NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 6~ Chapter 11- UPD 17th Jul

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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Teaser for Chapter 11

So, he patiently put up with the offensive ambience, hoping that his trusted man would turn up soon.

Just then, he heard the clinking of bangles - a clinking that became increasingly audible. From the corner of his eye, he caught a lady approaching him. A slave girl.

Angling sideways, she tried taking a closer look at the man, whose face was partially hidden by the turban scarf flung across his shoulder and neck - the kind that riders wore.

Her chest heaved in near disbelief. 'Mashallah' she bit her lip temptingly. Such flawless features, upon such a rugged body - she had never seen someone like him. In fact, when she'd spotted the lone man at first, she wondered if her eyes had been deceiving her. But now that she'd got a better view, there was no doubt - he was every bit as desirable as she'd assumed he was. And since she was accustomed to coming across fat, old, ugly addicts everyday - this dashing young man made for a visibly delightful change.

If only she could lay her hand upon his taut arms once, she thought, just to see if he was real.

However, before she could come over and lean upon his shoulder, Akbar held the horse-whip up, as though he'd read her mind - giving the lady a sure sign that he did not want her crossing that barrier.

So she stopped a step away, and began playing with the hems of her veil.

'I've already told your friends...' he muttered, with his glimpses fixed upon the ground 'Not interested!'



Manswar

For a brief period, the stiff warm breeze wafting through the seven massive Jali windows was the only sound audible throughout that palatial lounge. The mounting suspense was so unnerving that the ministers had even muffled their breathing - in case they missed out on the next words that were to come. After all, never before had the palace inmates witnessed such tense exchanges between their Ranasa and another royal guest.

'Maharaj Chitranjan...' Maharana turned aside, so he'd be able to hide the rising annoyance in his eyes, as he declared his decision 'We've known each other for long... our doors will always be open to Bansi... you shall enjoy our hospitality whenever you choose to visit Manswar... of course, I prefer our relationship remained this way... but for that, you must abandon all such discussions immediately' an edgy lull followed 'Besides, it is unjust to pressurise our son at this stage... he'd promised Durga Bai that he would protect her sister... but now that Durga Bai is no more, our prince will not entertain this conversation...' he shrugged 'Yes we can give the younger sister 'temporary' shelter and protection if that is what you want...' It was obvious why the king had emphasised on the word temporary.


Maharaj Chitranjan rubbed his temple as he felt the pressures escalating within. If Parnagarh's situation were not so adverse, if his godchild's life was not at stake, his regal pride would NEVER allow him to act so humble towards another man - not even a king! 'Maharana... as your equal, I am capable of caring for my daughter... you know as well as I do that I wasn't requesting the royal family of Manswar to give her 'shelter'. I was seeking an alliance...and... and... ' he'd started off with a strong comeback, but unexpectedly, he ended up faltering before the next statement 'and... and... you may not see it at first, but this alliance will... will be beneficial to everyone!'



'Really Maharaj?'

An authoritarian voice had cut through. A woman's voice.

'Beneficial to EVERYONE?'

Seated behind the sheer curtain that segregated the womenfolk from the menfolk in that formal lounge, the Rani of Manswar had been a silent, yet very displeased spectator of the proceedings throughout. But, not for any longer. Chitranjan's last statement had forced her to forgo all such protocols - and speak up against what she thought, were absurd claims to sway them in his favour. 'Beneficial to visually-challenged Harka Bai... yes... but, beneficial to our Kunwar?' she seemed to smirk from under her veil.

The old king was mentally prepared for the onslaught. In fact, he'd expected them to bring up the subject earlier 'Please understand that Heera bitiya's weak vision, is not a disability... not to her, at least. Heera is very intelligent... she manages everything independently... and she is of sound health!'


'Maharaj...' Ranisa was glad to hear the end of what was beginning to resemble another speech on the merits of his 'Heera bitiya' 'Kunwar Mahendar is our only son... the sole heir to the entire kingdom of Manswar. His wife will become chief-queen one day...'

Arising from her chair, the queen took proud strides along the line of maids as she spoke - as though it was a show of how a 'real' royal-blooded lady presented herself 'So, it is understandable that we want his bride, to be a princess... to possess wealth and status that matches ours... to come from an illustrious family...' she exhaled 'Harka bai is only a Mansabdar's daughter... that too, with a disability...'


Chitranjan stood up, his brows knitting in bafflement 'She is a Rajput, a Kshatriya! Her father held a high position at court... besides, your son was going to wed Durga bitiya, who...'

'Mahendar had forced us into accepting that alliance!' the queen took a deep breath, the air of superiority in her tone becoming more apparent 'But I do understand your problems... a few years down the line, if my son decides to marry again... maybe for the 2nd or 3rd time... and if you've still found no suitors for Harka Bai... then... we might reconsider this proposal...'

