AKDHA TS (THREE SHOTS) : THE REMAINING HEART BEATS (PART 3a UPDATED)

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

🤗 THE REMAINING HEART BEATS 🤗

❤️ @@@ PART 1 @@@❤️

JALAL'S TEXT CONVO

JALAL : Hi baby!! How are u? I'm so happy today!!Miss you so much... Want to tell you something... Are you there...???

JODHA : Wait, I Will text u later, I'm still busy with my CLASSES... And MY project ...

JALAL : Can u do it later? Let's talk first.. I miss u so much baby... Plz talk to me na...

JODHA : I have to finish this on time, u know that... How much its important for me...

JALAL : Please baby, Listen this just once? u can finish that tomorrow... PLZZZ... Can I come at your place right now...??

JODHA : What???? Can't u understand this is my project!? Can't u give me time for myself?? COULD U PLEASE? I ALSO HAVE MY OWN LIFE..LET ME LIVE FOR MYSELF FOR ONCE! STOP TEXTING ME!

JALAL : Sorry baby. I love u very very much. I'll just text u later... OK... BUT plz first tell me you eat something na...?????

JODHA :Can you Plz... Leave me alone for some time...

JALAL'S TEXT MESSAGES

JALAL : Hi baby, I can't stay long not texting you. I really wanted to talk to u.. I want us to be happy again.

JALAL : Hi baby, still u are not responding to my texts. How's your Project going on... ?

JALAL : Baby... Please respond, I'm worried for you already..

JALAL : Baby it's already 10 PM.. It's been 2 hours but u are still not replying to my text. I miss U SO MUCH already...i love u so much!

JALAL : Hum baby.. I love u so much.. I'm just here for u always.. The time is near that we'll always be together..

JALAL'S TEXT CONVO

JODHA : Didn't I tell u I'll text u after I'm done with my project ?! Can't u understand that?!?! Why is it so hard for u to get that I'm BUSY?? It's like there's no tomorrow..u are overreacting..WILL U JUST SLEEP??

JALAL : Sorry baby.. Ok. Goodnight baby..I love u..Take care of yourself always..I'll always here to guide u..I'm just here..I'll never leave U. OK AM SLEEPING NOW...

...THE NEXT DAY...

JODHA'S TEXT MESSAGES

JODHA : Baby, wake up..Sorry about what I've said last night..i was just really busy..eat your breakfast baby, I'll be going to school now.

JODHA : Wake up baby, u still have classes to attend..text me when you're awake..

JODHA : Hey, why until now you're not texting? It's already our lunch break..why didn't u attend your classes? Don't u have phone credits? Please text me..

JALAL'S FATHER : He left us already... my son left me already... Your boyfriend left u... he already left those who are dear to him... Did he tells u he's sick?

This was the 3rd year his doctor gave him WORNIG...we thought it wasn't true..Because no one can predict how long a person can live in this world..but to our surprised, his heart didn't make it too..

We tried to wake him up this morning but he never responded... There was a message for u in his phone but he wasn't able to send it..

JALAL'S TEXT Messages FOR JODHA

"Take care of yourself always, I'm happy where I am going..please, don't cry..I'm sorry I didn't tell u about my condition... I am very bad person... But i don't want to bother u bcoz I know how busy u are with your project... ..i don't wanna add up to ur worries..I don't know if I'm lucky enough to still have a chance to wake up tomorrow but I'm always praying that god give me a chance to see u and be with u everyday of my next lives ... I love u so much... And I have regret that we didn't have a chance to talk longer today... . but I understand u..u might fail on your project if u won't be able to finish it... I'm really really sorry... and I love u very very much... Please, promise me you'll be strong... I'm by your side now... I'll always be here... [/SIZE] [/COLOR] [/B]

AT JODHA'S PLACE,
AFTER ONE YEAR,
AT SAME DAY WHEN JALAL LEFT THE WORLD,

JODHA:jalal why you leave me... Why... It's being a year... And I don't forget you... I feel your presence around me... Don't know what happened to me... I can heared you voice sometime... Hey kanha what happened with me...?? [/U]

AT COFFEE SHOP,

Jodha come to the cafe and parked her car...
And started to come inside the cafe and saw a boy sit on a chair having a big coffee cup in front of him... And her surprised the boy is same age and face of jalal...
She got totally shocked...
Suddenly rushed towards him and hold his hand started to ask for apology... [/U]

TO BE CONTINUE...

