AKDHA SS: MY JO'S TANTRUMS.... Chappy 9(b) updated..yipee.. Pg 65.. - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww finally my rasgulla updated...
SO sorry sweetheart for late reply
YOU KNOW NA my condition
Now back to the story...
As usual you rock it... ❤️
Haila.. . My jo is kidnapped
Who the hell is he...
Awww my poor jallu. ...
Ahem... This cheap sarif. ...
I will kill him
If he L is in front of me 😆
What the hell.. ...? This sarif...
TRY to kiss jo...
But wow our jallu is come on time. ...
Wow jalal's decision is right...
SO carrying he is...
I am falling love with him again... ❤️

Awww jalal kiss her...
AND the hug... Superb fabulous
Wow he made a good for jo wow...
Heee handsome dinosaur again
But misty from when dinosaur started to cook.. [ LOL]
But koi na I love this dianosur too 😆
Love over all chappy... ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I will read second part soon darling...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres misty
FOR PART 2
MY my both were sleeping each other arms
And jallu off what to say... 😆
And jo started to admire him...
Awww the description of jallu os very hot... .
AND the kissable lips
MY my... I want to kiss it 😆
Awww she started to kiss him...
Awww definitely jo get shy very shy...
AND don't find space to hide
He he yea jalal's arms is best place to hide😆
Awww little puppy enter in story...
Wow wow wow...
AND jalal is jealous from. Puppy...??
Misty doe rest of the part
I don't have word baby
YOU totally make my day today
After reading I think I am smiling whole day like fool 😆
The scene at jalal's home os so embarrassing for both...
MY my they again sleep in each other arms...
Misty one thing I will bet with you
Now you are going towards a become world best writer...
SO best wishes for it... ..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

Unres misty
FOR PART 2
MY my both were sleeping each other arms
And jallu off what to say... 😆
And jo started to admire him...
Awww the description of jallu os very hot... .
AND the kissable lips
MY my... I want to kiss it 😆
Awww she started to kiss him...
Awww definitely jo get shy very shy...
AND don't find space to hide
He he yea jalal's arms is best place to hide😆
Awww little puppy enter in story...
Wow wow wow...
AND jalal is jealous from. Puppy...??
Misty doe rest of the part
I don't have word baby
YOU totally make my day today
After reading I think I am smiling whole day like fool 😆
The scene at jalal's home os so embarrassing for both...
MY my they again sleep in each other arms...
Misty one thing I will bet with you
Now you are going towards a become world best writer...
SO best wishes for it... ..

Noo dii... U md my day... Ur cmnts drift me to gv my best... Nd m nt evn close to u... Ur my ideal... Muah... Bt u know fr ahead my head is blank...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
momma wants update mishu *pout
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Posted: 9 years ago
where is the update badmash
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow amisha in just first look i really like your story..
you become an amazing writter..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chappy..
Lovely time spending ja n jo..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
HEY SWEETIES... M BACK WD MY USELESS UPDATE... ENJOY READING...

CHAPPY 6:-


The trio had a peaceful sleep... Ja had snuggled himself into his girl's bosom... As if dat ws d only place where he felt protected... Bt dey cd sleep no more... Kiara 's melodious cry disturbed dm... Jo gt up wd a sudden jerk hearing d cry of d baby... She immediately gt up nd took her in her arms nd began cuddling her... No sooner did she found herself in jo' s arms than she stopped crying nd started smiling... Jalal ws soo happy... He had started visualising his nd jo's child in her arms nd wat nt... Nd ws blushing too... (how cute na, ja blushing)... Jo noticed dis nd said"oh mr. Y ur blushing lk a newly wedded bride"... Nd started giggling... Ja cm to his senses nd ws a bit embarrassed.. Nd said" me.. Blushing.. No. N. Oo. Ur. Ur daydreaming.. Huh.. Dnt know wat nonsense are u sayin".. Sayin so he left to escape dat situation... Jo bursted into laughter seeing MR JALALUDDIN MUHAMMED going all shy... She looked towards d baby who ws givin her a confused look to y ws she laughing... " see baby ur mamujaan, he soo cute na... Nd i m in lv wd my cutie"...

AFTER 1 HR:-


bakshi nd hamida cm hm... Dey saw how peacefully kiara ws playin wd her... Nd jalal adoring dem... Hamida knocked d door nd said" u both wd mk grt parents"... This sentence md d lv birds aware of dere presence... Nd jodha ws damm embarrassed listening to hamida said nd jalal ws giving her his o so sexy smirk... Jo gt up nd touched hamida's feet nd took her blessing... Dn she bid farewell nd wnt to her hm cz it ws quite late...