That scathing remark from the Ranisa was the last straw for a man who was already infuriated by their arrogance 'Well... now that I know, how you've been feeling about two girls who are like daughters to me...' the Maharaj withdrew, unwilling to tolerate such sarcasm any longer 'Farewell and thank you both for your 'hospitality'' It was obvious why the king had emphasised on the word 'hospitality'.

Folding his palms curtly, he turned around to leave, vowing never to step foot into that Godforsaken Kingdom again.



But, his abrupt departure was stopped by the outlines of a friendly figure who'd just emerged through the entranceway 'Maharaj...' came his polite voice as he placed a hand on the heavy shoulders of the old king - a voice that sounded soothing amidst the bitter sarcasm dripping within the four walls of that grand room 'I accept your proposal...'

'Kunwar!' the king rushed ahead to join the duo, enraged by the fact that his son was publicly opposing yet another decision of his 'You will do NO SUCH THING!'

'But, I already have... bapusa!'

'No... Mahendar...' a desperate queen walked up to her son, hoping to stop him before he'd make any further promises that would compromise their family's prestige 'Please think...'

'Maasa...' he darted her a warm glance 'I have given this plenty of thought...'

The queen tried hard to retain her composure, but a mother's despair and anger soon took over 'You have been influenced wrongly... influenced, when you were not in a normal state of mind... and I will let no such th...'

'Maasa...' he raised his palm 'please... we shall discuss this later...' having shushed his mother's cries, he turned to face their royal guest 'I accept this alliance, Maharaj... I will wed Harka Bai on the next auspicious date...'

'I will have you DISOWNED, Mahendar!' his father yelled, causing a wave of panic in the chamber by his impulsive proclamation. Maids gasped. Family members cupped their mouth in alarm. And ministers murmured worriedly amongst themselves.

But, the prince did not flinch. 'But, you will do no such thing, bapusa...'

Startled by that attitude, the Rana of Manswar squared his shoulders and pitted his wrathful face right against the calmer features of his son. With such rage was he overcome that he did not care for what an unpleasant spectacle the entire family dispute was turning into 'Are you so confident of it, because you are our only son... you think, I would NOT disown you?'

'Bapusa...' replied the Kunwar, unruffled by his father's tirade 'I am confident because I know what I am doing is right...'





A Hukkah joint...

Arching forward with his elbows resting upon his knees, he began tapping his fingers impatiently, one against the other.

It was only a few hours past sunrise. But within the beige peeling walls of that dingy area, the smoke had already formed pools of clouds in the air. Pools of clouds that aimlessly floated around. Just as aimlessly as the men who were blowing them out.

When a fresh puff of smoke came swirling in his direction, the lone man turned aside to avoid the suffocating vapours. But that only reminded him of the stifling stench of liquor looming from the furnishings scattered around.


Nevertheless, by one point, even those smells had become preferable when compared to some of the ugly sights that he was surrounded by. Sights of intoxicated men, unclean men, lazing upon faded cushions, proudly holding onto their lifeline - the Hukkah pipes. Men so intoxicated, that they possibly had no idea how long they'd been laying there. So wasted that they could not see how the beautiful lewd women doting over them, were actually taking advantage of their drunkenness and stealing from their pockets in every way they could.

'Ai Khuda' he grunted under his breath.

He despised the place like nothing else. But Akbar Mahmoud Khan was not the type to put up with anything that offended him - unless - he had a very good reason to do so, like he did now.

This Hukkah joint, which was conveniently placed at an intersection between two towns, was where his informant, Chota Faizan, had asked him to wait.


*Classified*

Getting my hands on some important information.

Past sunrise, wait for me at the Hukkah joint beside...


...was the message in the scroll that the messenger had handed him at dawn.

And apart from the fact that this meeting important because his duty called for it - he had a personal interest in it too. Faizan was supposedly bringing him vital information about a particular person - a rival, whom Akbar was becoming quite sceptical of.

So, he patiently put up with the offensive ambience, hoping that his trusted man would turn up soon.


Just then, he heard the clinking of bangles - a clinking that became increasingly audible. From the corner of his eye, he caught a lady approaching him. A slave girl.


Angling sideways, she tried taking a closer look at the man, whose face was partially hidden by the turban scarf flung across his shoulder and neck - the kind that riders wore.

Her chest heaved in near disbelief. 'Mashallah' she bit her lip temptingly. Such flawless features, upon such a rugged body - she had never seen someone like him. In fact, when she'd spotted the lone man at first, she wondered if her eyes had been deceiving her. But now that she'd got a better view, there was no doubt - he was every bit as desirable as she'd assumed he was. And since she was accustomed to coming across fat, old, ugly addicts everyday - this dashing young man made for a visibly delightful change.