Life is short, either you can love or be loved but don't make it hell by not trusting your love. You have full control over your life, but you can think twice and make someone's life a lot happier. [/I]

DONE GUYS...HOPE YOU LIKE IT...
AND SORRY FOR SUCH A SAD TS..
I am in hurry so posted only one part today...
I will post next chappy on next Sunday...
PLZ GIVE YOUR COMMENTS ❤️ ❤️
LOVE YOU ALL ❤️

I WILL POST SECOND PART SOON ... 😆 😆

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HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY DEARIES

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❤️ @@@ PART 2 @@@❤️

AT COFFEE SHOP,
ON THE DAY OF FRIENDSHIP DAY

Jodha saw a boy with same face of jalal and started to ask for apology by holding his hands...

THE BOY : Hey who are you...?? What are you doing...?? I don't know you...??? Plz leave my hands... (try to free his hands)

JODHA : PLZZZ jalal I accept my mistake... Plz forgive me... That day i have to heard you once... So Sorry for that day jalal... Plz...

JALAL : Hey girl what you are talking about... I don't get you... And I don't know you...

JODHA :Jalal plz... I say sorry how many times plz try to understand me... Plz forgive me... Plz... (start to cry.)

JALAL : (Seeing her to cry jalal felt immense pain in his heart...) hey girl first of all stop to crying ... (he make her sit on another chair)

AFTER SOME TIME,

Making Jodha to stop crying jalal very sweetly ask her, "hey why are you calling me as JALAL...??" And plz stop crying now... And tell me what happened to you...

Jodha open her eyes and directly see in his eyes and pause for a moment and continuously see in his eyes with watery eyes and put her hand on jalal's face... Which melt jalal to the core... But he composed him self and some how manage to stop his tear come out from his eyes... Because he knows if he cry in front of Jodha it's very tough to stop Jodha to crying more...

JODHA : Jalal I know you are my jalal... My baby... Plz stop lieing to me... I felt pain in your eyes... Plz jalal spoke with me... Plz If you want to slap me... Plz do it... But plz talk to me... Plz your silence eat me to the core... As if some one digging knife in my heart...

Jalal feel immense pain in his heart to being lie to his bestie his Jodha his baby for last one year... Tears started to come out from jalal's eyes which wet her handsome face and that give so much pain to Jodha...

Jodha very sweetly touch his face where the tears are coming out and say with heavy heart, "see I know you are my baby jalal... I know you never leave me... All are telling me that forgot you... You never come back... But this my stupid heart not ready to belive them... Never... In this whole one year i was live in only one hope that you will come to me if my love is true... "And tears of happiness coming out from Jodha's doe shaped eyes too...

Jalal put his head on Jodha's head and both started to cry as there is no tommorow...

JALAL : Baby stop crying... Plzzz... See I am here... In front of you... Plzzz baby for me stop crying... You know na I can't see tears in your eyes... . Plzzz...

JODHA : No baby... Don't say sorry... If someone have to say sorry then it's me... I am sorry... Not talking to you that day... And more then this I ignored you... And saying harsh words to you... Without listening to you... I am really very sorry baby...

JALAL : No baby... Don't be sorry you must be busy... So it's OK...

JODHA : OK NOW STOP ASKING FOR EPOLOGY TO EACHOTHER... AFTER ONE YEAR I SEE YOU... PLZ LET ME ONLY JUST HUG YOU... I REALLY MISS YOUR CLOSNESS... YOUR WARM HUG... AND HMMM...

JALAL : HMMM. what baby...??? Why you stop...?? Plz say na...

JODHA : HMMM...WO...

JALAL : BABY NOW YOU MAKE ME SCAR PLZ TELL NA...

JODHA : HMMM... OK PLZ CLOSE YOU EYES BABY...

JALAL : OK... BUT PLZ DON'T DISAPPEARED OK... I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU AGAIN...

JODHA : BABY NOW I NEVER LEAVE YOU ALONE... NOT A SINGLE MINUTES... OK... SO PLZ CAN YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES...

