OS for Rajat's birthday LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi ... just thought of writing a short OS for our onscreen Jalal's birthday from my forum friends ...I hope you like it, ...I jotted this down quickly ... so no edits ...will edit and fix later ...I hope it entertains you ...



Click of high heels disturbed his peace, then a soft voice "excuse me sir?" silence "excuse me sir? Could you please tell me the time?" He ignores her ... "hey are you deaf?" He continues to ignore ...

Ignoring the voice Jalal continues reading the newspaper "dumb ass, why the hell do you wear a watch and show it off ...foool" she mutters, slowly begins walking away ... Jalal casually looks over his shoulder with a scowl ...his eyes moves from her high heels and up her calf ...thighs ...butt ... hmmm...groovy curves .. .. his leery eyes lingers on her ass as it swayed sassashing away from him ...igniting his curiosity and lust ... His mind questions is she beautiful?'

"Hey you" Lowers the paper and stands up turning towards her ...she stops and turns around ... his leery gaze slowly scans her from head to toe ...lingers on chest ... "it is 5 to nine" their eyes meet, he holds her gaze ... his lustful gaze makes her squirm...

"Do you work at the post office? I see you checking out my package ...?" Pulls out her phone "I'm calling the fire station to put your fire ... Idiot"

He laughs ...full bellied ... "smoking hot body, smart ass and smart mouth"

Trying her best to hid her discomfort, politely thanks him, turns and steps away crosses the road ...

"Hey can I get your number"

She ignores him and walks away pretending not to hear him ...she had an important interview in at 0915 ... unfortunately while getting ready for the interview she forgot to wear her watch ... she had another 5 minutes walking to do then to check in at the human resources, she begins rushing and almost runs into the person in front of her ...lets out a squeal of frustration and attempts to step around him, her heel gets stuck on a broken concreate, too late to stop her fall looks up with as an expression of horror dawned over her face ... her body barrels forward ...a pair of strong arms wraps around waist pulling into strong hard body ...the impact of his body against absorbs her speed, he trips and together they fall on the grassy sidewalk ... closing her eyes tightly ...expecting impact and pain ...surprisingly she felt no pain ...she fell on his chest ...

His voice "Smart ass .. are you okay? ...sorry I wasn't looking where I was running ... I was running late for an appointment ..."

Quickly rolls over her pinning her into the grass ...she begins to struggle under his weight ...as his body adjusted for a closer fit ...her hands grasped his shoulder as his fingers tipped her chin, his lips touched hers softly ...she turns her head to avoid contact ...his hip pins her further into the grass ...holding her captive under his weight ...he seemed to enjoy watching struggle to get away ...lets his finger run from her forehead tracing her nose, lips, neck and down to her cleavage ...

"Hey Jalal, you horny guy ...are you going to seduce women in public now ...take your action behind closed door man"

The deep voice brought him out of his daze ...giving a groan ...rests his forehead against hers briefly then abruptly stands up quickly, reaching down for her hand pulls her up to her feet with force, she crashes into his arms as he begins explaining ...he continues to talk ... His words came quickly ...she did not understand a word because she looked up into his eyes and got lost in the pools of dark grey eyes ... her eyes were wide as she searched ...catches her breath as she lets her eyes wander to his lips ... sees him smirk ... run his hand through his shoulder length brown hair neatly tied in a half ponytail ... his hands were still wrapped around her waist ... a shudder ran through his chest as he brought her body closer to his wrapping his one arm around her shoulder and the other around her waist and whispers

"do you work at the post office, because I see you checking out my package now?" leaning slightly away looks into her eyes ... his eyes challenged her now

An embarrassed Jo pulls away and lowers her gaze away from him ... Grips his hand looks at his watch ...


"Gosh ... I'm running late" ...she mumbles ... pushes him, flicks her clothes and runs into the building in front of her

"Hey, I what's your name" she was already gone ... he stood quietly watching her hips sway ... Then slowly follows her in ...

She wobbled into "The moghul legal associates" all shaken up adjusting and readjusting her skirt ...trying to forget what had just happened ... what had she done ... his lips on hers ...his fingers on her chest ... she had almost had her first kiss and that too in public... Recalling the softness of his lips ...