If only she could lay her hand upon his taut arms once, she thought, just to see if he was real.

However, before she could come over and lean upon his shoulder, Akbar held the horse-whip up, as though he'd read her mind - giving the lady a sure sign that he did not want her crossing that barrier.

So she stopped a step away, and began playing with the hems of her veil.

'I've already told your friends...' he muttered, with his glimpses fixed upon the ground 'Not interested!'

'Then why have you been sitting here... alone... for so long Sahib?' she asked, using a tone that was as seductive as her form 'No drink in your hand... no Hukkah... who are you waiting for? Angry with your wife? Annoyed with your mistress? I'll help you forget them... at least, for a while...'

'You heard me the first time!'


When the lady refused to budge from her spot in spite of that, he pulled out his pouch and tugged open its strings. Picking out some coins from inside, he tossed them on the seat beside him 'Go buy yourself some dinner'

She gathered the money cautiously so no one else would notice, and counted the copper coins in her palms '3 dams?' 3 dams would buy her 3 dinners! Had the man just gifted her 3 dams, expecting nothing in return? This was hardly believable! 'Very gracious of you, Sahib' she said, offering him a Taslim 'But now you've made me feel guilty... for all of my faults, I am no beggar... I'm still a lady, if only you'd care to observe me once!'

The sly coyness with which she'd uttered those words, was generally capable of enticing even her toughest customers. But with THIS Sahib, she got nothing in return - neither a word, nor a reaction 'If liquor doesn't take your fancy, shall I bring you something else?' she paused 'A refreshing drink, maybe?'


His brows that had been smooth and square for so long, merged into a frown. Why was this woman, a prostitute, refusing to go away even after being offered money? Was she so desperate for some company? Or, was it something else altogether - something not-so-straightforward?

'What refreshing drink?' Akbar went on to enquire

- and the next instant, he could almost hear her smile


'We have many kinds, Sahib...' the lady hummed chirpily as she swayed her way through - till she managed to find a spot on the floor to cosy up beside his feet 'We have a special drink that we reserve for customers as exquisite as yourself... a fruit-and-rose Sherbet?'

He slowly sat up, till his back touched the wall 'A fruit-and-rose Sherbet?' Now, that was an exquisite drink. Quite expensive too - and not commonly available in places like these. However, what struck him as oddest of all was that this particular drink was his personal favourite. A flavour he generally found difficult to refuse.

'How conveniently coincidental...' the young man exhaled warily 'All right then...' he clicked a finger 'bring me one serving of it...'


Evidently elated by the instructions she'd just received, the woman scurried off to do his bidding - and was back by his side right away, a goblet of the drink perched in her hand.

'Here you go Sahib' since the man was still glimpsing down, she tried to tap his arm to grab his attention.


But, he stopped her with a sudden order instead 'Now, drink it...'

It took her a moment to understand what he'd just said. And when she'd understood his words, it took her a moment to come to terms with it 'I... I d... drink this?' she asked again, to be sure

'Yes!'

'How c... could I? Oh...' she attempted a quick comeback 'You want me to join you? I know... I can bring myself another glass of Sherbet... and...' she set the goblet upon a low table 'Why don't you start drinking this... I w... will be...back with...'

Just as she was about to proceed to get herself another glass, she found her way blocked - by the telltale horse-whip!


'You'll drink THIS glass...' he made himself clear by pointing to the goblet sitting in front - and then, finally looked up at the lady's face to gauge her reactions. Yes, her features were every bit as alluring as her voice had sounded so long. But what a pity that such beauty had been put to many-an-evil use!

'What happened? Not willing to taste it? Not even a drop?' Akbar mocked - realising from her alarmed frowns that his instincts were right.

Alas! This also meant that the information Chota Faizan was bringing him, had been found out - which is why a lady had been sent to finish Akbar off! This rivalry was turning uglier with every passing week, wasn't it?

'But, I must say...' Akbar continued aloud, gritting his teeth to curb the rage 'You ARE efficient! It was quiet... quick... and lethal... the manner in which you poisoned my drink!'


'W... what...' the lady let out a nervous giggle 'what are you implying?'

In one smooth move, Akbar stood up and had her backed against the wall. He could sense that her cunning mind was plotting a means of escape - so he got straight to the point 'Chota Faizan... he's not coming is he?'

'I have no idea who you're talking about...' in an attempt to distract the man, she did what she did best. She started running a soft finger through the locks resting over his shoulders - the musky scent of sandalwood rife within its curls 'Besides, how could you think I'd have the heart to poison someone as handsome as you?'

'Keep your filthy hands to yourself and answer me...' he whispered in a low growl 'Where is Faizan now?'

'Who, Sahib?' the lady asked, feigning innocence. She'd come prepared for this, so her pitch was steady, however her expressions could not entirely mask the fears that were evolving within - at least, not from a pair of well-trained eyes like his.