(Jalal close his eyes but on other hand he holds Jodha's both hands...)

(Jodha come closer to his face and started to kiss on his lips...)

(first jalal totally shocked by this sudden kiss... But after some time he left her hands and pulled her from her shoulder towards him and deepen the kiss more...)

(all people surrounding there started to clap for cutest couple ever... But the couple totally lost in there passionate kiss...)

JODHA : ( while kissing) baby all are s watching us... Plz now stop...

JALAL : Let ignore them baby... After one year I am feeling so complete... Like I m back to home... So just ignore them... And let me enjoy... (with wink)

JODHA : Baby... Plzzz I am hell embarrassed now... Plz stop na...

JALAL : OK... Baby but you have to promise me that whole day you spend with me including night... (with NOUGHTY smile)

JODHA : (Give a little slap on his face) baby you become more naughty then before... But I like my this NOUGHTY baby...(with cherry red blush)...

AFTER SOME TIME ,
IN THE CAR,

JODHA : Baby can I ask you something...???

JALAL : yes of course sweetheart... NO need to ask... Plz go ahead...

JODHA : jalal at that day I was coming to your home and your dad say that you leave us... And all that... I am confused... Plz tell me the truth...

JALAL : (stop the car at side of the road) hey first of all plz... Don't call me "jalal" i like only "baby" to heard from your mouth for me... And the truth is also shocking for me too...THAT I DIE AFTER WRITING THE LAST MESSAGE FOR YOU WHICH I CAN'T ABLE TO SEND YOU... WHEN YOU COME AT MY PLACE I ALMOST DIE... BUT WHEN I FEEL YOUR PRESENCE BESIDES ME... THE REMAINING HEART BEATS MAKE ME ALIVE... ONLY FOR YOU BABY...I MY SELF WANT TO DIE AFTER READING YOUR REPLY BUT MY STUPID HEART BETRAYAL ME...THE LOVER INSIDE ME WAS BROKEN DOWN COMPLETELY AND WANT TO DIE BUT THE BEST FRIEND WHO GIVE YOU THE PROMISE NOT TO LEAVE YOU ALONE IN THIS CRUEL WORLD NOT READY TO LEAVE THIS WORLD... HE WANTED TO FULFILL HIS PROMISE...

JODHA : bas baby... Plz stop... I can't heared more... I am very bad I know... I can't heard more that how much you suffered just because of my stupidity... I so sorry... (and tightly hug him from side)

JALAL : hey baby... Plz stop crying... Plz stop blaming your self for my condition... In fact you are the soul reason behind my life... Reason for me to live... Plz... Stop crying na...

JODHA : (Beaking the hug) baby... That means you are not gussa with me na...??

JALAL : Baby... Plz...believe me... You are only reason behind my life... Now plz give me big wali smile... Plz...

JODHA : (give him her ever green cute smile... With little pout...) now it's OK... Baby... Opps... Not only baby... My NOUGHTY baby... (with little blush)

JALAL :
Teri Aankhon Ki Namkeen Mastiyaan
Teri Hansi Ki Beparwa Gustaakhiyaan
Teri Zulfon Ki Lehrati Angdaaiyaan
Nahi Bhoolungi Main
Jab Tak Hai Jaan, Jab Tak Hai Jaan

Tera Haath Se Haath Chodna
Tera Saayon Ka Rukh Modna
Tera Palat Ke Phir Na Dekhna
Nahin Maaf Karoonga Main
Jab Tak Hai Jaan, Jab Tak Hai Jaan

Barison Me Be-Dadak Tere Nachne Se
Baat-Baat Pe Tere Be-Wajah Ruthne Se
Choti-Choti Teri Bachkaniyon Se
Mohabbat Krunga Main
Jab Tak Hai Jaan, Jab Tak Hai Jaan

[I] Tere Jhute Kasme Wadon Se
Tere Jalte Sulagte Khwabon Se
Teri Be-Raham Duaaon Se Nafarat Karunga Main
Jab Tak Hai Jaan, Jab Tak Hai Jaan

[I] (Suddenly one truck come in speed and it's brakes are failed... Truck driver push the horn continuously for clearance of road but... Totally lost in their dream land our Jodha and jalal didn't noticed that... The truck is comes very near to their car... ...)