She tries valiantly to pull herself together and mask her shock at her own behavior ... Stops at the reception desk

"Umm ... I'm Jodha Sharma ... I'm here for a 0915 appointment with Mr Abdul Khan" she says hurriedly and looks up at the clock ... 0918 ...she was already late ...

The receptionist looks at her from head to toe "had a bad start eh?" she questions, then shakes her head and points towards the restrooms "The boss has not come in yet ...which is very rare, he is always here early ...go freshen up ... I'll call HR ... you have about 5 minutes before his guard dog Salima comes down to get you"

She walks into the bathroom and heads straight to the sink, turns on the faucet letting the water run ...she was having a bad day ... even if that guy was hot ...Jo quickly freshens up touches up her makeup and glances at the mirror one last time, she still looked good, small waist, flips her hair around her shoulder, her eye make up was not too smudged, reapplies her lip gloss I can do this' she whispers, ...happy she wore all black ... she rushes out and runs into him ... He was at the reception desk ...flirting with the receptionist ...

"Hey ...you. You followed me here" she rushes towards him "get out of here... you really must go... I'm sorry ..." looks embarrassed, looks around, then whispers into his ears "for almost kissing you in public, now go" then ignores him and talks to the receptionist whose eyes were glued to the guy ... Jo flicks her hand to get her attention "excuse me ... stop drooling at him ... he is taken already ... now tell me ..."

The elevator door opens and another woman walks in ...there was silence ... Jo turns her head and sees the guy walk out ... the woman walks towards her "Hi, I am Salima, I spoke to you over the phone last week ..." they shake hands and Salima leads her towards the elevator ...once in the office, Salima takes the folder Jo gave her and hand it to the front desk girl and instructs her to makes copies and leads Jo into a well decorated office "just wait here ... my boss Abdul will be here soon" begins walking out when her cell phone goes off ... Listens then smiles and turns around looks at Jo "Abdul sir can't make it today I have to take you to the big boss's office instead ... the owner ...he is a really nice guy ... wise guy ..."

They get off the elevator, JALALUDDIN MOHAMMED' the name plate ... so she was meeting the owner himself ...Jo gets nervous ... Salima whispers "goodluck, see you later" and walks away ...Jo knocks ... no answer ... knocks again ... no answers, attempts to push the door, no luck ...thinks the old man must be sleeping ...knocks again when ... "do you need any help?"

That same voice ...the voice had been lingering in her brain since she met ...Jo turns to see him again

"What are you doing here again?" Jo exclaims ... "do you work here?"

He hesitates "that depends ... why you are here ...I might just work here, maybe if you'd apologize for your behavior at the front desk, lets kiss and make up then I might help you."

"Excuse me" Jo huffs "I believe you owe me an apology ... You are the one that ..."

"Oh really? Why is that?" he smirks his voice sarcastic ...his smirks were getting to her ...in a nice way

"Because since you fell on me and pushed me down, I've been falling ..." Jo retorts ...

Jo turns towards the door and begins knocking again "I wonder why these big wigs ... stupid idiot inside sets up an interview but won't open the door" she exclaims angrily

He laughs ... "maybe because he is stuck outside with you ...is waiting on security to open the door?"

"Really?" Jo exclaims anxiously "do you know the owner, he must be an old fart to own this large company ... I wonder if he bald too" she giggles " I can't believe he would want to interview a lowly paralegal"

He smirks again ... "so you think the owner is an old fart?"

Jo laughs nervously ... "I'm sorry ... I said that, you are not related to the owner are you? ... I should have guessed ... you are up here and might have some connection ... with the management, do you think he will still interview me?" She hesitates "anyway ... I don't know why we keep running into each other"

He steps towards her " Do you believe in love at first sight?"

Jo laughs ...loud ... "This lady is not interested ... back off ..."

"What if I told you I was Jalaluddin Mohammed?" He laughs ... Taking her by surprise ...puts his hand out ... "Jalaluddin Mohammed at your service ... and your are ?" he questions

Jo tries to slink away from him shocked, stunned he steps forward "cat got your tongue, smart ass?"

Grabs her hand and pulls her out of her shocked daze ...

"That door is out of order ...dumb ass ...if you paid attention to the sign" pointing to the out of service sign'

An embarrassed Jo ...follows him silently ... building up defense walls around her ...