'Is. My. Informer. Dead?'

'S... sahib... I... I...' she swallowed hard - watching how his magnetic gazes had transformed into the deadliest glares she'd ever seen. Yes, she was well and truly caught 'I... I was... I... '


Akbar detected how a ghostly-white was beginning to spread across the skin on her face, neck and arms - so, his informer HAD been assassinated! 'Darned Hell!' the rising fury turned his curses hoarse, as he fisted the pillar beside her, sending an avalanche of rubble - stone, plaster and paint - cascading down to her feet.

The fracas drew the attention of a few other inmates - but only briefly. Everyone was either too high, or too occupied, to pay heed to a kind of brawl that was commonplace at such hangouts.


Taking advantage of the lull, the desperate lady tried buying time with a sob story 'I... I didn't kill Chota Faizan...' she persisted, her nimble fingers stealthily inching towards the back of her hip belt to remove the dagger that she had hidden within 'and I was forced to do this against my will... they would've ruined me otherwise...'

'Listen lady...' Akbar shut her up with apparent apathy 'you clearly know who I am... it makes no sense to even attempt drawing your weapon out.'


But, she didn't follow his wise advice and yanked the dagger out to ram it in his torso. However the very next instant, her empty palm was throbbing in pain. The weapon had shifted hands - and it'd happened so smoothly that she couldn't even make sense of how he'd gotten it off her.

With nothing left to defend herself, the cornered lady had to accept defeat - and did so graciously 'What are you waiting for, Sahib...' she asked, her lips breaking out into a sad smile 'It is better to die at your hands, than it is to die at theirs'


It was the first instance, Akbar saw a hint of truth in her eyes.


Yet, that wouldn't move the vindictive young man - not even by a bit 'I'm going to leave you alive... so you can deliver a message... tell HIM that I've been in this game for far too long, to fall prey to such ridiculous plots!'

Withdrawing from her presence, he made his swift departure from that depressing place. But not before he'd struck the goblet over with the horsewhip on his way out - sending the poisoned drink pooling onto the muddy floor, while the empty brass cup oscillated to and fro.

Certainly, he hadn't wanted some poor drunken sod drinking the poisoned sherbet by mistake. But, he'd also done it to callously remind the slave girl of the mess she'd landed herself in - a kind of 'dangerous mess' that'd be quite a challenge for her to clean up, or explain away.




Guest quarters at Aidabad...

It was about half an hour ago that the news had arrived.

'The priest is waiting for us, at the ghat' they'd said.

Since then, the palanquin bearers had parked her palanquin outside the gates. Trunks carrying the holy articles and artefacts had been set down beside it. The guards had taken their positions. And so had the maids.

Essentially; all the arrangements for the final rites had been completed, all groups ready to depart.

Yet, she continued gazing at the urn longingly- a futile bid to postpone the farewell even by a few moments, if she could.

'Go ahead...' a solemn Gauri encouraged 'We mustn't keep a Brahmin waiting...'

'But this is all that I have of her...' Heera said softly

Gauri went on to hold her mistress' face with assertive affection, her own cheeks awash with tears too 'These ashes are mortal remains... but, Durga is immortal... she's WITH you... watches over you... tell me you haven't felt it'

Heera's dulled focus moved from the urn and trailed down to her own fingers. Stopping only when it came upon the diamond ring she wore - an immortal memoir from jiji. A memoir, from which she'd been deriving both, companionship and strength lately.

'Yes, I have felt it!' the pitiful young lady nodded.


Shaking off the stupor, Heera bent down and picked up the urn, holding it protectively close to her chest 'As a child, I was the one who used to like hiding in urns and planters... now you've been hiding in here all these days, jiji... maybe it's time, you came out...' she sighed with a heavy heart. Pulling her veil low, she eventually relented to fate and gave the ladies the order 'Let's leave'




Sometime later, when Heera passed by her manager on the way out of the guest quarters, she brought her pace to a slow halt, surprising everyone with the brief interruption.

'Kakasa...' she called out

'Yes bitiya...'

'Have you brought me some news?'

'Y... yes...'Ratan kaka hesitated, taken aback by how she'd managed to guess that, especially since her current frame of mind was not at its best 'but it may not be apt to... to... discuss it now...'

'It's alright' Heera gestured 'If it is good news... please tell me... because my day...' she corrected the statement so it'd reflect the sad irony of her life 'actually, my life can do with some positivity now!'

Blinking back a compassionate tear, the man moved close, to murmur the update into her ears 'Bitiya... the first set of letters have been sent to the Rajput provinces... six letters in all... the messengers have left Aidabad.'

A rueful smile crept on her lips 'Now that IS good news, kakasa'

'Yes...'

