OS for Rajat's birthday LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 155pari

Lovely os perma dii!🤗


Thank you Pari155 😊 will plan on writing more OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

wow prema👏👏👏

It was very interesting read. I loved it..❤️


I always fall in love with your stories and this one was not an exception.Well written..⭐️⭐️⭐️

But this is the first time that your jalal fell in love with jo😆 otherwise he always realised his love after making out with her, numerous times😛😆

No doubt I love this jalal too😉

Congrats for your first os dear.😊

and do send pms to your readers.. I want you to get more likes and comments for this lovely piece😃 and...

Plz update stolen dreams😭



Thank you Payal ... hahaha you good catch ...Jo could have took at her own cell phone ...hmmm ... Maybe Jo wanted to check out the guy sitting on the bench reading newspaper ... 😉😉



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: misty22

Oh god..prema diii...ur amazin...wether its an ff or os ..u jst gt it done sooo bfully...d os ws soo hot nd saasy nd hunerous nd d dialogues were lk dat of a perfectionist. ...sm lk u hv grt legs nd den jo s reply..sen do u thnk i ll let u go now...were d most powerful lined...plz pm me dii nxt time..lv uh..


Thank you Misty ...your comments are very encouraging 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: erning_w

Wow.. superb yet bold

Love it Prema

Thank you dear ... was trying to portray a bolder Jo ... did the chappy quickly without putting much thought into it ... will edit later and make really good and repost
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalwings



Thank you Savi di, I am working on the next chappy for MSD ... it is getting too complicated in my mind ...

its okay dr..great then eargerly waiting..don't think tooo much dr..btw you are on fb / whstsapp?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
You should have sent a pm if i could have not checked the topics i might have never come to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well, I can understand jo's interest then as I would do the same if "jalal" was sitting on that bench😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing shot di
n congrats for ur first shot di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow I loved this os
Jalal is cute
Jodha the last dialog Supurb

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