AFTER SOME TIME,

There is lots of peoples are surrounded the two innocent dead bodies... With full of blood... And waiting for ambulance to COME and take their dead bodies to the hospital...
[What's the crime of them... That destiny plays cruel game with them... After whole one year carving for each other they meet and the day itself they again being apart by the destiny...]

AFTER 7 YEARS,
EXACT ONE DAY BEFORE FRIENDSHIP DAY,
AT 11:45,

A 25 year old handsome boy standing near to window of his room while looking towards sky which is totally covered by dark black cloud...there is not single ray of moon light... The moon is suddenly disappeared from sky... As his baby his JODHA disappeared from his life...
He put his hand on his heart and again look forwards sky...

JALAL : JODHA my baby... Why you left me all alone here... Why...?????? What's the need to do it sweetie... Why you left me... You know when I get conscious I got to know that some one donat her heart to me... But i didn't able to thank her... And another shock for me that you also leave me... Why baby ... ??? (tears come out from his eyes...)

FLASH BACK,

As ambulance reached city hospital with two innocent bodies the doctors immediately rushed towards them and give order to nurse to take them into OT...

DOCTOR : (Check them turn by turn and discuss with his colleagues that the heart of girl is working but the body is not responding and the heart of boy is very critical in condition...)

JODHA : (With little weak voice) Doctor plz transfer my heart to his body... Plz... (and jodha again unconscious)

And doctors transfer her healthy heart in his body...

FLASH BACK END...

AT 12am,

Suddenly jalal's mobile started to vibrate ... And jalal though is distributed... And he rushed towards his mobile... He saw a reminder in phone with the name saved, "FOR MY LOVE"

MESSAGE IN REMINDER,

BABY, HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY
I AM SO SORRY THAT I AM NOT WITH YOU RIGHT NOW... BUT MY HEART WHICH IS FULL WITH YOUR LOVE IS WITH YOU... PLZ TAKE CARE OF IT... I KNOW I TALK TO YOU VERY RUDLEY THAT DAY... AND YOU FORGIVE ME FOR THAT DAY BUT I MY SELF CAN'T FORGIVE ME... AND AS A APOLOGY I GIVE MY HEART TO YOU... REMEMBER I WILL BE ALWAYS THERE WITH YOU AT ANY SITUATION... . I NEVER LEFT YOU ALONE... AS YOU MISS ME JUST PUT YOUR HAND ON OUR HEAR... BY HAPPY FOR ME BABY... BYE... (weaving hand)

JALAL : (got to know why Jodha die...) BABY ... (only this one word come out from his mouth...)

TRUE LOVE MAY NOT HAVE HAPPY ENDING BECAUSE TRUE LOVE NEVER END...

DONE DEARIES...
HOPE YOU LIKE IT...
AND SO SORRY FOR VERY SAD ENDING...
GIVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS...
LOVE YOU ALL ❤️ ❤️

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
me too res

unres for part 1

awesome

why did he left her

loved it

poor jo

she's missing him like hell

who's that guy like jalal

update soon hemu

waise superb title

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

unres for part 1
awesome
why did he left her
loved it
poor jo
she's missing him like hell
who's that guy like jalal
update soon hemu

waise superb title

thanks for pm

in advance or now

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misty

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg diiio... My chotu hemu... Such a bfull ts... Really heart touching... I really felt d pain... Nd ws on d vrge of cryin wn i cm to know dt ja died... How he ws askin jo to listen to him once... Bt her project...really v tk thngs fr granted... OMG JO SAW JA... Story took a complete turn... I really hp dey r bak together... Cz they r meant to be... Really lovinh nd beinh loved is soo bfull... U hv written smthng beyond a story... Bt smthng dats real.. Connection... Ur brilliance is beyond my imagination... Thnku fr d pm deary nd plzzz update asap... Cz u know na dey are my energy... Love u loads.. Cnt wait to read more... Muah... 😊

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Titus

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congo hemu for new story

Love the title sweetie😳😳

Thanks for pm

But res for story😭😭

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pinu20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Congratulations for new story buddy
Wonderful update and emotional too
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Kaho na pyar hai movie ki tarah wo jalal ka duplicate hai????
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Thanks for pm
Update soon