An OS: The Broken Nest - Page 2

Dear Stuti!
This story... a very hard theme... beautiful poetry. The rest later.
Thanks.

Originally posted by: alffim

Dear Stuti!
This story... a very hard theme... beautiful poetry. The rest later.
Thanks.

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

wonderful story Stuti...I think ur best creation till date...👏👏👏

each and every emotion of both Jo and Jalal so very well described...rather, the characterization is so good, to make ur readers get lost in the story...just unforgettable..

Originally posted by: eshalli

Dis is such a Wonderful os dear
I loved it
Really I feel like to cry while reading dis
U r great writers dear
Thxc 4r pm
Love u 4r writing such a superb story

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Stuti, this is the most emotional and realistic story I have read till date..
Jodha and Jalal's characters are so practically balanced with emotions blended
A mother's world is never beyond her child This line meant it all
Jalal's frustrated fatherhood could not be justified still was seeming to be so practical
Salim's, a differently abled son, his possessiveness and sensitivity towards his mother was explained extremely well. He got his talent from his father
Despite of all hardships of her life Jodha and Salim could not have grudges from him. For Jalal's line that stated was he not even worth her hatred explained his inner turmoil on Jodha's reactions all through their meeting
At last the only thing that she uttered exclusively on him was about his health, which again states how much she loved and was concerned for him..

Cannot rate this OS, it was something far more beyond AWESOME
U are too good Buddy⭐️

Dear Stuti!
Maybe I understand better this problem. I know what is if a child had neurological injury at birth. I, fortunately, was not as hard, as you described. Not cerebral palsy. But the treatment had taken many years, and that such children are very heavy and are even more hopeless situations, I know.
But I was very lucky. I had the best parents in the world. Best Dad of the world! I was - father's daughter. 😃 Although we, as in the East, the boys are valued more. 😊
Few can imagine what the stress having by both parents. And very often, too often, mothers are remain alone with a child disabled. Presses all: public opinion, family, a sense of guilt, simply elementary physical fatigue. If you still don't have enough qualified medical assistance, don't have money ... it's a disaster.
I have no sympathy and respect for the men, throwing their sick children and wives. But I will not blame the husband in this invented story. It is easy to say that we should "be good" if you don't know the problem from the inside, what is such the pain and blame, didn't give help them. These families need with the first days in a competent psychological care, a kindly family, in their friends. Well, that now have Internet and people can form groups to assist each other.
The mistakes which make the exhausted mother, can be justified fully, but their should be avoided - the removal of her husband psychologically. The husband must learn to love such a child, if he can't, him necessary learn, as learn to walk of a newborn. Some people are born noble and good initially, other people need help to become the good men.
For these children need not only special treatment, but also special upbringing, education. Their mothers (mostly moms) and their families should be, as say, "to deliver monuments during lifetime", but a real would be to better give their help from society.
Jodha in this story - a great woman! Many mothers who stay with their children, but she helps and others !!! The real prototype too?

Hello stuti I don't have words to say after reading this os this was mind blowing nd very emotional it to me bit a time to come out for this story I was so lost in it...

Flawless...
Just loved it!
Thanku for pm

Amazing, you are incredible. How can you write human emotions so well. 👏. Loved it.