AKDHA TS (THREE SHOTS) : THE REMAINING HEART BEATS (PART 3a UPDATED)

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Wow Hemu. Dear superb start, loved it..❤️

Was so sad after Jalal's last message

But the last line filled some hope 😊

Liked the manner you wrote this chapter in messages

Update soon😃

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

You know while reading this story I came across such a different feelings never felt before... I was feeling irritated with Jalal's nagging at first just like Jodha, thinking how jodha tolerates him... But after the sudden shock... That he is no more... I really don't know what to say!

You have taken up such a sensitive topic. Very sad one it is... How Jalal died in such a young age (he was in school only) suddenly? It's very tough dear.😭

Waiting to see how the story unfolds. Thank you dear.

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shyana

@shyana3

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Sorry for late comment
awesome ts
jalal left jodha
Jodha is missing him
update soon

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Congrats for ur new story

Awesome start

Jo talked so rudely to jalal

Poor jalal

He left her & now she's regretting

Ohh she saw him again

Is he jalal or some double role

Thanks for pm

Continue soon

Eager to read more

& sorry for late comment

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
me too res

😛

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
me first hemu

CONGRESS KAVYA 😛

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Loved their text messages..
May he was going to tell her the truth..
Yup it is sad...
But i m hoping that the guy is ja..

Thanks

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

unres for part 1
awesome
why did he left her
loved it
poor jo
she's missing him like hell
who's that guy like jalal
update soon hemu

waise superb title

You will know in next part deries
Thanks
Glad that you like it
Love you reply kavya ❤️

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

thanks for pm
in advance or now

kavya I m really happy that you like the title ❤️
And you are always welcome sweetie for pm

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: misty22
<font size="5">Omg diiio... My chotu hemu... Such a bfull ts... Really heart touching... I really felt d pain... Nd ws on d vrge of cryin wn i cm to know dt ja died... How he ws askin jo to listen to him once... Bt her project...really v tk thngs fr granted... OMG JO SAW JA... Story took a complete turn... I really hp dey r bak together... Cz they r meant to be... Really lovinh nd beinh loved is soo bfull... U hv written smthng beyond a story... Bt smthng dats real.. Connection... Ur brilliance is beyond my imagination... Thnku fr d pm deary nd plzzz update asap... Cz u know na dey are my energy... Love u loads.. Cnt wait to read more... Muah...😊</font>

musty sweetheart
I am really feel to cry by seeing your comments
Thanku very very much
FOR SUCH a lovely comments
I am feel cloud nine right now
Thanks again for comments
Love you lot ❤️ ❤️
Muhhh...