AKDHA TS (THREE SHOTS) : THE REMAINING HEART BEATS (PART 3a UPDATED)

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eshalli

@eshalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

wonderful chapter hemu loved it..
Y did ja left jo alone
I feel like to cry while reading last msg from ja to jo .plz continue soon dear
Thxc 4r pm

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

nice story
jalal left Jo
Jo see boy same as jalal
waiting for next update
update soon

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Abey ... Maine pehla ts tumhara pdha vo bhi itna sad ... Itna rondu 😭

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nice one yar
Loved the convo I mean jalal is so loving here
And they are school going kids ??
Will there be any leap soon ??
She misses him
Where he went
Did he committed suicide ??
Omg I m just quite curious to know all the answers
Plz update soonish buddy
Thanks for PM
Update ur other stories too soon

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

heart wrenching story..feeling bad fr both jo and ja..i cant beleive ja left the world..good writing..thanks fr pm..nice message and its true..thanks fr the valuable msg.

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hemu di nice concept.continie soon & do pm.thanx fr pm di

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Wow...
Marvellous TS hemu babed...
I really like the concept...
I never read this type of story people..
Jo is hell irritated with ja n scolded him...
Why ja left her??
I fell like crying abt jo condition.. Poor jo..
Jo is literally missing him..
Some part jo is correct as well as wrong also..
I know jo project is imp but she should also listen ja...
God doesnt giving sec chance ti everybody..
Jo saw same boy like ja..
What the mistry??
Pls try to update ASAP..

Y always came up with concept n best part is i always love your concept...
Best is its contains suspense..

Thanks for such a lovely concept babes...
Thanks for pm..

Edited by ANJIJHA - 9 years ago

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

awesome start dear
poor jalal just wanted to talk with jodha
jodha was busy with her project
so she don't wanted to talk with jalal
but he really wanted to talk with jodha
felt bad for jalal and jodha
jalal left her
poor jodha missing him terribly
now who is this new boy
eagerly waiting for next chapter
thanks for pm

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Ananya

@zuytre

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Congratulations for the new to

Thanks for pm

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Jasmine Grewal

@jasminegrewal98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Thanks for pm dear!

Awh I felt so bad knowing Jalal died and Jodha of course didnt know about his condition so she didnt pay heed to his request and worried about her project

Omg now she saw someone who looks exactly like Jalal will be interesting to see what happens next😊