AKDHA SS : YOUR LOVE MAKE ME ALIVE... PG. 13(KS + important note)

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: avika444
Dont know about others..but i seriously want u to continie this story Hemu .
Would like to read akdha's Romeo and juliet version.

Loved the character sketch
Update chap soon
Thanks for pm

awww thank you so much akka
Thanks for your comments
Glad you like it 🤗

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
Good CS dear. ..
Continue soon...
Nd thanks for pm...

Thanks dear yup I will continue soon
YOU are welcome for pm

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: avishi467
CS s nice Hemaxi di.jo jl love each oder bt dir parents r against.waitng fr chapter.thanx fr pm.di update ur oder stories also

Thanks avi
Glad you like it
And yea I will try hard to Uupdate all

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: cute.ritu
Hey I thought u updated the first chapter
Anyways...good CS
Maina wants Jo to marry with Sharif🤢

Plz don't give this story a sad ending
Thanks for pm
& update first chappy soon

Hey ritu baby don't bevsad
I will update soon next chappy ok
And glad to know u like it

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: ketaki1
this story line reminds me of romeo and juliet ... I love shakespeare and have read all his plays and stories literally a lot...I know you have righten it in starting but yet every time I read the plot it's like I know what can happen next...
I loved the concept and ofcourse I would love to read it from jo-ja point of view...I still hope that you change some bits and make it more unpredictable...
I would love to see how you will mold a pre-existing storyline and create something new...
looking forward to it...

Thanks k2 DARLING GLAD you like it
But I am little doubt that I am really really create it or not
But I will try hard to give it best
Love you lot
And comment too

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: mickeymini
Too wonderful character sketch dear
U description for each character is too depth
Shocking was he loved shivani first but later on
That changed to jodha
Anyway it's too awesome
I mean the disclaimer are jodha jalal going to die ??
Lots of characters in the chappy
Continue soon buddy

Thanks monica
Glad you like it
And yea so many character are there
Yup dear unfortunately this story have not happy ending
But I tried hard to not up set you all 😭 😭

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: misty22
Bfulll...cnt imagine such a truelv story...gosb our flirty ja ..ist shivani dn jo...bt i know he s serious fr jo...both fall in lv supaa...the intro ws a blast ...diii joja gonna die ...plz noo dont mk dem die...i ll do in shock...i m jst in lv wd ur writing...plzzz update asap...lv u

Thanks misty baby for such lovely comments
Yup they have to die na
What to do 😭