'Once I return, we'll resume working on the rest of them...'

'We will...' he smiled back, just as ruefully.





The stables...

Having finished chomping on the treats that its master had handed out, Bahadur felt a small pat on its back that said 'Good boy... now, go rest...'

So, the stallion headed off to its stall - looking forward to dip its mouth into a pail of cool water, while lazing on a few bundles of hay.

Turning around, Akbar went on to keep an eye on his stable-yard, supervising the attendants and their managers like he did every morning. Only today, a small part of his attention was elsewhere.

'Chota Faizan...'

Though Akbar continued to glance ahead in silence with his hands behind his back, the veins on the sides of his neck had tightened -it was a mark of repressed rage. The very first lesson he'd learnt 11 years ago, was that a warrior was not allowed to grieve for one of his own in public. But Faizan was someone who'd shown a lot of promise - a boy barely 18, about the same age as Azeez. 'Azeez' his stormy eyes briefly clenched shut at the thought of informing the young chap about the tragedy, knowing it'd affect him even more then it'd affect Ibrahim or Sayyid 'Better not to tell Azeez anything for now'



Just then, the metal hinges of a gate creaked open, drawing everyone's attention to the guest-quarters in the distance. A slow procession had begun moving out, towards the large palanquin parked in front of the building. The first to exit were a retinue of guards and other male members of that group. Following them, arrived the maids - with their Lady somewhere in the midst.

The lively buzz in the stables slowed down to a drone, with many curious men trying to get a peek at the ongoing events.

Noticing the disruption being caused to his work, Akbar asked 'What is going on, out there?'

'Not sure, Sahib'

Ibrahim beckoned a Hindu stable boy 'What are they doing?'

The boy observed the sequence as best as he could 'I think that's a funeral procession, Sahib... they must be going to the ghat...'


'A funeral procession...' Akbar inadvertently recalled her words'My sister's life was brutally taken away... barely 10 days back'

The heels of his leather riding shoes, that'd been firmly rooted upon their spot for the past half an hour took a few calculated strides past his stable-men. Till his eyes could catch a glimpse of the procession for himself.

When he'd heard about it from her, a few days back, he'd felt sorry then. But witnessing the tragic scenes of a funeral, in person, was more profound.


And then he spotted her, slipping into the palanquin with two other maids.

A poignant haze softened his sharp stares. She was dressed simply. Her face was masked under a lengthy veil. And she was hidden amongst many other ladies - but he would make no mistake in recognising her. Just as he made no mistake in recognising how her personality appeared so markedly different now.

Even as a soft-spoken young lady with a stature so petite, the Sahiba exuded an air of authority during every occasion they'd met. Even when mentioning her sister's death, her attitude had always been self-assured, her manner very dignified.

Therefore, watching her in a state so crestfallen - with drooping shoulders and head bent low - was not a pleasant sight. It was a striking reminder of how vulnerable she was now. A striking reminder of the grim reality behind her seven troubling words 'There have been threats to my life.'

Akbar turned away, a faint tug toying with the hollows of his chest. A tug that was more than just plain bystander's sympathy. A tug that encompassed a confusing mix of emotions - some of which he understood, like pity, empathy and guilt. But some of which he couldn't even begin to understand.


'Quiet' he finally ordered his crowd, out of respect for the grieving party - and the entire stable-yard fell quiet - till the time the small procession passed by.





Manswar

'Lord!' picking up a silk handkerchief, he threw himself upon the velvet divan, exhausted.

Relieved to have returned to the peace and seclusion of his private quarters, Kunwar Mahendar removed the pearl chains crowding his neck and dabbed the droplets of sweat that'd beaded along the outlines of his face. Playing the role of a peacemaker was no easy task - definitely not when the warring parties were two egotistical royal-blooded men.

That dawn, the debate that'd started off on a tense note , had swiftly descended into turmoil - particularly, after his intervention. Harsh words were exchanged. The arguments had turned uglier.

It had thus taken a lot of effort and patience from his end, to diffuse the situation.

Sweat and tears were shed by both sides. Promises and vows had to be made by both kings. Half a day had passed in this fashion - before the Maharana and Ranisa of Manswar would come through. Before they would see the 'other' point of view, and surrender to the wishes of their only son - by giving their blessings for this 'political marriage' that they considered beneath them.



With a grave frown, he studied the faces of his two confidantes standing in front - his cousin, Tejraj, who seemed very pensive, and his Senapati, who was much calmer.

'That was a lot of hardwork, Kunwarsa...' the Senapati finally ceased the awkward lull

'Yes' the prince dropped his silk handkerchief on a side table 'It was a lot of hard work indeed!' following a few moments of deep contemplation, the graveness in his features lightened 'But hard work that bore fruit.'

