NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 6~ Chapter 11- UPD 17th Jul - Page 120

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27

hello peeps down with fever... so couldnt come on forum...😕


harshu di...😭

plz take care & get well soon...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi di..finally here a week after reading the update! I guess that's how long it's taking for the shock element in the chapter to wear off anyway..
Less time again, so a short comment quickly..get set go!😆

Ranisa and Mahendar's dad's opinions regarding the proposal didn't seem rude to me, though it was. Such hypocritical thinking exists even today when it comes to bahu-choosing. This was still a long long time ago, they would be a family of saints if the whole bunch of them had been as sugary as Mahendar (and me a diabetic patient).😆 Morons😵

And just when I was calling them morons for their thinking, comes their by- product..a disgusting piece of vermin! I can't believe I trusted this git..especially after the act he put on after Durga's death even when Chitaranjan came to him with the proposal first. 🤬

For a second I was just happy Durga didn't live to see this rotten side of the man she loved so much.😭 I'm just super glad Durga didn't disclose the hiding place of the farmaan even to him. Noone has the right to play with another person's feelings, that's one thing I hate the most!! I loathe this git with all my heart now.😡😡

His next target is Heera now...I just hope he doesn't harm her in any way and she sees through his facade soon. It's gonna be tough though, he's managed to convince everyone of his goodness till now, even Durga.

But underestimating Heera because of her disability is the mistake he is making..she has a weapon far more powerful, he has no clue about. Her sharp brain decodes people and situations in minutes, even if it takes a while in his case, she's bound to eventually have her suspicions.

Again his time with that blasted courtesan didn't really surprise me..I guess nothing can surprise or shock me about a git who can cheat a lady who loved him with all her heart. And he says he didn't wish she died the way she did..git🤢*humongous pile of rat droppings* is what I'll call him..(it's a HP thing)😆

Coming to Akbar...that slave girl and her reaction to his adaaein We drool reading about him, she's seeing him aamne saamne...I can understand her thought process😆😳
Three things I loved the most in this scene-
One, how he makes her drink the Sherbet..his instinct, he knows he can't trust.
Second, the dagger switch..before she could even realise. That's Khan Sahib for you..challenges the speed of lightning Hayyeee❤️
And third, the fact that after the whole incident he still had the presence of mind to upturn the contents in the goblet so noone else got poisoned. 😳

Felt terrible for Faizan, that young boy who had his entire life ahead of him. One of the few trusted men Akbar kept close to his heart and valued..
Ofcourse he couldn't make any mistake in recognising his gal..the tug in his heart beyond just pity or sympathy was probably care, protectiveness and the silent want to somehow erase her sadness and see the Heera he's met stand in front of him. (maybe I'm reading too much into it, happens with me)😆

His one 'Quiet' there meant a lot...it showed his character, dignified and respectful. He's such a Heera..(punny effect)😆

Phew..done now! Shorter than my previous ones I guess I can't tell you enough how amazing a writer you are..the plot twists, the characters, the emotions..all perfect!!!! ❤️👏

Update soon..love ya loads!!🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A

Chapter 2:
'But, make sure that you send the Farmaan with your most reliable messenger... actually, I can send my troops over to accompany...'

'Durga... this is such a dangerous venture...'

'I know...'

'I strongly advice you against it!'

Let me come along dearie so that I can whisk off the farmaan from you and make a fat bargain with the Shehzade...


Chapter 5:
the brief inspection of her desolate bedroom, the scene of the terrible crime, had only rendered him all the more inconsolable.

I've searched her room and all the lockers and safety places personally. But the farmaan seems to be nowhere.

'Hail kunwarsa... our protector!' the children and women joined in, with newfound hope - a hope that they wouldn't lose their livelihoods. That they wouldn't be driven out of their homes. That their Harka baisa would be able to keep Parnagarh, with the continued help and backing of this powerful Kunwar of Manswar.

