NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: lashy
And yes I could never imagine Khan Sahib asking Durga
'How do you achieve all this?'😆
or saying 'Jaroor baisa...'

She would have snubbed him from the first meeting... and he wouldn't have given her a second glance😆after that

In fact, because she can swim well... I suspect Khan Sahib wouldn't have even bothered helping her out at the canal😆

lash ur last sentence on swimming well reminded me of JA blunder... 😆 where we have jo saving Rahim when he accidentally falls into d palace pond while jo was chasing him for d flute and dn we have jo's attempt to suicide where she cant swim in d waters and we have jallu d savior coming and saving her.. 😆 I know I may sound irrelevant but I dotn know dats wat cliked me while reading d last line... 😆

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: lashy

Ille adhu summa namma superstar style 😆

actually wait.. there is a small reason... but err.. will sort of realise later I guess...

🤣 Okay now it sounds more interesting!! I meant the super star style. 😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Dear Shagun and Monu,
Your conversation brought back old memories..

A song from the musical film, "The Sound of Music"

"You are sixteen going on seventeen...",

Mine with a slight modification goes:
Me:
"You are fourteen going on fifteen, babies, it's time to think
Better beware, canny and careful, babies, you are on the brink,
You'll be fifteen, soon going on sixteen, fellows will fall in line..
Eager young lads and roues and cads will offer you food and wine
Totally unprepared are you to face the world of men
Timid and shy and scared are you ,of things beyond your ken."

Shagun and Moni:
"We are fourteen going on fifteen, we know that we are naive,
Fellows we meet may tell us we're sweet, and willingly we may believe
We are fourteen going on fifteen, innocent as the rose,
Bachelor dandies, drinkers of brandies, what do we know of those
Totally unprepared we are to face the world of men
Timid and shy, scared are we, of things beyond our ken
We need someone older and wiser, telling us what to do,
Aunty, you are older and also wiser, we pay heed to you.."

Me:
" I am your guardian, a grandma who'(ha)s seen the world,
Be very shrewd , always alert and bold, like Lashy's sixteen year old !"

Saraswathi Aunty.

P.S. Pl. listen to this melodious song on YT.

What a beautiful poem ... perfectly suited the situation here... with the girls.. and love how you've brought your own twist to it, periyamma... you must be such an avid reader and have such an amazing memory if you can think up these poems and phrases then and there!👏

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: harshu27

lash ur last sentence on swimming well reminded me of JA blunder... 😆 where we have jo saving Rahim when he accidentally falls into d palace pond while jo was chasing him for d flute and dn we have jo's attempt to suicide where she cant swim in d waters and we have jallu d savior coming and saving her.. 😆 I know I may sound irrelevant but I dotn know dats wat cliked me while reading d last line... 😆

She learnt swimming in between 🤣🤣🤣 who taught is big question!!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: harshu27

lash ur last sentence on swimming well reminded me of JA blunder... 😆 where we have jo saving Rahim when he accidentally falls into d palace pond while jo was chasing him for d flute and dn we have jo's attempt to suicide where she cant swim in d waters and we have jallu d savior coming and saving her.. 😆 I know I may sound irrelevant but I dotn know dats wat cliked me while reading d last line... 😆

After a while, JA had more bloopers in it than we could even keep count of

@ Chellam.. 😛 mention of superstar made it interesting, haan?

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Akbar and Durga is more like Fire and Fire!! 😲😲 If they happened to be met.. then there should be definitely explosion of fireworks!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Lashy di,

Thanks a ton for the awesome-est replies🤗

Oh God, hidden reasons for not eating the food too!😲😆

Thanks for the clarification reg. how chachajaan knew of Durga's death.

Now,I understood why he was rude to her thanks..unwilling(afraid😉) to start a cordial conversation.But,HE was the one to start it,later😆

Reg.Khalil's sword on my neck..I would definitely want Khan Sahib for my rescue😉,why to trouble old man,Ustaad😆

I'm so happy that you loved my comments😃

Edited by .AkDhian. - 9 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
 She learnt swimming in between 🤣🤣🤣who taught is big question!!

dn it should b secret teaching from jallu on how to swim but dn only for outsiders it should look like she couldn't swim and jallu would come as a savior...a total filmy ishtyle... 🤣

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: lashy

Oh la la girl... you always say this.. and then disappear... and then come back after 2 chapters 😒

not this time...tomorrow will surely post comments...as it is I m planning to disappear from thursday to sunday...

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

not this time...tomorrow will surely post comments...as it is I m planning to disappear from thursday to sunday...

mini vacation...?