AKDHA SS: MY JO'S TANTRUMS.... Chappy 9(b) updated..yipee.. Pg 65.. - Page 28

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

another painful update
but yes very well written
I never thought story turn this way
bharmal warn jodha
so jodha agree to leave jalal
but god she cut her wrist and write jalal name
poor girl how much she loves jalal
sujamal shock to see her
bharmal also feeling guilty
he also can't able to see her in that condition
only jalal save her life so bharmal beg Mirza to call him
jalal is so happy to return back to his love
but Mirza call shock him to core
God he is so scare to loose her
he himself injure but he least interested in that
bharmal shock to see him in that condition
now he understand no body loves jodha more than jalal
jalal don't want to eat something also
at last he breakdown in front of bharmal
bharmal also can't able to see him
I hope in next chapter everything is well
so plz update next chapter soon
thanks for pm dear
I really like this chapter
everything written so perfectly

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

superb updates dear...

i felt very bad got jodha condition she couldn't say anything to anyone...

good that jala saved jodha nd jodha father understood his mistake...

update soon..

nd thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: Aaradhya01234

Awesome update sweety...
And very nice story concept
All chapters r amazing
I really enjoyed them
⭐️
Sorry for late reply and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: misty22

I m sooo much obliged to read ur cmnt... I eagerly wait fr ur bfull reply... Dey are d sweetest... U hv always been my encouragement source.. Thnku soo soo soo much..😳

I am glad you like my reply dear
but I am not good in words so that's all I am able to write
but you deserve much more
love you amisha

Originally posted by: lolo91

ch8👏

i am speechless .

.you brough tears to my eyes ..

.mindblowing and very emotional

as i said bharmal really loved maina

and really in so much pain

i felt sorry for him but when he asked jodha such shameless request i felt to slap him

..either to break jalal heart or he will kill him

poor jo ..she loves jalal to the extent of sacrificing her self

and he understand that but couldnt imagine

oh what jodha did for jalal is so beautiful and painfu

l ..she carved his name on her wrist

..my lovely brave baby.

.i loved her so much when she did that ..its a kind of strength i appreciate

again i cant help to say how you wrote it very beautifully amu ..amazing

ok now sujamal found jo

..his baby sister lying in her blood pale and lifeless😭

bharmal took jo to hospital and fearing her loss 😭

jo blood is very rare o- is my blood as well ..😆 poor us😆

oh bharmal called all and mirza came to the rescue saying our jallu blood is that only

you know what the best thing in this amu ..that humyun blood will run in jo vain😉

oh jallu out of town picking gifts for his sweet fiance .

.mirza called him and instead of teasing him he gave him the worst news

poor jallu ..his condition is so painful

he gave jodha too much blood and seeing her in that condition he felt pain

bharmal felt bad for jallu knowing he love her so much

beautiful👏 please save jo 😳

Amazing, mind-blowing and emotional update dear... Bharmal is angry... Jo tried to suicide... Bharmal realize his mistake... Jo wrote jalal's name on her wrist... Hope jo is save... Continue soon dear... Thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

I am glad you like my reply dear
but I am not good in words so that's all I am able to write
but you deserve much more
love you amisha

Both chptrs r awesome
loved it

thnks for pm

aah dear I don't have words its its beautiful very beautiful and emotional too thank you sooo much mishu yes you full filled your promise my dearu and for your wonderful chapter too I just love it the way joja love each other superb job dear you are amazing writer ...muaaah... and iam sooo sooo sorry for this much late actually you know na my exams is coming soo I have to complete some assignment thats why iam little bit busy .. but Saturday ko maine raat me kuch dear wait kiya tha tumhaare update ka jab nahi aaya to mai jaldi soo gayi thi sooo sorry shona ... and plzzz continue soon don't be late ok iam eagerly waiting for your next update and thanku for pm me ...

Lovely chappy...
Pls can u dec the size of your font n give little space...
So it is easy to read...
Thanks for pm