He leaned back, majestically crossing his right leg over the left 'Everything has worked out favourably though... and I shall soon be getting what I've wanted all along...' his brow gradually rose into a proud frown, a faint smirk emerged at the corner of his lips 'Parnagarh!'


'Oh! So, NOW you wouldn't consider Harka Bai below your status?' quipped the cousin, who was evidently in no mood to celebrate 'success' of any sort with the other two 'If I recall correctly, you considered even Durga Bai your inferior...'

'Well my parents are right... they are lovely women, but they not princesses!' he shrugged 'However, today, Harka Bai is the sole owner of a land that is more precious and powerful, than status or prestige... a land that'll help me gain great authority at court... probably help me cut a deal with the Shehzaade... so... I tell myself, that I'm doing this for a greater good...'


'I agree, Kunwarsa...'

'Thank you Senapati' the Kunwar smiled, pleased that the man shared his wry sense of humour 'And apart from being the most stunning lady I've come across... Harka Bai is humble and meek... a combination that is difficult to turn down... which means, it would be easier for me to take ownership of Parnagarh with Harka by my side, than it would have ever been with Durga... so if anything, these turn-of-events have actually worked out in my favour... for which, I must thank the old man...'

'We call it a stroke of luck, Kunwarsa...' the general volunteered 'because had Maharaj Chitranjan not brought up this proposal... the plans that'd taken you months to formulate, would have gone to waste, following Durga baisa's unfortunate death!'


'And if Maharaj Chitranjan comes to know what all you've done...' Tejraj made no effort to hide his displeasure 'what sins you've committed... to achieve all this...'

'I've committed no sin. I did NOT wish for such a death upon Durga...' kicking out his folded leg, Mahendar pranced up to the men. Snaking his palm around the back of his cousin's neck, he pulled him close 'You know why I'm doing this... Parnagarh is our only means to re-establish Hindu power in court... particularly if a fanatical tyrant like the Shehzaade will be taking over the empire ... so, stop preaching and don't forget that if it weren't for my father sheltering your family, none of you would be alive today...' having spat out all that he had to, he released his victim's neck 'Now go... and let me be in peace...'

In a bid to preserve any remaining dignity and nobility that was left in him, Tejraj hastily stormed out of the premises.

The Senapati parted too, but unlike the cousin, on a more cordial note.



Once alone, the prince snapped his fingers to summon a maid 'Has she come?'

'Yes kunwarsa...'

'Send her in, then...' he ordered, returning to the comfort of his divan

In a short while, a musical voice streamed through the archway, from where the alluring silhouette of a lady sashayed through 'Hukum... you sound stressed...' she asked, drawing the curtains behind her 'Dare I say, it's because you missed me...'

Mahendar took his time to turn towards the entrance. But when he did, he did so with welcoming eyes. After all, she was his prized courtesan 'Get me a drink...'

'Yes Hukum' she saluted, only too glad to serve the Kunwar. Pouring his favourite kind of liquor, she approached the divan, with the brass goblet in hand 'Here, Hukum...'

No sooner than he'd received it, she took her spot right beside him.

With the kind of familiarity she enjoyed, she needed no indication to know what her master expected next. So, her palms began moving up to his back, working their spell by loosening the knots on his stiff muscles 'Maybe 12 days was too long for you... to abstain from the smaller pleasures in life... I know Durga baisa passed away... but...you've only been acting all along... so why not...'


He immediately broke away from the glass - holding a finger up, to stop her then and there 'Not ALL of it was an act...'

'Yes Hukum, my apologies...' she bit her lip sheepishly, realising that despite his deviously ambitious ways, the Late baisa's death was a sore spot for the prince. And would remain so always. Besides, his feudal mind-set would never allow a lowly courtesan to disrespect a brave Rajput, like Durga Bai.

Nevertheless, this was a mistake she wouldn't repeat.

'Anyhow Hukum...' she tried changing the topic to something much lighter 'I hear you will be wedding the beautiful younger sister... does that mean you'll forget me, when the new bride arrives?'

Her question compelled Mahendar to grin through the drink he was sipping 'Now THAT depends... entirely on you...'

See you in 10 days time...

(Glossary of terms included in post below)


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GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Sahib - Mr/Master/Sir (Urdu)
Sahiba - Ms/Mrs/Lady (Urdu)
Dams - copper coins
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Ustad - Teacher/ Master of arts (Urdu)
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India
Tahar - battle axe (Urdu/Persian)
Khuda Hafiz - Farewell greeting which translates into 'May God be your protector' (Urdu/Persian)
Adab/Adaab - Words of Salute/respect (Urdu/Persian)
Taslim - A salute (Mughalian)
Hukum - Sir (Used commonly to address Rajput royalty)
Salaam - A form of greeting that translates to 'Hello/Hi' (Urdu/Persian)
Shubh Ratri - Good evening/Good night (Marwari)
Padhar jo Sa - I shall leave now (Marwari)
Zergul - Calendula flower

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A laptop, a dictionary, some imagination and loads of dreams... Trying my hand at writing, once again...

