to who is who
Chapter Three and Four
Tragedy strikes the siblings' door
Chapter Five and Six
Angels start to play tricks
Chapter Seven and Eight
Her message to the Rajputs direct
Chapter Nine and Ten
A villain appears with no concern
Chapter Eleven and Twelve
His mysterious past she wants to delve..


Karkuzhali.


another splendid piece by you...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini


Hello Manasi di, how are you 😃


am fine dear , you tell , college today ?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



My version:

Chapter One and Two
Intro to who is who
Chapter Three and Four
Tragedy strikes the siblings' door
Chapter Five and Six
Angels start to play tricks
Chapter Seven and Eight
Her message to the Rajputs direct
Chapter Nine and Ten
A villain appears with no concern
Chapter Eleven and Twelve
His mysterious past she wants to delve..


Karkuzhali.


Wow Aunty 👏👏.
You are on a high today

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