Finding himself immensely whelmed by their support and the heart-warming pleas, Mahendar finally acknowledged their sentiments with a gentle nod 'My dear people... I hope to fulfil my duties and keep up your expectations... talking of which...' his spirits that'd seemed to be ablaze until a moment ago, steadily dulled down. His eyes softened once again 'Where is your choti baisa? Is she at Bansi?'

'She must be on her way there...' replied Vaid kaka

She is my tether to Parnagarh. I cannot let go off her. Either Chittranjan offers her to me on a platter or I take her by force. What can a visually challenged 16 year old do?! Meanwhile I must impress upon the people of Parnagarh that I am their sole lifeline of hope...😈


Chapter 8:

Khalil to Shehzade: 'Huzoor! My sources got it wrong... I need more time, that's all!'

Khalil: Mahender boasted that he knew Durga's place in and out. But the chap has got it all wrong.😡

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But even before all these, right from chap 1, I was not convinced about Mahendar. This was a part of my comment for chapter 1.

Why do I feel suspicious of Kunwar Mahendar???? Am I over-imagining or is he this story's Suryabaan?🤓

I wasn't over-imagining after all. Mahender turned out to be a sucker.🤢 Actually, what struck me odd about him was his seeming perfection, like a perfect alibi. He probably wanted to strike a deal with the Shehzade himself. Had Durga managed to reach out to the palace and present the farmaan in the court, then he would have to control Parnagarh only through Durga indirectly. And Durga was a no-nonsense girl. He had to get her out of the way and control Parnagarh through Heera who being physically challenged would be weak (so he thought).Once he got control of Parnagarh, he might have had Heera disposed of too.

I wouldn't be surprised if he was lurking outside the palace and probably had opened the secret passages for Khalil to enter. What he hadn't expected was Khalil taking away Durga's modesty. That is all. That is what he meant by 'I didn't expect Durga to die that way'. HE was Khalil's source.😡

Coming to the rest of the chapter, the dancer turned out to be a Benazir offering him a poisoned goblet. But our Akbar Miyan was no ullu like Jallu (😭) and didn't need the heroine to save his precious fragile life. He could manage it himself and does so in style.😃 Wonder who Chote Faizan is.🤔

Connecting the poem narrated by Durga and Heera's penchant to hide in urns and planters, the farmaan is probably hidden in an urn somewhere. An offhand place that none would suspect. But safe overall in the palace. 🤓

P.S: In HP, Harry was able to track the horcruxes because special objects were chosen to encase Voldemort's soul. If he had chosen urns, shoes or old rusted knives, Harry might have never won.😃

This is the most amazing review I've ever read!!! Every point, right from the start👏 It's brilliant..!!!! And the HP reference at the end..❤️ I love all your reviews here and I'm so glad I read this review!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Haiku.

1. Waiting for so long
The Banjaras of Lashy's thread
Where is she hiding?
2. Mahinder shocked us..
Fear no shoes or tomatoes
Come out Lashy dear!
KK.


Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Haiku.

1. Waiting for so long
The Banjaras of Lashy's thread
Where is she hiding?
2. Mahinder shocked us..
Fear no shoes or tomatoes
Come out Lashy dear!
KK.


Periamma 😆😆 So nice!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update 😊pls
Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good morning lashy and Banjaras🤗
Dear author, New thread please😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Good morning lashy and Banjaras🤗

Dear author, New thread please😊


Yesss ma'am
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Haiku.

1. Waiting for so long
The Banjaras of Lashy's thread
Where is she hiding?
2. Mahinder shocked us..
Fear no shoes or tomatoes
Come out Lashy dear!
KK.



I am here periyamma... with so many at home...(and I'll be off on a small weekend break too) till August 5th I wouldn't be able to visit IF much..

So sweet your poem 🤗 loved it


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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi sweetie... 🤗...

So far, I've only managed 1000 words... hee hee... still a long way to go...
I'll post a teaser soon... in a couple of days...

@ Sojji...loved your quick speedy chotu comment


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