Great to be back on this platform... looking forward to regularly catching-up with my lovely old friends ... looking forward to making new ones too!

Thank you all for being here... and for your support... it means a lot... 🤗

If this made for a worthwhile read, please do leave me a comment/like when you can, as it really does helps the writer in me to keep going!

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Thank you for two utterly sweet dedications 🤗

A video movie by Payal on HBAS 😳

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S7BF0BU03k0&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]

A poem written by Karukuzhali (Saraswathi aunty)

The story so far...

My dear, do you know
Not a long time ago
How two young sisters of our era
Named Durga and Heera
Tried hard to protect the farman
And the people from the hands of the Prince?

The story so far goes on to say..

Durga being the older
Took the role of a mother
Protected Heera the younger
From any possible danger
She, who was the heir
Fought for the honour
Of her own and of her land fair
But alas!
She lost her life and also her dignity
But proved her responsibility
And saved the Farman
In a safer haven

And when it was night
So sad was Heera's plight
With her partially defective sight
She took on her flight
Without any fright
With her aides seven or eight
And lo! In the darkness of the night
She met a stranger handsome to look at

Within the haveli and near the stream
She had chances to meet him
He knew about her danger
And she about this stranger
Guessed he must've had a past
But waited for it to come at last..
He saw her as someone above humankind
Her cool courage, her special skills of many a kind
No wonder he wanted to be the protective hands of the flame
Or is it since she lit in him a flame?
How will the story move on
Is anybody's guess thereupon

So far we know only his name
But guess so much about his fame
Does he have memory of any old flame?
What is the reason for his cold frame?
Will the romance develop between them?
Will he open out his past or keep mum?
Will she achieve her goal of protecting her land
With her strong mind, used as a magic wand?

What is the story going to say?...


Karkuzhali.

(Inspiration from the poem, "Babes in the Wood")


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@ Divi

I love how each chapter flows so seamlessly from the one prior ... if Chapter 9 was "Changing Equations", Chapter 10 unpeeled the depth of how much those equations had changed ... what was hidden behind the poise, formality, and decorum of our leads.
I never realised how much these bolded words meant during the first read... 😊now during the second read, it's these words that stand out the most! This is what the chapter was about... you've inspired me as usual, Divi..

it is not the 'realisation'... but it's the poise, formality, and decorum with which they dealt with those realisations...

Heera doesn't blame the maids or those men and definitely not Khan Sahib for any of this... she deals with it with sense - blames herself, her loneliness and her state of mind for all of it...
he doesn't blame her or the men for any of his realisations (and even his blaming the sherbet is a superficial gesture) - the prime reason he shows such a reaction is because of decorum... and because he believes he is crossing the lines of decorum he'd drawn...

And hence, experimenting with a different style, the theme of this take (10) is "Hidden behind the zergul flower"

1. Hidden behind the zergul flower, was the perfect palms that stopped Bahadur and his Master from continuing on their solitary path
Grace and skill

2. Hidden behind the zergul flower, was the healing touch, not only of its own but also of the Heera who was nurturing it
Yet the healer needed some cathartic medicine herself

3. Hidden behind the zergul flower, was the soil that seemed as rough as its Master and his words
Only 'Seemed'

4. Hidden behind the zergul flower, gifted fresh, bright, and blooming, was the truth that perhaps the soil nor its Master was as harsh as the facade
True!

5. Hidden behind the zergul flower, in the guise of a gift, was the tit for tat that captured the tension of all those entangled together by circumstances
Yes!

6. Hidden behind the zergul flower, when gifted to her, was a new flutter of excitement that ruffled Heera's poised and composed surface
Yes... a new flutter... like a never before seen flower😳

7. Hidden behind the zergul flower and its associated distractions was Harka's bout of tears and sadness in remembrance of Durga that no distraction could evaporate
Of course...

8. Hidden behind the zergul flower, was a healing vibrance encased in fragility ... like the Heera that Akbar felt an instinct to protect
Awww the tender plants did remind him of her😳

9. Hidden behind the zergul flower, were the hazel eyes that Akbar wanted to discard from his thoughts like the ring on his finger


10. Hidden behind the zergul flower and the memory of its nurtuter, was a darkness that was compelling Akbar to erase the very healing touch that had entered his life

That was a different type of take so hope it worked out. Thanks again writer-e-khaas for engaging us so well into the lives of Harka and Akbar. And of course, I am eagerly awaiting what is hidden in Akbar's past.
The past is hidden because that's what he is na... justifying the title of the book, he is a stranger... to both Heera and to us...
But, don't worry the wait will not be too long... 🤗

love you... 🤗 so so so much!