Once in his office ...he half sits on the edge of his work desk ...as his sexy eyes scans her ...lingering on her legs ...

"Great legs ... What time to they open?"

She catches her breath ... Angrily mutters

"Excuse me ... do I have s**t written on my forehead?" gets up "what is wrong with you ...I can use my great legs to kick your ass!"

He laughs ... "whoa, whoa, slow down your smart mouth ... I could put it to use in better ways" then holds his hands up in front of his chest like to protect him from her wrath ...

She flashes angry eyes at him, clears her throat ... "I'm leaving" gets up to leave ...' he gets off the desk and pushes her back into the chair ..

"Hey, I'm sorry ...really sorry cross my heart" crosses his arms across his chest ... "really ..." goes on his knees "Jodha ...forgive me ...lets start all over" he begs "you mesmerized me from the start" gives her a wide smile "I'm hoping that you will forgive me" he was no longer a cocky guy he was earlier ...he looked vulnerable ...

She knew she could say no and walk away ...but she did not want to ...she had a feeling she'd agree to anything he'd ask ... Her heart was beating like a hummingbird's wings ...

"Jodha ...please ... would you like to go somewhere private ... Where we can talk ...?" he asks, rubbing his forehead ...

She manages to squeak a "No, let's talk right here ... I don't want to go out anywhere private, you already interrupted my life"

"If my memory serves me right, it was you that interrupted me ... And I believe you tripped and fell backwards into my arms ...then you invited my by pouting your lips at me" he pulls her into his arms and whispers sexily ... "do you believe in love at first sight?"

She nods ... "I did not ...that was before I met you ..." She blushes "now I believe in love at first sight"

"I like it when you blush ...let's forget the morning" he replies his eyes dancing, walks towards her and pulls her into his arms "let's start over then I think you deserve your first real kiss" his lips clamps against hers ...

"I'm afraid our first meeting was the most remarkable moment of my life and I wouldn't forget it ever ...in my lifetime"

Without another word he grabs her hand and pulls her out of the office into the elevator ...then down to the parking lot ...when they reached the car, does not open the car door instead, pushes her against the side and attacks her mouth, making her head spin ...

Taking her by surprise whispers "I want to spend the rest of my life with you ... Will you be Mrs Jalaluddin Mohammed?"

Wrapping her arms around his neck, leans against his chest placing feather light kisses whispers "you think I'd let you go now?"

"Shit I hope not" he winks reaching and swatting her butt... He smirked his beautiful crooked smile

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Savi.23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi prema dr🤗 finaly you wrote your first os wow dr its awesome..so cute😳 "you think I'd let you go now?"love the this line of jo to ja
you made my day :* waiting for the updates of your other stories..specialy ASD and MBD
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb shot 😳
Update ur other story's too
Edited by cute.ritu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh god..prema diii...ur amazin...wether its an ff or os ..u jst gt it done sooo bfully...d os ws soo hot nd saasy nd hunerous nd d dialogues were lk dat of a perfectionist. ...sm lk u hv grt legs nd den jo s reply..sen do u thnk i ll let u go now...were d most powerful lined...plz pm me dii nxt time..lv uh..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow prema👏👏👏
It was very interesting read. I loved it..❤️


I always fall in love with your stories and this one was not an exception.Well written..⭐️⭐️⭐️

But this is the first time that your jalal fell in love with jo😆 otherwise he always realised his love after making out with her, numerous times😛😆

No doubt I love this jalal too😉

Congrats for your first os dear.😊

and do send pms to your readers.. I want you to get more likes and comments for this lovely piece😃 and...

Plz update stolen dreams😭



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Posted: 9 years ago
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But there was one "locha" prema.😛
why were jo asking for a time when she had mobile phone with her?😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. superb yet bold
Love it Prema

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: savindi.db

hi prema dr🤗 finaly you wrote your first os wow dr its awesome..so cute😳 "you think I'd let you go now?"love the this line of jo to ja
you made my day :* waiting for the updates of your other stories..specialy ASD and MBD


Thank you Savi di, I am working on the next chappy for MSD ... it is getting too complicated in my mind ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
loved it
hot & sexy
Hehe


Thank you Sweti 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.ritu

Superb shot 😳

Update ur other story's too


Thank you Ritu 😊
Lazily working on the next chappy of MSD

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