NXT MORNING IN CLG:-


as soon as joja entered d clg... Ruku nd mirza shouted wd happiness... Joja ws soo scared... Jalal asked ruqu"oye i know ur a cock bt stop givin me proofs time nd again ".. To wich ruku gv him deathly glares... Mirza cm nd said" guys wish me nd ruks,,v are gettin married nd bhaijaan u hv to tlk bout dis to mom".. Joja were sooo happy listening to dis... Ja said" oye i hvnt gt married nd see u, dying to gt married "... Jo" congo ruku nd mirza m sooo happy fr u both"... Moti nd salima nd maan nd abdul started hooting fr dem...


Soon marriage date ws fixed nd d preparations were on full swing... Jo ruku salima nd moti were busy in shopping nd sm ws wd d boys gang...

ON MARRIAGE DAY:-


jo ws in jalal's hm since hamida hd called hr to cm sm time earlier... Nd she lk an obedient daughter obeyed... Hamida called jo in her room... Hamida cm near her nd said " jo beta i know jalal's loves u sooo much... Ur his life... He hs never been close to any grl, cz he feared dat he might nt gv us much attention, his only dream ws taking his dad's business to d top nd he did so... He has been an obedient son, brother, friend bt now i want to see him as a responsible husbsnd nd i know only u r d one who cn complete him"...she gv her a lavish box nd said" jo dis is our ancestral dress, its gvn to d wd-be- daughter in-law... Now dis is urs, i want to to wear it on ur wd be brother in-law's wedding... "... Sayin so she gv her a bfull smile full of lv...

Jo ws speechless... She hd tears in her eyes... She hd never experienced motherly lv... Hamida saw dis nd hugged her tightly nd said" y is my daughter cryin... Wanna mk ur mother cry too"... Jo hugged her more tightly nd started sobbing... Nd in bw her sobs said " i lv u mom... I. I. Lv u..."..

Today jo felt lk her life cd be no more better...


AFTER SM TIME (IN JALAL'S ROOM) :


jo ws trying to pin up d saree... D saree ws d mst bfull one she hd ever seen... It ws a heavy one... Gracefull nd seemed lk it ws md fr a princess... She ws nt used to such clothes... Bt she wanted to fulfil her mother's wish... She hd worn d skirt nd d blouse bt ws nt able to wear d main covering... She tried soo much bt in vain nd almost md a baby face... Unknown to d fact dat a pair of intense eyes were watching her... Jalal ws bout to call her jo, wen he saw her cute antics nd stood dere silently admiring het lil baby grl nd thanking his destiny... Jo turned bak nd saw jalal ws smiling, she ws already pissed off nd said "ya ya u laugh on me... U boys are soo lucky.. No problems lk wearing such clothes, managing such long hairs nd dat mnthly peri... Suddenly she stopped, realising wat she was gonna say... Bt tp her horror, his clever boy hd already understood wat she ws gonna say... Jo ws hell embarrassed nd hided herself in his chest... Jalal hugged him, kissing her forehead... Jo suddenly moved back nd said"see u md me late jalal, i hv to wear dis saree also, now help me in dat"... Jalal cm close to her, took d saree nd began tying as she said... In bw he started massaging her soft back... Leaving soft kisses dere... Jo felt ticklish nd started giggling... Dn after a lot of difficulty, both were successful in doing d herculean task... Jo ws lukin breathtaking... Het flawless peach skin, with dose kohlic hazel brown orbs shinning lk pearls nd her rosy lips... D saree ws complementing her beauty displaying her cleavage nd waist... She looked lk a perfct queen... Whereas jalal.. Uff. Ws lukin soo hot... His charp chisel features wd dat soft skin wd a bit of french touch... Both demselves were lukin lk d bride nd d groom...


AFTER D MARRIAGE WS OVER:-



people were havin dere food.. Sm were dancing nd enjoying demselves... Wen suddenly dey heard an announcement... It ws none oder dan jalal... Everyone including jo gathered dere... He said"hi everyone... Hp ur enjoying urselves... M vry happy dat my lil naught bro is married nd now i wd lk u all to know dat evn i hv fallen in lv, i wd lk to share my happiness wd all of u, "... He cm down d stage near jo, bent on his knees nd said" miss jodha singhania i hv a probem dese days.. I m nt able to sleep, eat or think... Nd only u cn gt me over diss...may dis prob remain wd my till my grave, so MISS JODHA SINGHANIA WILL U BCM MRS JODHA JALALUDDIN MUHAMMED... "

Precap: YES..😳... nooo😡...



DONE GUYS... BELIEVE ME I WROTE DIS CHAPPY CS I PROMISED MY HEMU DII(RAJAT LOVER) TO GV UPDATE AS SOON AS SHE WILL UPDATE HER CHAPPY... NO PROOF READING HS BEEN DN(HV SM MERCY ON UR LIL SIS😳)... IF U LKD D CHAPPY... PLZ HIT A LK ND GV UR PRECIOUS CMNTS... PLZ I WAIT FR DEM... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
me sec
now have 6 chappies to read

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