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what to say about this update lashy ...
Its truly truly Magical bangaram...
She called me 'bangaram'... lashy knows avu reserves this word for specialest people..so she does a lashy dance

totally akeeralicious chapter ...wish the chap never ended but unfortunately it did
Awww😳
Starting from the begining...Akbars continuos gazing session that distracted our chui mui Heera's focus from her work ...Then azzez and co's comments
Loool... 😃

They must find it funny that in less than a week... they've managed to take over the 'eminent' Khan Sahib's guest quarters... his kitchens... and currently, his gardens too!
U know lashy i laughed hard when i read this part ...and trust im still laughing 😆
Hee hee... come to think of it... the guy was a bachelor... had a bachelor pad... that's slowly being transformed!😆

Im just amazed by the bond shared by Akbar and Bahadur ...he knows his master so well that even with his mere touch he guessed whether the commanad was full fledged one or not .
Yes da... 😳

Hahaha Heera's daasis cum friends r throwing more tantrums and have more attitude then their mistress herself and they showed their displeasure towards mughals straightly .
I know!

OMG...Azzez and his sweet tit for tat revenge game was amazing...actually very well planned but our smart heera caught the prank and its hidden message too ...
Yes it was...
And Heera is shaatir... she'll know it... esp if it's to do with Khan Sahib na... 😉

Wow Akbar Azeez and gang having gala time with chacha jaan and " their sherbet" 😉 , poor chacha jaan ..how is he dealing with these fellas .
He LOVES them.. he wishes his nephew wasn't a bachelor... so he'd have a large family to play with... but for now, he has to do with Ibrahim, Azeez and Sayyid😆

Hahaha and this time Akbar became bakra ...hmm not fair. ...but i loved this tease-a-thon game .
he generally escapes... but now that harka sahiba is in the picture, maybe they had a good reason to pull his leg😉

Despite the fact that he might have abruptly rode off from her presence that morning. Despite the fact he might not have admitted it yet - even to himself - there was little doubt that the patch of garden she'd tended to with such precision and care, was going to grow to become the most beautiful aspect of the entire haveli. Even in the sparse light of night, those saplings and flowerbeds appeared so tender and promising - as if hinting to anyone who gazed upon them, of the nature of the Sahiba who'd planted them.
Aww lashy ...this particular part ..i loved it so much yaar .
Thank you so so so much darling... thanks a lot
And the update ended ...why 😭
So that next one can come..
it's so nice.. you being here... 🤗

@luvuyuvi

Wow lovely chapter
A girl who can take care of the plants and leaves...
A man who can love and understand his horses...
That sounded like a poem!

Why did they blame bindiya for being impulsive. All of her maids are impulsive. Of cource apart from gauri and dhani.
But nevertheless they are adorable too. They love heera so much.
Yes they do! I guess it's because they saw the men sniggering (and when you catch someone laughing, in your direction - you assume it's at you na)

Heera finding it difficult to forget durga. Her only family it was so sad to watch her crying.
Yes 😭

The fact that she started having expectations from relatively stranger is making her angry on herself. watching her reaction after knowing that flower wasn't from akbar. I wish ki kaash Akbar hi flower deta atleast she wouldn't have cried so much.
Had Akbar given her the flower... things would have taken an entirely different route... first of all she wouldn't be feeling so lonely so depressed so down😭... but, i wouldn't make sense for Akbar to give her a flower...

Akbar's presence is somehow distracting her.

Akbar wanted to stay there for some more time. Even bahadur understands this. And then he whispered to bahadur "come on bahadur" as if bahadur wasn't moving. Akbar is so cute.
Loool...😆

Azeez n others were teasing Akbar. Only azeez could do this gustaakhi of teasing akbar.
He's always been the mischievous one!😆

Akbar too is somewhat affected by harka. Maybe because she is the only lady who could see through his soul. A sense of protectiveness is evoking In Akbar for heera. He blames the drink for getting diverted. "Have they mixed something in this?"
Bolded

With your due permission, I am answering on azeez's behalf. Yes, harka baisa have mixed her magical potion in this, which is capable of disturbing you.
I hope khan sahib will spare me after this.
Tsk tsk... don't know Akanksha... you might have to ask him yourself!😉

P.S. heera is so gentle towards everyone. Doesn't get angry very often and so forgiving.
That is both, her nature and her upbringing! Thanks for your sweet review Akanksha 🤗 loved it

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Congrats for new thread,lashy 🤗
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Cant wait to spend my weekend with ur update,.😊
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congrats for new thread...so one thread for 2 chapters...means 24 more to come, after this one😉

anyway, replied to ur reply in previous thread..😛
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Originally posted by: lashy

Reserved for reply😳



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